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Posted: 11 years ago
Thxxx for the double update
Awesome parts
Can't explain in words
Really loved it
Loved the all manveer scenes
Loved j nd manyta nd brij convo
Sad that manyta ko holi lagi
But
Seriously
Awesome update
Can't wait for the next update
Plzzz
Update soon
Aur don't take too much time plzzz
Can't wait for the next chap
Thxxx once again for the double update
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow! Double update - AWESOME!!! Immensely interesting. Manveer parts were so romantic 😳, and the drama in the second part felt so real. Incredible writing! Do continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Love love love the updates awesome and who is the dude that's after m
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey sonu. I hope you're doing good? So here i go with my pending comments :D
Part 45 and 46 were totally marvelous and rocking. Loved it to bits. The whole engagement scene was fantastic. Uday is sooo naughty and cute. Love him ad his naughtiness. Rithvic, unnati, vijay, jay, jagat all are amazing also. You should include some parts of them teasing manveer alot. As always i enjoyed al the manveer scenes. The manveer scene in which uday gifts manyata the frame was sooo sweet and so as for the last part of chap 45 where uday starts romancing even in office. He starys wherever and whenever he wants lol cutie. Manyata be soo evil. She took sia's help now lets see how uday wins the challenge. I wonder who is the person with the shawl and the other mysterious boss. I wonder what he/she wants. Aww jay is such a sweetheart. Loved the whole room scene in part 46 esp manveer's phone convo. It was sooo cute and sweet. I hope they find out about the person soon. Coming to last part of the update. It was very nicely written also. Im so in love with you ff
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Posted: 11 years ago
Now coming to part 47 and 48:
Tbh these were my two most favourite updates till now. I thoroughly enjoyed each and every bit. I loved it sooo much. You deserve all the appreciation for this update as everything was written beautifully be it the room scene of manveer before going to the club, the scene in uday's personal suite, jay and manyata's nok jhok, the gunshot or the affection towards manyata shown. Everything was just perfect. I was actually hoping fr manyata to get shot. I had this feeling you'll show something like that. Before that the scene in uday's suite was just wow. Truly enjoyed it. I read it over and over again. Awwee poor manyata got shot. Jay was soo broken. She reallyloves manyata alot so as for others. Even uday was in pain. I hope she gets well soon and uday takes care of her. Btw a small request, can you include some scenes in which manyata makes the forst move and romances him, maybe like to control uday's anger and stuff she kisses him etc.
The updates were the best. Well done sonu. And now please dont take ages to update as i cant wait too see what happens next. Thanks for the pm. Take care
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Posted: 11 years ago
Really wonderful FF,😛 ManVeer is so close to each other ❤️ wonderful Family to support 😊 lovely siblings 😳 above all, a caring, protective and possessive Uday 😳 ❤️ !!!!! thoroughly enjoyed reading 👏 👏 plz continue soon, waiting to see Uday taking care of Manyata 😉
Edited by ParusDivs - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
sry for late comment
the update was cute
omg uday is head verheels in love with manyata
their romace very cute
pls agle baar aur kuch b hone dena😉
omg who wants to kill manyaat
our hero will kill him
pls update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago


J: dr can I meet my sister

Dr kirti: not now first we will shift her into a private room. But for the next 24 hour she will be sleeping as we gave her an injection and after that u all can meet her then

J: please dr we will see her for few minutes and then leave we promise we wont disturb her... dr kirti looked at dr uncle who nodded his head

Doctor saab: ok u all can meet her but please make sure u don't try to wake her up.

All nodded and soon she was shifted into a private room... first mainka and ds went inside to see a sleeping manyata surrounded with few machines and seeing her like this bought tears in their eyes... ds stroked her hair before leaving, after brij and komal came inside... komal and brij felt like hugging manyata tightly but they kissed her on the forehead and left ... after giriraj, unnati and vasu came in unnati was silently crying seeing her friend like this who was sleeping peacefully not know about how others r feeling... After few minutes j and vijay came in and j sat on the seat next to bed and held manyata right hand.

J: wake up soon jiji I cant see u staying quite like this please ur baby sister needs u. vijay put his hand on her shoulder and was looking at manyata.

Vijay: get well soon m bhai and haan I hope ur dreaming about us he said to a sleeping manyata while j smiled a little bit... come j uday needs to come in to see m bhai. J nodded and both left. Uday slowly entered the room he sat down next to her and looked at the machine surrounded around her and then moved his gaze on her left arm he caressed her cheeks he then bent towards her ears and whispered

Uday: you are going to get a lot scolding from me tomorrow princess so be ready... he then kissed her forehead... he glanced at her for the last time and then left from there

The media people were at the hospital but the guards made it sure that none of the media ppl get to meet any of the royals however the media ppl were taking pics as they only could get a glimpse on them only

In a house the stranger entered and saw his boss looking at the news which was showing the royals.

