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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow nice one as always...loved it...J mata ki jay ho...M serial ki tarah yaha bhi blind nikli...yaar kab khatam hoga yeh missunderstanding..ab Uv ki yeh halat aur sahi nahi jaati mujhse(little cry face)yh ha ha ha ha h eh now i m crying too...pliz jaldi khatam kar yeh missunderstanding.n pliz pliz pliz kal subah cont kar.aur wait nahi kiya jata.so pliz kal subah...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved it but poor uday...I can't see him in more pain...bus ab jaldi se Rohan/Jagat aur Jay ki asliyat samne Lao sabke...neway thanks for update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
itz really nyc but honestly i want manveer unity...plz unite demmm.plzzz...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Manvee ss
Love feeling-give new birth
Part-33
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Dono ghr sadness me duba h...

J:ab sbko btane ka tym aa gya h..
Breakfast tble pe
Jay breakfast krte-2 vomting k liye bhaag ti h..

Obiviously,sb preshan hoke jay k rum me gye...
Komal,ds to smjh gai wo whi beithi rh gai..
Lekin jay k piche manyata or vijay bhaage...

M:jay kya hua?
Jay washrum se bahr aati h'bs di pta ni kya hua,aise hi..

Komal gusse se uthati h or bahr jane lgti h.
M:maa kha ja ri ho?
K:uday k ghr
M:pr kyn?
K:qki jay praganant h,kb tk hm ise ghr me rkh k duniyawalo se chipayenge..
Uday se iski shadi ki bat krne ja ri hu.
Wo chali jati h..

Manyata ka again heartbreak ho gya..

Komal sharma house phuchti h
Gr:komal aap aaiye.
Sb aate h.
Komal gr k pairo me gir jati h or rone lgti h
Sb shocked hote h.
Gr:aap ye kya kr ri h?
K:meri jay ki zindgi brbaad hone se bcha lijiye...
Un:phle aap uthiye yha beithiya,ab kya hua?
K:jay maa bnne wali h.
All shocked sb uday ki trf dekhte h,
Uday niche face krke puri trh cnfused h.
Komal achnak uday k kadmo me gir jati h'meri beti ki zindgi tumhare hath me h uday,use bdnaam hone se bcha lo...

Gr:komal,aap befikr rhiye,uday ne jo glti ki h use wo izzat k 7th sudharega..
Aap jaiye hm shagun leke ayenge..

Uday'pr dad maine to..
Gr:bs uday ab ise apni mjburi smjho ya phr hmara oder..hmari wjh se kisi k ghr ki izzat jaye.hmein manjur ni...
Komal wha se chali jati h...
Uday gusse me apne rum me chla jata h,or saaman idhr udhr faikta h...

Unanti aati h,dada bs kijiye,aap apna gussa in bejaan chizo Pe kyn nikal rhe h..

Gr:unanti shi kh ri h,bejan chizo pe gussa kyn?
U:dad,aapne jyada bol diya kuch.
Gr:ni hmne jyada ni bol,hmne whi bola h jo hmein bolna chahiye.
U:lekin dad maine kuch ni.
Gr:i know,to proove kro..mujhe unanti ko pta h ki tumne kuch ni kiya,lekin duniya ki njro me to tum hi gunahgar ho...ya to proove kro tumne kuch ni kiya,ya phr jay se shadi kro...

U:lekin dad main..
Gr:mujhe pta h aap manyata se pyar krte h,phli bar hmne us bachi ko dekha tha to bs soch liya tha hmare ghr ki bahu whi bnegi...

'hm apke 7th h,koi bi hlp chahiye,hm h,lekin hmein hmari izzat hmari bahu manyata chahiye.'..

Gr chale jate h...
Tbi vijay aata h..
'of oh,hmari manyata bhai ka rona bnd krwao unanti jeise saare ghr paani uski aankho me h.
U:wo ro kyn ri h?use to apni bhn ki pdi h,mere dukh drd se use kya?
V:arey aap hi k dukh drd se use frq pdhta h..isliye ro ri h..
Jay k liye to ab or woried h ghr me sb...
'uday main aapke 7th hu,manyata bhai ki khushiyo k liye kuch bi'.

U:mujhe manyata ka 7th chahiye,wo 7th hogi to sb aasan ho jayega..
Un:vijay tum manyata ko bula skte ho..
V:ha,ek min.
Vijay calng manyata
'hello,manyata bhai hmara accidnt ho gya.

Uday nd unanti dono shocked ho jate h.
M:kya?kha pe ho aap btao..main aati hu.
V:dhire se kha bulau btao,
Uday'rajori mall me'
'ha manyata rajori mall me
M:mall me accidnt hua h?
V:mtlb stairs se gir gya huna.tum aa ri ho ki.
Akeli aana,maa,dadi kisi ko takleef dene ki jrurt ni h...
M:ha thik h..
Cal cut.

V:ab chalo,ya rajori mall yha khda krna h..
3bhaagte h...

Komal:maa gr g ne kha h wo shagun leke ayenge..hmari jay ka.
Ds:kya?wo maan gye.
K:maan gye mtlb maanna hi tha,

Tbi manyata bhagi-2 aati h.
K:arey,aram se kha ja ri ho..
M:ni kuch ni bs thodi deir me aati hu. Wo chali jati h..
Ds:arey kha bhaag ri h...

