manveer ss:phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu CHAPPY:23 PG:90 - Page 64

update plz update soon !

Originally posted by: swetsurati

swini meri maa ab bas bhi kar aur update...karne ka kasht karde...

oyee Surati maa bana diya abhi toh main jawaan ho yaar:pjaa kasht karliya.nahi seriously adha karliya.aj raat ko adha ho jayega:)

Originally posted by: mandy61

update plz update soon !

i will update tonight.

tonight means tonight :P in ur case it always becomes tomorrow night 😆

Originally posted by: rocker12

tonight means tonight :P in ur case it always becomes tomorrow night 😆

cont soon will be waiting :)

hehe so true.ok tonight pakka...:p

Originally posted by: Swini01

oyee Surati maa bana diya abhi toh main jawaan ho yaar:pjaa kasht karliya.nahi seriously adha karliya.aj raat ko adha ho jayega:)

i know dear abhi to tu jawan hai to to kya jawan log maa nahi ho sakti aur tune bicare uday aur manyata ko t years ki bachhi ka maa baap bana diya woh kuch nahi kya...ekta kapoor kahin ki...aur aaj kal tu update karne me bahot der laga rahi hai jab tu next hp. Update karti hai me pichhla wala bhul bhi jati hu sooo...plzzz...update soon.

Originally posted by: swetsurati

i know dear abhi to tu jawan hai to to kya jawan log maa nahi ho sakti aur tune bicare uday aur manyata ko t years ki bachhi ka maa baap bana diya woh kuch nahi kya...ekta kapoor kahin ki...aur aaj kal tu update karne me bahot der laga rahi hai jab tu next hp. Update karti hai me pichhla wala bhul bhi jati hu sooo...plzzz...update soon.

hawww jada boli na toh Ekta Kapoor ki tarah J seh Uv ki shadi karwa doongi no just kidding.already uxke liye Ekta ko jootey n Chappals mar chuki ho.n jawan matla abhi toh main 16 ki dikhti ho hmm:pn meri update bhool jati hai tu ha keun ok fine drama band.main bhi apni chapters bhool jati ho.n even mainey apna jo adha kam kiya na uska toh behaal ho gaya.mainwy apni ek ff ke sath uss chappy ko milwa diya.n phir jab edit karney gayi toh pura ka pura khatam:(but no prob main aj update karoongi karoongi hehehe:p

~~CHAPP-22{PART-2}~~
Maya call cut karti hai.
A:oho itna gusa.Second Manyta banna hai kya?
M:shut up u bas***d.
A:oyee nagin apna muh samhal.budhi hogayi hai aur phir bhi.abbey mujhey keun
but suddenly Maya ka call ata hai.Maya call ko uthati hai.
M:hello..
Ek girl bolti hai.
G:nani when will u come?
M:soon beta soon.
G:no nani abhi aoo.
M:but...
G:nani..
M:ok Vinisha main abhi arahi ho.
V:good jaldi aoo.
Call cut
A:yaar yeh tumhari poti hot hai kya.
Maya Akash ki taraf dekhta hai.
A:oops budhi apko bura laga kya?sorry vasai kabhi humse bhi milwa dena.
Maya usse ignore karkey chali jati hai.
IN HOSPITAL
Uv:doctor abhi tak ayi keun nahi.
V:Uv bohout traffic hai shayat issiliye.Vo bohout mashoor doctor hai.tum chinta mat karo.Roshni ko kuch nahi hoga.lo agayi doctor Swinipriya(dekha dekha i m a doctor:p)
V:doctor
Doc.SP:ap fikaar mat kijiye i will try my best.nurse is everything ready for the operation.
N:yes doctor.
D.SP:ok lets go...
N vo dono chaley jatey hai.
M bass chup chap baithi hai vo kuch bhi nahi bol rahi hai.
N phir Uv uski pass jakey baithta hai.n M hugged Uv tightly.n said
M:Uv Roshni ko kuch hoga toh nahi na.
Uv:no princess.
M:agar vo bhi Uvika n Mayank ki tarah
yeh sunkey Uv bhi dar jata hai.vo M ko aur tightly hug karta hai.M ko pata hai ki uski baat seh Uv bhi darr gaya hai.so she said
M:aisa nahi hoga na Uv.Roshni thike ho jayegi na.
Uv:h..h..ha princess ussey kuch nahi hoga.Vo jaldi thike ho jayegi.
After some time
N:we need some blood.yuvraaj sa pliz come with us...
Uv:hmmm
n vo hug break kzrt hai.
Uv:princes hum abhi atey hai.
M nodded n vo chala jata hai.
**********
In Maya's house
V:nani mujhey jana parega.
M:but kaha?
V(in mind):agar nani ko boldiya ki meri friend hospital main hai aur mujhey jana hai toh vo pakka mujhey nahi janey degi.so jhooth hi bol deti ho.
V:ummm nani actually mujhey Sali(Saloni)n Je(Jeniya) keh sath shoping jana hai.
M:but..
V:ok ok bye...
Aur vo chali jati hai.
*********
IN HOSPITAL
N:yuvraaj sa agar app issey bhi jada blood dengi toh appko khatra ho sakta hai.
Uv:mujhey meri beti ki jaan ki jada parwah hai.app apna kam kijiye.
Nurse to other nurse
N:tum cheak karo ki "AB"negative aya ki nahi.
N2:hmmm...
After some time
N:yuvraaj sa app abhi bass kijiye humney group "AB"nagetive mil gaya hai.kisi aur ne de diya.
Uv:ok but kisney?
N:vo waha bahar hai.app rest kijiye.
Uv:nahi hum thike hai.(Uv:hum rajwadey hai nurse hummey thakan nahi hoti:p)
n Uv bahar jata hai aur vo insaan ka back side tha.
Uv:excuse me.
Toh vo insaan Uv ki taraf dekhta hai.vo Vinisha thi.
V:jee..
Uv ko kuch alaag feel hota hai but he ignore it.
Uv:thanks apney meri beti ko blood diya.
V:oh iski koi jarrorat nahi.acha abhi main jati hoo.
N vo chali jati hai.
After 2 hours
Uv n M baithey huye hai aur Vj bhi toh tabhi doctor ati hai.
Uv:doctor kya huya?
M:Roshni ko kuch nahi huya na?vo thike toh haina?
D.SP:yuvraaj aur yivrani sa ap khud ko sabhaliye.Roshni abhi DANGER seh bahar hai.
Vj:thank god..
D.SP:but..
Uv:kya doctor?(arey aisey mat bolo main gana shuru kardungi"oh boy u mine"hehe).
D.SP:agar ussey 12hours main hosh nahi aya toh hum kuch nahi keh saktey.I m sorry.
UPDATING

lovely updade swini 😃...aur ye kya tm ko ab character sketch me ghus gai doctor bn ke tumhari kabliyat pe mujhe pora barosa hai tm kabi b uv ki beti ko kuch ni honay do gi aur ye vinisha roshni ki dost hai aur usi ki dusman maya ki poti ...is their any new twist waiting 4 us...and m w8ing 4 next part jaldi kro