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Posted: 13 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: Amibaiju

Wow...nice one but can't wait for next part please update soon!!!!!


thanks n i will cont soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: AKlover101

I loved the start!!! Do continue soon n plzzz pm me when u update!!:)


thanks i will cont soon n surely pm u when i update.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#13
PART 2
Uv:wow princess tum to kafi romantic nikli.
M:ab itni time tumhare sath hoon toh thora asar toh parega na.
Uv:yeah right.Ab humara kiss.
M:oh to yehlo.
M Uv ko kiss karnehi jata hai ki achanak
V:ahem ahem yeh sab kuch tum dono apne sohagrat ki liye baki rakho.keunki humare point se yeh hum sath sath vala palace hey koi the dirty picture vala ya mera pehla pyar vala nahi.so kuch toh sharam karo ya phir door lock karke jo karna hai karo hum sabko bol denge ki tum dono ek room mein band ho aur habi kho gayi.lekin chup hup k karona.
Uv n M uncomfortable feel karte hai.
M:yukkk..Vijay bhai ap bhi na.mein aur Uv toh bas baat kar rahethe.apko bas ek mauka chahiye logo ki tang kichne ka haina.
Uv:kabab mein haddi.kya Vijay banna ap thor time bat nahi a sakte the.
V:oh i m sry sweetheart.
Uv:its ok agar ap abhi gaye toh.
V:oh really par abhi hum to nahi jarahe hai sirf tum ja raheho.
Uv:kya matlab?
V:matlab bahar mamisa nai tumhe bulaya hai.
Uv:kya?Sab ko bhi aj hi humme bulana tha.anyways lets go princess.
V:oh again sry par tum humare bhai ko nahi le jasakte.keunki humme humare bhai se baat karni hai.
Uv:kya Vjay banna ap bhi na.kher jalt jalt baat khatam kijiye.hum tumhara bahar intezer karenge princess.
M:intezer karne kiliye pehle jana bhi jarrori hai.tum wait karo mein ati hoo.
aur Uv chala jata hai.
V:M bhai yeh jo bhi ho raha haina aha nahi ho raha hai .
M:mujhe pata hai Vj bhai aur bohout sochne k baat hi maine yeh faisla liya hai.
V:oh to tumne yeh soh liya.
M:haan Vj bhai.
V:lekin kya tumne Uv ke bare mein socha.yeh socha ki jab usse sachai ka pata chalega toh usse kaisa lagega.
M:Uv ka kuch nahi hoga Vj bhai.vo kuch time k bat apne ap agei bar jayega.
V:aur tum.
M:mera kuch nahi Vj bhai
V:toh ab jab tumne faisla karliya hai toh hum bhi kisiko baatakar apna promise nahi torenge.aur nahi tumhe rokenge.lekin ha tumhara yeh faisla thik nahi hai.yeh pore garh ko hila dalega M bhai.
M:mujhe pata hai Vj bhai.lekin apko bhi toh pata haina ki agar main aisa nahi karoongi toh shayat humme isse bhi bore halat dekhne parenge.
V:pata hai.aur tumhe bhi yeh pata hai ki Uv tumse bohout pyar karta hai.vo tumhare bina nahi jeen sakta.vo toh jite jeen mar hi jayega.tout jayega vo.uska pyar sacha hai Manayata uska pyar sacha hai.aur yeh tumne tumhare rajyaabhishekh ki time par samajh liya tha.uski jindagi tum ho.
M:pata hain.aur yeh bhi ki agar hum dono ka pyar sacha hai toh hum mousibat se bhi bahar ajayenge.
V:toh tumne uss papers par Uv ke sign liye?
M:han aur Uv ko shak bhi nahi huya.
V:ok toh isse kisi safe jage rakhlo.
M:haan aur Vj bhai kya ap ajse 3din bat yeh letter Uv ko dedenge.keunki kya pata deh paou aya nahi?
aur phir Vj vo letter leta hai n vo 2no hug karte hai.
PRECAP:Uv:princess akhir humse kya chupa rahi hai?jarror vo kisi problem mein hai humme pata lagana hi parega.
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Ok guys thats for 2day.hope u like it.pliz press the like button n comments pliz.n sry if i waste ur time.


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Posted: 13 years ago
#14
woahhh...gr8888...plzz do continue soon...as i want to know wat was in da papers...n wat manyata is bout to do...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#15
Whoa!! All suspenseful! Can't wait to see whats cooking in M's mind..

Simran :D...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#16
Woowww...suspense!!!!it kills me please do update soon...neway nice one...
dekhaekUv thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#17
Thanku guys for all of ur precious comment.i will cont soon.but aj nahi kar paooungi.anyways.
PROMO:V:humme toh lagta hai ki M bhai palace main hi koi usse mila huya hai.
M:kya lekin aisa kaise ho sakta hai?
V:aisa hi huya hai.btw tum kuch bolni ke liye humme yaha bulaya tha.
M:haan Vj bhai vo mujhe lagta hai Uv ko shak ho gaya hai.
V:toh Uv ne papers dekhliye hai?
M:nahi agar vo papers dekhlega toh bohout problem ho jayegi.
achanak koi in dono ki bich mein koi larki ake bolta hai.
Girl:kounse papers?
Toh kya hai iss papers mein?keun thi vo larki?kya vo Vj aur M ka plan jan payigi.kya hone vala kuch din baat?n sabse last mein kya hai yeh M ki past se jorih?
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Ok guys yeh promo tha.keunki mein kuch time tak update nahi kar paungi.lekin mein jalt se jalt update karne ki koshish karoongi.n thanks guys for all ur comments.n pliz pliz do comment.
SANAYA


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Posted: 13 years ago
#18
Hey nice one Sanaya cont soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#19
Hmm promo n precap sound so interesting.cont soon.
dekhaekUv thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: Grenade

Loved it..continue soon :)


thanks btw what ur name?

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