Manveer FF : Separate Worlds [Chap 16 - pg 84] - Page 56

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yes you are right anjiii many asks you to pm but they don't comment or like:-S
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Originally posted by: MsLuscious

yes you are right anjiii many asks you to pm but they don't comment or like:-S

😆 Yaa
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Hey everyone . If anyone wants pm for the next update , please like this post . Pms for the next chapter will be sent to only those who like this chapter 😛



Diya "Yep Manu...ab gussa Chod...let's goo shoppinggg " she said jumping like a kid .
Vicky "nahiii...tum log humesha mere Sath yahi karte ho...Lekin iss baar aisa Nahi hoga" he said dramatically .
Manyata was already said after hearing Uday's name . She just shook her head and said in a low voice "I'm tired . You guys might be tired too after your flight . Let's rest today . We'll enjoy tomorrow .
"Okk then . Cya laterr " Diya said and went outside the room pulling Vicky with her .
Vicky " what's with Manu ? "
Diya " shut up "
Vicky " where are we going ? "
Diya " to Jay "
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"Maharani ji your office is bugged" said the head of the security .
DS was furious now but she showed no emotions . " Hmm check all the other rooms too and tell which all are bugged " she said and moved back into the palace . They had come out as it was the safest place where they could talk without anyone overhearing .
Ds went to her office and sat there thinking about her next step...
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Manyata sat in her room all lost . She had many questions but no one to answer . She decided to call Uday ...
Uday " hello Manyata ?"
Manyata " Uday tum Pohonch gaye ho na ? " she was scared for him after the attack so decided to ask him about that first .
Uday " Haan Manyata Tumne sirf Ye puchne ke liye call kiya ? He asked amused .
Manyata " uhh nahii..." then she told him everything that had happened after she reached the mahal .
Uday "Manyata you shouldn't have called me . DS wouldn't be happy about it ." he said sounding emotionless .
Manyata was hurt . She thought that he was with her but he didn't even want to talk to her now .
Manyata " Okk byee then " she said and banged the phone and started sobbing . Everything seemed like messed up now . She didn't know when she fell asleep crying .
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Uday was feeling disturbed after his talk with Manyata . Ds didn't trust him . He ran his hand through his hair . He walked outside and drove to the rajmahal as he knew he had to talk to someone importantly .
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Vicky and Diya went to Jay's room and knocked .
"aa Jao " came the reply
They opened the door to see a tensed Jay talking to Vijay Bhai .
"sorry . I hope we didn't disturb you guys " said Diya
"Nahh Humaari baatein to chalti hi rehti hain " said vijay bhai
Jay " anyways you guys want something ?"
" yaa ...we wanted to ask you something ,what happened to Manu ?" asked a lost Vicky " I mean...she looks really sad "
Jay looked at The both of them. " it's a long story , we have to do something to make her happy , then I'll tell you the whole thing "
She looked at Vijay Bhai who started looking at the ceiling...
Jay " i have a plan " she said and smiled...an evil evil smile...as vijay bhai said it was .
" No Jay bhai , I know your silly plans...and that evil smile you have , I know you are gonna get us all killed "
Vicky " let's atleast hear it , it can't be that bad "
" Okk but there's a deal , you hear it and you are in it , there's no going out then .
All three nodded . Jay told them there plan .
Vicky "I take it back , it is very very bad , it might work but what about me ? " he said making a puppy face .
"and me ?" said vijay bhai .
"there's no going out " reminded jay .
Diya " I can't believe we are going to do this "
Jay "come on guys , for jiji "
Vicky " anything for manyata bhai "
Diya "Okk I'm in"
Vicky " don't leave me out " He said and joined them .
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Manyata got up and checked the time , it was afternoon , she slept only for an hour but was feeling much better now so decided to take a walk...
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"Just hope she dosen't come before we are ready " said Vicky
"uff these girls take so much time to get ready " vijay bhai said .
Just then a worker passed through the corridor . His face was red and was trying to control his laughter .
Vicky "aaj to humaari band bajne vaali hai vijay bhai . Let's go back to our room and stay there till they both come ."
Vijay bhai " jaldi chalo phir " They both nearly ran to there room and were about to open the door but were stopped by someone

" Vijay bhai ? ...Vicky ??? "
They both turned to see Manyata standing there .
Manyata stood there gasping , looking at the two men dressed like girls . Vicky was wearing a cute frock upto his knees while vijay bhai was wearing a gown like a princess . She looked at them for a few seconds and then burst out laughing .
"nahiii , koi humme naa dekhna " Vijay bhai hid his face . Vicky made a funny face .
" Come on Manu we need to talk to Jay and Diya about something important " He said and winked at Vijay Bhai .

