manveer ss:phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu CHAPPY:23 PG:90 - Page 6

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Posted: 13 years ago
#51
Nice update 😊
Really eager to find out what Uday has planned. Update soon!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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how cute...luv unnati n vijay bhai's jodi...every where...dey r really angels in making manveer happen...n after waiting 4 such a long tym itni chotti si chocolte...😭...manveer is lyk a chocolate to e...as i just luv chocolates...soo as i m greedy 4 chocolatesz as 4 manveer...soo hope da next part is extremely long wid lots of romance...n will be updated soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#53
good one Swini continue soon...!!!😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: sirjee

how cute...luv unnati n vijay bhai's jodi...every where...dey r really angels in making manveer happen...n after waiting 4 such a long tym itni chotti si chocolte...😭...manveer is lyk a chocolate to e...as i just luv chocolates...soo as i m greedy 4 chocolatesz as 4 manveer...soo hope da next part is extremely long wid lots of romance...n will be updated soon...




Sry yaar but kya karo agar abhi bari choolate tum kha logi toh phir toh bat main choti seh kaam chalana parega.keunki agar tum 2hi bari chocolate kha logi toh tum moti ho jaogi na.after all meri chocolates sugar free nahi hai na.
Edited by Swini01 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#55
love this yaar👏👏👏👏👏
plz update further
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: Swini01




Sry yaar but kya karo agar abhi bari choolate tum kha logi toh phir toh bat main choti seh kaam chalana parega.keunki agar tum 2hi bari chocolate kha logi toh tum moti ho jaogi na.after all meri chocolates sugar free nahi hai na.

