Manveer FF : Separate Worlds [Chap 16 - pg 84] - Page 62

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: pia.raha

gr8 update,soo nice to see uday apologisng to her,soo sweeet of the past clge days😊 waitng for mnaveer momentss!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Nice update
loved that tickling scene
it was funny
do continue soon and thanks for the pm

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MsLuscious

Awesome great chapter anjii...i hope manveer get along...every scene was portrayed beautifully...iam glad now you are updating fast :P

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet.tashi

FANTASTIC LOVED IT>>>DO PM ME IF U CAN N UPDATE SOON...U R AWESOME WRITER..!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Jane523

awesome dear...
continue soon

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Posted: 12 years ago

Chapter 16

Manyata sighed "Okk I'll tell the bits I came to know...when I was sixteen , I came to know something about our family's past for the first time from my father . He told me that my grandfather had two best friends since he started school . They did everything together , shared everything , their sorrows as well as happiness . He told me that they both cheated my grandfather when he started his business but failed . The yuvraj of jaigarh , that is Uday's grandfather got murdered but the case was closed and they found that the murderor had comitted suicide . The yuvraj of raigarh just vanished after that . No one heard him after that murder . After a few more bits which i could get from my father I decided to search more . I asked my parents , DS and all the persons I could think of but no one told me , they just told me that it was nothing much , just what my father told me already but somehow I was not satisfied . I searched and found a lot more...'
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Uday "I was busy choti . Business work "
Unnati "dada aap humse Kya chup rahe hain ? Aaj tak kabhi bhi humme bina bataye kahin itne samay tak Nahi Gaye ."
Uday "sorry choti vo hum...manyata..."
Unnati " dada please tell me you didn't plan anything against devgad again "
Uday " well I did choti , I'm sorry but my anger took over me but because of that today I know that devgad is not our enemy "
Unnati " Kya ? Dada please tell me everything from the starting"
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Diya and Vicky looked at manyata.
Manyata "uhmm what happened ?"
Diya "I thought we knew everything about each other " she said accusingly .
Manyata "woo...actually I never got a chance to tell "
Vicky came in between " afterwards yar...abhi aage batao Pehle"
Manyata continued "Haan so I started searching on my own . I got to know nothing from anyone . No one at all was ready to talk about it soo I searched it on Internet . I got a few old news articles saying that the yuvraj of jaigarh was murdered And the yuvraj of Raigarh vanished after that . It was also said that a few days before the murder , the mahasabha had taken away the rights of the Yuvraj and he was no longer the ruler of Raigarh . It said that he ran away with his son who was the supposed heir of the kingdom not wanting to bear the shame and after that no one knew or heard from him . "
Vicky " I feel something is fishy here . Was the murderor related to the yuvraj of jaigarh in any way ? "
Manyata " that's what I felt . He wasn't related to him and That's what uncle Giri thought . He thought that my grandfather had sent him to kill him ...and that's what uday felt too...until" she took a long breath and paused .
Diya " until ?"
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"I kidnapped manyata before her crowning ceremony " uday said
Unnati "what ? Par dada ...ohh no this shouldn't have happened . Now what ?"
Uday " don't worry about that unnati...after that I came to know that devgad wasn't responsible for anything that happened in the past "
Unnati looked at him shocked . " then it was..."
Uday "yes choti you are right..."
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Manyata " until uday found out the truth after he kidnapped me "
Vicky and Diya shocked " whattt ? Kidnapped "
Manyata " yaa so that I don't get the crown...anyways after he kidnapped me he came to know that someone else was following us halfway when he was taking me to an old house . He followed halfway and then anther truck started following . Uday called his detective and told him the number of the truck . Then when he came to know who the person was , he tracked him down and asked him about his boss and when he came to know who it was , he realised that Devgad never was the one . It was Raigarh who wanted both devgarh and jaigarh gone ."
Vicky " wow it sounds soo filmy "
Diya "but why is DS against uv ? Dosent she know the truth ?"
Manyata " I don't know . After uday came to know everything , he let me call DS and I told her everything . DS always believed in uday and she was happy and let us stay at the house to fool that person . But the last night...some people attacked us...and DS called me back...and went against UV . Don't know...everything happened really fast ."
Diya sighed "well then you prove it to her that Uday is a good person "
Manyata "I will"
Vicky " But then we will have to catch that guy...who attacked you and uday"
Manyata " yaa and I will "
Diya " I ? Ohh no no you dont think you are doing anything alone right ?"
Manyata " but..."
Vicky " no buts dear...n Haan no dialogues that I Dont want you both to get hurt or anything . "
Diya " ya we are in and we are sooo not asking you"
Manyata smiled " chalo ok ab sone Jaooo. We will go to meet uday tomorrow . Wo bhi chupke chupke.we'll go shopping ." She winked .
Vicky " bechaare ko warning to de do . "
Diya " don't worry yar we won't do much shopping tomorrow "
Vicky "that's what you always say"
Manyata "ohhh nooo. Where's my mobile ? "
Diya "with jay and vijay . But where are they both gone ? " she looked around to find them nowhere .
Manyata shocked " jay ? No she would tell DS and we won't be able to go tomorrow ."
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Man " boss they are going to increase the security "
Yuvraj " Okk you can go now " smirks "looks like you don't want to wait anymore . I'll get is place ready for you rajkumari Manyata "
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Edited by Anjalika13 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
interesting!

So raigarh is the main culprit behind the enemity between two estates!

I hope dat guy isnt akassh :@

Cont soon
Edited by sweetshab - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome dear
bt no manveer scenes...
u cleared of d confusion but manyata is in danger now
continue soon dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update and quite interesting !
So it seems Riagarh is the main culprit 😡

Continue soon ...
... Thanx 4 the PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
Very nice update fungi. Loved it.:-D

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