" I can't...ohhh my stomach " she held her stomach while laughing . Vicky and Vijay bhai each took Manyata's hand and pulled her towards Jay's room .
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Ds and Uday are talking while walking at the ground .
Uday " ji DS humme sab samajh aa Gaya "
DS " shukar hai Uday . Ummeed hai Ye mushkil bhi jald hi khatam ho jaayegi .
Uday looked at the mahal and then walked back to his car and drove back to his hotel .
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Jay and Diya came out from the room .
Diya " can't we just wait for them inside the room ?" she said checking herself .
Jay " noo " she said looking unsure "I think the costumes are a bit too much "
Diya "a bit ? Jay I'm gonna murder you if this dosent work and I'm sure that Vicky and Vijay bhai would be pleased to help me "
Jay was about to say something when she heard a laughing sound . She looked at the direction and found vijay bhai and Vicky coming there . Diya also followed her gaze and sighed in relief .
"at last dono aa hi Gaye "
Then they both noticed Manyata behind them holding their hands and smiling while checking both of them out .
Vicky " manu you would now like to stop staring at us now "
Manyata "actually Vicky I wouldn't . You guys look too funny "
Vijay bhai " manyata bhai I think you. Should look at your sister first "
Manyata looked up and saw Jay and Diya standing there staring at vijay bhai and Vicky while they both were staring at Jay and Diya . Jay was wearing a jokers dress while Diya was in disguise as a pirate with big and roung spectacles.She looked at them again and burst out into fits of laughter . All four looked at each other and started laughing like mads .
Manyata heard them laughing too . Then something struck her mind and she took out her mobile and secretly took many pictures of the four of them laughing .
She turned around and was about to go away when someone stopped her...
"ohh no not so fast miss " Vicky said still laughing A bit. "give it to me " he said extending his hand .
"no na Nahi " she showed her tongue to him and started running .
Diya held his hand . "Kya hua ?"
Vicky "usne hum sab ki pics le lin . Ab tumhe to pata hi hai uske next step Kya hoga " he said trying to look serious .
Diya "humaare sab friends ko mail...nahinnn "
Jay and vijay "Kya ?" they said looking shocked .
" wicked , Manyata bhai " vijay bhai said
Diya "we need to do something . Fast "
All four stared at each other for few minutes . "Let's go to Jay's room first " Diya said looking at the waiter staring at them through one end of the corridor . All agreed and went and sat down .

"IDEA " shouted Jay suddenly .
"ohh nooo , not again jay " Vijay bhai and Vicky said together .


Basss I'm tired . Huhhh how was it ? Lol . Do hit the like button and comment :)


Edited by Anjalika13 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Res. Joldi update kar. Warna, mujhe wait karwane ka meaning tu janti hai...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Archi02

Res. Joldi update kar. Warna, mujhe wait karwane ka meaning tu janti hai...

Haha karinggg 😉 😆. Hehe pata hai...achha mai try krti Hun aur jaldi karne ki 😛
Edited by Anjalika13 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Anjalika13

Hey 😃 Glad to have a new reader 😉 😃
Glad I liked it 😃...lol yepp...cause I forgot about it 🤣
Now I remember so I'll update...😛

heeheeeheee...u 4got abt it..
ohhkka ohhkayyy..nd like to krna hi tha..u deserve it..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Are wai, ek chota sa warning se update kar dia! Darpuk. Very nice update. Loved it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
hahahahaha...very very funny update..
its jst filled with suspnse...
ab DS kiski side m h...
uday ki or 3rd prsn ki????
one more cnfusion...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: cherry.parul0

heeheeeheee...u 4got abt it..
ohhkka ohhkayyy..nd like to krna hi tha..u deserve it..

Yepp 😳 Thnx 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Archi02

Are wai, ek chota sa warning se update kar dia! Darpuk. Very nice update. Loved it.

Lol actually Maine Teri warning se darke update nhi kara...vo yahan Raat Bohot ho gyi hai aur mjhe sona bhi hai issliye jaldi jaldi kara 🤣 thnx 😃 Glad u loved it 😳

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