nahi main moti nahi hoti...hahhahahhahah...laughing in priyal style wid wink..hahahahhah
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Posted: 13 years ago
#57
Very nice update...hope vijay & unnati's plan works...please update soon dear...thanks for PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#58
PART 6
U:toh chalo.
M:ok par sab kaha hai?
U:arey vo bhai aur Vj banna humara mall main hi wait kar rahe hai.
m:ok toh chalo.
aur vo 2no ek sath chale jate hai.
IN MALL
V:kaha reh gayi yeh 2no
Uv:Vj banna relax.
V:nahi yaar unlogo ko abhi ajana chahiye tha.
Uv:Vj banna vo ajayenge.
V:haan lo voh agaye.
aur Uv peeche murte hi M ko apne samne pata hai.aur vo M ko aur M usse dekhti hai.little eyecontact.aur phir Uv bolta hai.
Uv:tum jab yeh pehenti hoon toh bohout khubsurat lagti hoon.
aur yeh sunke M blush karti hai aur V apna paer se Uv keh paer main kick marta hai.
Uv:ah...
M:kya huya?
Uv:kuch nahi.haan toh main yeh keh raha ho ki tum jab yeh pehenti ho toh bohout cute lagti hoon.
V n U r shock n M again blushing.
Uv:choti.
U:kya?
Uv:haan choti tum iss dress main kafi cute lagti hoon.
M's eyes wide open n U n V r giggling
U:thanks dada.
[FLASHBACK]
Uv:princess tumne humme promise kiya tha.
M:mujhe toh yaad nahi hai.
Uv:yeh natak bant karo princess humain bass humari gift chahiye aur kuch nahi.
M:yeh tumhe bilkul nahi mil sakti.
Uv:acha toh thik hai hum chalte hai.aur ab hum tumse baat nahi karenge.
Ur vo janehi lagta hai ki M usse bulati hai.
M:Uv ruko.ek baar meri baat toh sunno.
Uv(with smile):haan toh bolo.
M:uv vo
Uv:hum toh kabse tayiyar hai humare kiss ke liye.
M:haan pata hai
aur vo Uv k close jata hai
Uv apni ankhe close karta hai
M:Uv...
Uv:hmm..
M:pliz..
Uv(whisper):kya princess.
M:mujhe vo book chahiye.
Uv's eyes wide open
Uv:what?
M:book...
[FLASHBACK END]
U:M kaha kho gayi?
M:kuch nahi...
U:ok toh hum vaha chale?
M:haan chalo.
aur vo dono chale jate hai.
V:Uv agg lag chuki hai.
Uv(evil smirk):ab bass dhuya uthna baki hai.
n vo dono bhi vaha jate hai.
U:M dekho yeh kitni pyari haina.
M:haan U yeh toh bohout acha hai.
Uv ek saari M keh liye pasant karta hai.aur vo yeh leke U,M aur Vj keh pass ata hai.
Uv:lekin sabse khubsurat toh yeh hai.
M:wow...
U:itz awesome.nice choice bhai.
Uv:thanks.
Aur vo M ki taraf dekh ke bolti hai.
Uv:toh iss main lagi gi na humari princess bilkul angel jaisi.
M again blushing.
V:uffo yeh Uv bhi na apni feelings control hi nahi kar pata.
U:Vj banna abhi hume toh kuch aur hi nazar a raha hai ab bass dekhiye.
M:Uv...
Uv:keun Manayata lagi gi na vo?
M:kya?
Uv:haan humari hone wali maharani J vo yeh pehenke bilkul angel jaisi lagi gi naa.
M:tum J ki baat kar rahe the.
Uv:aur kisski.1minute kahi tum yeh toh nahi soch rahi hona ki hum tumhari baat kar rahe the.
M(with angry tone):nahi aisa kuch nahi hai.
(in mind)angel yeah right.kabhi toh nahi dekha kissi churail ko angel lagte huye.aur yeh mere samne usski tareef kar raha hai.stop it M.tumhe pata bhi hai tum kya soch rahi ho?vo usska fiance banne ja raha hai.aj unka engagement hai.toh vo uski tareef toh karega na.magar unki toh abhi tak engagement huye bhi nahi toh vo toh abtak mera fiance haina.uffo M tu bhi na tu neh khud hi toh yeh engagement torr diya tha.toh abhi haq bhi jatana bant karr.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#59
Hey great update Swini...!!! It's so good how you showed Manyata's feelings...!! Continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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V:UFFO m bhai tum baar baar kaha kho jati ho.
Uv:lagta hai princess kuch gehri soch main hai.
M:nahi.main kahiki bhi nahi hoon.i mean gehri soch main nahi hoon.
U:hey M shanti yeh 2no toh tumhe bass aise hi chirah rahey the.
V:haan M bhai.
M:thik hai thik hai.vasai U hum yaha kya sirf tumhare bhai aur uski hone vali fiance keh liye ayey hai nahin na.toh abhi hum kuch apne liye bhi dekh lete hai.
U,Vj Uv ki taraf dekhta hai aur Uv unne 'I M ThE BEST'vala look deta hai.
U:pata hai M agar hum yeh baat tumhare muhhse na sunke kissi aur seh sunte na toh to humme pakka shak hota ki vo jealouse hai.
M:kya?
U:matlab humne tumhe nahi kaha hum toh baki larkiun ki baare main baat kar rahe hai.
M:toh phir thik hai.
U:acha yeh green vala kaisa hai.
M:bura nahi hai but acha bhi nahi hai.
Uv:acha aplog baat kijiye hum watches wagera dekh atey hai.
aur vo chala jata hai.
V:keun tum logo nahi lagta ki Uv aur J sirf ek dusre keh liye bane hai
U:yeah humme toh aisa hi lagta hai keun M?
M(whisper)bilkul nahi.
U:kya?
M:kuch nahi.
(FLASHBACK)
Uv:kya tum book ki baat kar rahi ho.
M:han aur siri vaha hai.
Uv:theke jaise app ki marji.
aur vo siri par char jata hai book lane keh liye
Uv:princess yeh vali.
M:haan yehi.
aur vo yeh book lene hi jata hai ki siri hilne lagti hai aur vo gir jata hai.
M:Uv.
Uv(with pain)aha..
M:tum thik toh hona.
Uv:haan hum thik hai.lekin bohout dart ho raha hai princess.
M:kaha?
Uv apni forhead pakarta hai.
Uv:yaha.
aur M usse vaha kiss karti hai.
M:aur kaha.
Uv phir chiks dekhata hai.
Uv:yaha.
aur M usse usske chikpe karti hai.aur phir 2no ankho pein n chin pein.
M:ab bolloaur kaha kaha pain ho raha hai.
n they both laugh
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