Stranger: boss I shot her on the arm just as u said. He said happily as if he has won an award

Boss: I know u did that's y their faces r like this the boss said looking at the royals faces who was crying and looking sad. This is only the trailer soon I will make their life as hell and continued watching the news where one of the reporter was talking

Reporter: as u have seen yuvrani manyata has been shot at the mall. Though there has been no news about who did this and how it happened. However u can see what state the royals r in. To know more keep watching news channel.

Boss: great job Nandu (stranger) first time u did something right

Stranger: thank u boss

Everyone was outside and was deciding who is going to stay with manyata... unnati decided to stay with manyata as she had a night shift and also dr kirit told her that she is in charge of looking after manyata. Uday wanted to stay but he also had to go with vijay to meet the commissioner to see if anything was found in the cctv... everyone started leaving though they didn't want to leave manyata

Uday: vijay banna u go I will meet u at commissioner uncle office

Vijay: ok... when vijay left uday turned his attention to unnati.

Uday: choti look after manyata and if u need anything do let us know.

Unnati: don't worry dada if I need anything I will call mom or komal aunty.

Uday: I will see u in the morning take care bye

Unnati: bye dada. And with that uday left while unnati went to see her other patients.

At devgarh mansion komal was sitting in her room looking at manyata picture and caressing it while tears were rolling down her face brij came and sat next to her putting his hands around her shoulder... komal rested her head on his shoulder and both were looking at the photo frame

Komal: mahraj it really pained me when I saw all those machine around manyata.

Brij: it did komal, but we should thank god that now she is fine but I will only be able to relax when she wakes up and talks to us. But yes not only manyata we all need to be careful and have a guard around us all the time

Komal: but mahraj y would someone want to harm manyata when she hasn't done anything wrong. Im really worried about her what if again... But brij didn't let her complete

Brij: no komal we have to make sure nothing like this happens again. But im just worried about jai she has been crying all day.

Komal: we have never seen jai like this before but we all know how much she loves manyata. I will just go and see her now... Komal got up from the bed and started walking out of the room when brij called her

Brij: komal

Komal: jee mahraj she said turning around facing him

Brij: have you told sia

Komal: no mahraj u know she is pregnant and I didn't want her to worry as she shouldn't be taking any type of stress. But I will inform daksh and tell him to let sia know when manyata regains conscious.

Brij nodded while komal headed to jai's room and when she reached there she saw mainka and jai was seating on the couch where J was hugging mainka tightly staring into space while mainka was stroking her hair... mainka had noticed komal but j was still in her own world komal went and sat next to j and placed her hand on jai's shoulder... after a min j looked up and without a second went into komal embrace... she was not crying but was very silent which is unlikely of j

Komal: beta ur jiji is fine and do u think she would like to see u like this

J: mom because of me we went shopping and if I didn't give that idea then jiji would have been here with us. Komal looked at mainka

Mainka: bhabhi sa since we came back this is all j has been saying and thinks that she is responsible of j state

Komal: beta u r not responsible of manyata state. Even if it was ur idea of going shopping doesn't mean it was ur fault.

J: mom y did this had to happen to jiji

Komal: beta everyone has this question in their mind but nobody knows the answer expect the person who did this. The scene slowly faded and shifted to commissioner cabin where uday and vijay were

Commissioner: rajkumar vijayendra and yuvraj udaveer we have found something on the cctv... three of them started watching the cctv footage. Uday had this anger in his eyes while watching the footage so did vijay. In the footage they saw manyata coming out and could clearly hear her telling the guard to go and then in sec they could see blood oozing out from manyata arm which made uday's jaw tighten. The commissioner stopped playing the footage

Uday: well the footage clearly shows manyata got shot commissioner saab but looks like u have forgotten that we asked u to check if u find any other proof. he said gritting his teeth

Commissioner: we do yuvraj but before saying anything I would like u to see the other footage. And when he started to play the footage they could see a man standing a bit far away and his back was facing the camera so they could clearly see how he was aiming the gun through the hole made in the file. After when the video stopped playing he showed a pic of how the person was looking as they somehow got a pic from him through a cctv camera. But the problem was he had his face covered with the shawl.

Vijay: by the person body we could tell it was a man who shot manyata. No wonder he didn't get caught in the beginning as he covered his face.

Uday: I swear whoever this person is will burn in hell he said looking at the computer screen

Comssioner: we r still enquiring everyone around that area if they saw that man before because it could be that before entering the mall entrance he hadn't covered his face so there could be a chance of someone seeing him.

