manveer ss:phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu CHAPPY:23 PG:90 - Page 5

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Posted: 13 years ago
#41
waooo...swini...i read ur SS on manveer..n its awsum...plzzz do continue soon...n plzzz PM me..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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TANVI:thanks yaar.i will cont soon.

LILYBABES:thanks sweetheart.yeah J kabhi nahi sudrehgi.btw what is ur name yaar?

SIRJI:thanks sirji.i will cont soon yaar n will surely pm u.

LOVE U ALL YAAR.thanks for such lovely comments.LOVE U LOVe U n LOVE U guys.
Edited by Swini01 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
AMIBAIJU:thanks yaar.i will cont soon.

FIZZA:thanks sweetheart i will cont soon.

NIA:Oh toh meri fever ki maharani neh finaly comment kar liya.vasai abhi tak tu bed pehi haina.itna chota comment keun diya aur bara dena.fever apne app chala jayega my lil sis oops sry daravni chural.next time bara comment samjhi.
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Thanks a lot FIZZA n AMIBAIJU.Thanks for ur precious comments yaar.LOVE U VERY VERY MUCH.n NIA chrail I HATE U.
Edited by Swini01 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
PART 5
after some time in M's room
U:hey M.
M:Vj bhai,U tumlo yaha.
U:keun hum yaha nahi asakte.
M:nahi aisi baat nahi hain.
V:uffo jaisi bhi baat ho lekin M hum yaha kuch kam se aye the.
M:kya kam?
U:wo kam yeh hai ki aj humme shoping jana hai tumhare sath.
M:nahi U mera mann nahi hai.
U:uffo M c'mon yaar kitne time ho gaye hum shoping nahi gaye aur tum ho ki.
V:rehne doon U.vo nahi chalegi.so Uv neh sach hi kaha tha.
M:1minute yeh Uv bich main kaha seh agaya.
U:vo actually kya hai na M dada neh kaha tha ki jo kuch vi ho raha hai tum usse kush nahi ho issliye tum shoping nahi chalogi.
V:aur vo shayat sahi kehraha hai.
M:nahi m..main khush hoon.
V:toh humare sath akey yeh proof karo.
U:haan Vj bhai bilkul sahi keh rahe hai proof toh karo.
M:haan main arahi hoon jao.aur main khush hoo samjhi yeh baat apni bhai seh kehdena.
V:tum khud hi keun nahi kehti usse after all vo bhi toh humare sath shoping araha hai.
M:kya?
V/U:haan.
M:tum logo ne yeh pehle keun nahi kaha?
V/U:yeh baat dimaag main hi nahi ayi.aur tum abh yeh mat kehna ki tum shoping nahi jaoogi.kahi tum...
M(interrupt):tum logo ko toh sirf ek maouka chahiye.Aur ha main chaloongi.
Vj:acha thik hain abhi hum chalte hai actually abhi humme kuch kaam hai.tum log baat karo.
n Vj bhai chale jate hai.aur bahar jake Uv ko message bhejte hai
V:plan successful.
Uv:great.
V:abh agey kya karna hai?
Uv:jaise plan kiya tha vasai.
V:so sab kuch tayiyar ho gaya
Uv:bass aj sham tak ho jayega.vasai U ko bolna ki vo M ko vo red vali dress pehnne keh liye bole jo humne usse gift kiya tha.
V:yes sir.
aur phir vo U ko message karta hai.
V:U sweetheart M ko usske hero ki gift kiye huye dress ko pehenne keh liye force karo.aur shuru karo apna chot peh salt chirak neh ka kaam.
U:ok bhai.
In M's room
U:chalo M hum tumhe dress chunne neh main help karte hai.
M:thanks yaar.
U:hmm M tum ek kaam karo vo jo tumhari red vali salwaar suit hai vo pehenlo.
M:umm nahi U main vo blue vala pehen leti hoon.
U:nahi M pliz pliz pluz.
M:thik hai.
aur vo red vala pehen leti hai.
U:wow M tum toh bohout khubsurat lag rahi ho aj toh lagta hai ki bhai ki nazar tum seh haatne nahi vali keun.
aur vo M ki reactions dekhti hai
U:oh i m sry M pata nahi kaise humare muuh seh yeh baat nikal gayi i m sry.
M:its..its ok U.
U(in mind):hmm U tum toh kafi achi acting kar leti hoon.akhir tumne aag laga hi di.
U:abh chale M .
M:itni jalt
U:haan vo actually bhai aur Vj bhai baha wait kar rahe honge.
M:thik hain chalo.
n they leaves
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ok this is the end of my chapter 5.Hope u like it.N i m sry for the late n short update.main part 6 already likh rahi hoon.aj sham tak ho jayega.N GUYS PLIZ PLIZ PLIZ PRESS THE LIKE BUTTON N DO COMMENT IF U LIKE IT.mujhe pata hai ki mera yeh part bohout bura tha lekin main next part acha likne ki koshish karoongi.


Edited by Swini01 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
Where is prt 5??you've just posted da title
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: mystic.charm

Where is prt 5??you've just posted da title

she'll post in sumtym...wait...😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
I m sorry its just that i'm really desperate to read da nxt prt plz forgive me for being impatient :-(
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: mystic.charm

I m sorry its just that i'm really desperate to read da nxt prt plz forgive me for being impatient :-(

how cute...sabar...sabar ka pal mitha hota hai...😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49
Hi dear...where r u???already missing u for your updates!!!pleaseee update soon yaar...as u know nothing's good going in real DEK so atleast have some fun after reading your post...because I like manyata in your story unlike real DEK...so please update soon... 😭 😭 😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
#50
nyc one hoping for sum manveer scenes in future

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