It was around 7pm now. Komal and ds had visited the hospital again to see manyata and after seeing her they had left and went back to the mansion while jay had fallen asleep due to all the crying and everyone made it sure not to disturb her. Unnati had finished her duty and was with manyata. She was reading her book but also was looking at manyata every 10 mins and didn't realise when she fell asleep next to manyata... Uday was in his room doing push up his eyes were on the wall anyone could tell he was doing push up for a long time as he was sweating a lot but all that was playing in udays mind was the footage which showed manyata getting shot .

Next day manyata slowly opened her eyes. Due to the sun she closed it for a sec and then opened them again. She looked on her right and could see the machines which clearly told her she was at the hospital she slowly turned her face towards the left when she saw the door opening and komal entering. Komal had big smile on her face though there was tears in her eyes as she was finally happy to see manyata awake. She went towards her and kissed her on the forehead.

Komal: manyata beta how r u feeling now. She said helping manyata sit up and then sat on the chair next to her

Manyata: good. But left arm is paining slightly. But where is j

Komal: j is at home as vijay and mainka are taking care of her

Manyata: taking care of her what happened to j. she said confused and scared at the same time

Komal: nothing happened to her beta its just that since u were in hospital she didn't eat anything and when we all left to go back to the palace she was being stubborn of not eating saying she is not Hungary. So vijay is just making sure she eats right now. And now come u also eat she said cutting the apple in slices

Manyata: ma please I am not Hungary

Komal: beta u have to eat something ur weak due to losing a lot of blood . But manyata was shaking her head as she didn't feel like eating.

Uday entered inside and saw Komal trying to feed manyata who as usual was refusing to eat saying she is not Hungary but both turned their attention to uday. Manyata and Komal smiled back at him but uday only smiled at Komal and went forward and took her blessing

Komal: uday beta now that u r here please make manyata eat as these days she has become really stubborn

Uday: u r right Aunty Komal, manyata has surely become stubborn these days as she feels like doing what she wants he said looking straight into manyata eyes which somehow made her feel nervous. She looked away from him and concentrate on her hands. Komal kissed manyata on the forehead and touched uday's cheeks lovingly before leaving from there... Uday went and sat on the chair near manyata bed and took the plate that Komal kept on the nearby table. Uday had just lifted a piece of Apple when manyata spoke

Manyata: uday I don't want to eat this... But she stopped speaking when uday looked at her sternly and without arguing she took the slice of Apple from his hand and ate it silently. After finishing few pieces of Apple uday gave her orange juice which she found bitter but she couldn't say anything as the great yuvraj uday veer was in the room... Manyata looked at uday from the corner of her eyes and started talking in her head

Manyata mind talk: wonder what has happened to uday y is he giving me this stern look I haven't even done anything to him in fact I got injured myself... And when she realised the incident at the mall out of the blue she asked uday

Manyata: uday i didn't even realise when and how I got shot all I remember is the pain in the arm.

Uday: tell me one thing manyata what was the guard doing? Though he knew the answer he wanted manyata to tell him.

Manyata: erm he went inside. Uday raised his eyebrow

Uday: really but it's their responsibility to stay near the royals and protect them

Manyata: actually uday I had sent the guard inside so that he could go and inform vijay bhai and j that I would be waiting for them outside... But i didn't know anything like this would happen she said trying to justify

Uday: exactly we don't know what could happen. Manyata do u know if u hadn't sent the guard then u probably wouldn't have been shot. He said sternly trying to control his anger

Manyata: how do u know that? She said getting a little annoyed with uday's behaviour

Uday: because when me and vijay banna saw the footage it clearly showed that as soon as the guard moved away from u that person used that opportunity to aim at u. He said through gritted teeth

Manyata: y r u behaving like this I am fine now

Uday: because u don't know what we all went through manyata... Everyone was worried... J the girl who is too strong was crying the most to see u like this. Aunty Komal and uncle brij do u know what they were like no right manyata we all were worried for u. And from now on whether u like it or not u will be having guards around u no matter where u go.
Manyata somehow felt bad here she was getting annoyed at uday's behaviour whereas he was only showing concern.

Manyata: I'm sorry uday I didn't even realise how others would have felt especially j... Sorry I promise I will not tell the guards to go away she said placing her hand on top of uday's. Now at least stop been stubborn as I only like the naughty uday... Manyata bit her tongue when she said that and looked at uday who slowly started smirking

Uday: really... He said moving closer to her... Maybe I should become even naughtier he said winking at her making manyata blush... Soon unnati came to check on manyata and saw uday there

Unnati: sorry dada but u have to leave the room as it's my patients check-up time so please can u she said showing uday the door.

Uday in his mind: there is always someone to disturb us he said shaking his head and left the room.

Manyata took a sigh of relief which unnati noticed

Unnati: what happened did dada say something

Manyata: yes uday had just started on me about yesterday's incident. Trust me unnati I felt like running away though I know he was concerned and so was everyone else. And now your dada has ordered me to have security guard Where ever i go no matter what

Unnati: manyata this is dada love for u. And even u love him.. Manyata looked at unnati

Manyata: how do u know that I mean yes we r engaged but... Somehow she couldn't complete her question

Unnati: confused? Manyata do one thing close your eyes and see who has taken your heart away she said smiling while manayta was looking at her trying to digest all this

Manyata: unnati I'm feeling nervous but don't know y

Unnati: maybe because slowly u have started to realise your feeling... Unnati could see how manyata was feeling with her facial expression so she stopped talking about this... Ok come let me change your bandage for now and then the nurse will come to give u some tablets which will make u fall asleep. Manyata nodded and soon unnati starting changing manyata's bandage and till then the nurse had come and gave her the tablet. After taking the tablets manyata laid down and slowly started falling asleep.

When unnati came out of manyata room along with the nurse uday wanted to go in and stay with manyata when unnati stopped him

Unnati: dada manyata is sleeping right now.

Uday: unnati I have spoken to dr keerti and she said we can take manyata home and look after her over there.

Unnati: ok then I will get her discharge paper ready... sister lovely can u go and change manyat clothes please. The nurse nodded and went back to the room... When she came out uday went inside to find a sleeping manyata... He slowly put her right arm over her neck and slowly lifted her up making sure not to hurt her left arm and as soon as he turned he saw unnati opening the door and brining a wheel chair

Unnati: dada u can place manyata on the wheel chair

Uday: no need chotti I will carry her he said looking at manyata whose head was resting on his shoulder

Unnati: ok plus I have taken a week off so I can also look after manyata too... They soon headed out with guards surrounding them. Uday placed manyata and sat next to her whereas unnati went and sat on the other side of manyata... Manaya head was resting on uday's shoulder and unnati was calling vijay to inform him that they r bringing manyata .
Everyone was happy to see manyata especially j who came running down to see her sister in uday's arm... Uday carried manayta to her room and placed her on the bed covering her with the blanket j came and sat on the other side of the bed. Unnati turned towards Komal

Unnati: Komal aunty I will keep coming to check manyata regularly but also u make sure that she doesn't put much pressure on her left arm

Komal: ok beta.

Unnati: dada shall we leave... Uday didn't want to leave but he also knew
Manyata was sleeping and she did need that rest... Uday and unnati took blessing of the elders and left from there

Vijay: j bhai come let's go manyata bhai is sleeping so we will come back later

Ds: vijay is right beta come

J: no ds this morning I didn't get to see jiji because u told me to meet her later on but since she is here now I won't go until she wakes up

Manika: ma sa let j stay

Ds: k.

Precap: uday was slowly tying the dori (string) of manyata anarkali and through the mirror he could see her breathing had got heavier. After tying her dori (string) he slowly started tracing her back

Hey guys my little devil sister roshu (roshini101) has started writing this ff called Destined to be please do read it as this is her first time writing an ff and the cs and first part is awesome. Please guys do read it as she is really a good writer and do leave ur comments for her and don't forget to press the like button. The link is below for the ff so please do give it a go at reading it

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/dekha-ek-khwaab/4138353/ff-destined-to-be-chapter-14-pg-27-new-update-15-03-15

Ok guys this update is for those who were actually waiting for the next part and I hope I did justice to this part. Also I would like to say thanks to everyone for the lovely comments for the previous parts and also to those who liked it.

Roshu (roshini101) this is a treat for u for passing ur exams and I hope u do like it.

I will be waititng for all ur comments so don't forget to comment and don't forget to press the like button also please don't leave ur post as res

Ps: new reader if u want pm then please do mention it in ur comments also if anyone has changed their name please do let me know so its easy to send pm thank u

Edited by preya_radev - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lol im sure you'll know what i say, the update as always was fabulous.
Loved each and every bit of it. I feel like beating this myterious person black and blue. Stupid moron. I wonder what he wants from manyata and why is soo bitter towards these 2 royal families. The scene between brij and komal was very touching and emotional. Awwee poor jay, i feel so bad for her. Shes so sweet and loving. Lol manyata is soo stubborn but princey is far ahead of her. My favourite part was the scene between manveer. It was very cute especially how uday was concerned about manyata. He loves her soo much and its high time our princess realizes that. Lol loved how manyata claimed she likes naughty uday and uday was back to his normal self. But there was no kiss or romance in the update. I hope unnati was able to knock some sense into manyata. Really want to see their confession. Overall the update was great. Please update the next part soon. Dont make us wait tooo long. And thanks for the treat. Really liked it 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update
j ws such cute baby sister
uday n manyata scen ws nice pahle gusa n then pyar
love it
pls update nxt part as soon as possible
love u

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