Wo mall puchti h,
V:wo dekho manyata aa gai,unanti tum leke aao use..
Unanti jati h'hi manyata tum yha kya kr ri ho vijay to wha h..
M:ha chalo na phr..
Wo jati h,wha vijay or unanti hote h srf 'vijay bhai aap to thik ho.'
Un:manyata ek bar to trust kro dada pe,unhone kuch ni kiya..
M:unanti,tumhare dada ne jo kiya uska result jay k pait me h.
Ab kuch saabit krne ki jrurt ni h..
Uday aata h'apni bhn pe ek bar trust krliya,ek bar mere pe bi krlo..

V:ha manyata bhai,sb kuch weisa hi chlega,bs isi bich hmein bi apna kam krna h..plz agar uday gunegar nikla to jay se to shadi ho hi ri h...
M:g ni vijay bhai.ab ni.
U:uske pas aate-2 or manyata piche-2 hoti rhti h'kyn?srf tumhara 7th maang rha hu,tum mujhpe trust kro ya na kro wn tumhari mrzi h'...

Manyata whi beith jati h,trust to mujhe h ni,lekin thik h,ek bar or 7th rhke dekhti hu...
Wha ds bi aa jati h
'or mujhe shamil ni kiya is khel me,?

Sb shocked.
Sb ek 7th bolte h'dadi'
D:arey ha main hi hu,manyata tumhein itne din se yhi smjhane ki koshish to..
M:dadi main kisi ko begunah saabit krne k liye ni,apni bhn jay ko such sabit or apki sb akal pe jo prda lga h wo dur krna h...
V:of oh,sath to hona.lekin plz kisi or ko ni..
Uday khush hota h'wo manyata ki trf dekh k khta h'ab tum 7th ho to bs sb thik h..thanku manyata..
Manyatat thout'main chahti hu aap begunaah saabit ho jaye'..pr..

U:manyata main chahta hu tum ofice ana bnd na kro..
M:hmmm...
U:main ye bi chahta hu ki jo jeisa main khu weisa tum kro..
M:hmmm..

Uday thoda tej bolta h'ye hmmm.. Kya hota h?bolo to shi..
Manyata hmm krke chali jati h,
V:arey uday ye phr se silent mode pe aa gai..main chlta hu use mnane..

Uday phr bolta h
Ye phr bolna bnd krdiya,maine kha h ki kuch bi ho jaye bolna bnd krna pr...

Ds:uday beta,wo kal boldegi tumse mujhe pta h..
Or mujhe tumpe bharosha h wo uday ko 4head kiss nd hug krti h..
Or chali jati h...

Unanti nd uday khush hote h...

Ds thinking in her rum
'jis din jay k 7th hua,us din jay ne mujhe pucha tha,ki meri frnd ko vomt ho rha h,main ja ri hu,tb maine hi use kha tha ki wo ldki maa bnne wali h,khin wo apne liye...
'ni ni lekin aisa wo kregi kyn??

Gr 2 uday
'beta kal hum shagun leke ja rhe h,or aapki shadi bi jaldi hi krwayege'

U:dad,aap plz thoda tym to dijiye mujhe..main koshish kr rha hu...
Gr:aap koshish kijiye..hum komal g ki baatoin ko kb tk ignore krege..
Or aaj unke husband brijraj bi aane wale h..

U:pr dad.
Gr:dekhiye uday aap apni koshish krte rhiye,lekin hm khud ek ldki k baap h..hm unke ghr ki problem smjh skte h..

U:thik h dad,aap wo kriye jo aapko krna h,main wo krta hu jo mujhe krna h...
Lekin meri jo zindgi h whi bnegi meri humsafer...

Ds or komal jay k rum me jati h,
K:jaybeta gr g kal shagun lete ayenge.ab sb thik ho jayega.
Jay ajeeb si khushi thi uske chahre pe
Such maa..
Ds use itna khush dekh k surprized hoti h.
Ds:jay itni khush kyn ho?kisi aachi situation me ye mariage ni ho ri h..

Jay:phr wo rone lgti h,ha dadi,meri kismat hi aisi h...

K:jo bi ho,hmare ghr ki izzat nilam hone se bch gai..hm khush h
Or aaj tumhare papa bi aane wale h...

Ds:pta ni brij ka reaction keisa hoga?
K:jeisa bi ho,hmein unhe smjhana pdega..
'jay aap aram kriye'

Ds or komal wha se chali jati h...
Jagat calng jay
J:jay ye kya bat failai h tumne,tum maa bnne wali ho.
Tumhare 7th to kuch.
Jay dar jati h
Phr'wo wo wo ab uday se shadi krne k liye natak to krna pdega na...
J:ye sb natak h..o my god..ek pal k liye mujhe lga ki..
Jay:kya lga.
J:kuch ni.hatts off jay,2no bhno k dimag bhoot diffrnce h..waah..

Cal cut..

Jagat say'jis din property mere nam kradogi jay,us din tumhari sachai sbke saamne launga..'

Precap-jagat ki sachai uday k saamne aai..uday-jay mariage date fix..
Pari
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi da amazing...loved M-unnati-Vijay-uday -DS convo...and pls make evrythng clear bcoz i cannot take that J-Jagat evilness
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Posted: 13 years ago
I love this SS. Pls Jay-Jaggu ka secret sabke saamne jaldi se le aao
Thanks for the update.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
This J kamini is getting on my nerve. Pls Pari iska drama jaldi band karo. One request dear jab J kamini ka truth bahar a jaye to pls M use ek tight slap mare. I want 2 c this scene pls dear.
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Posted: 13 years ago
waooo uday is lucky dat sooo many ppl luv him trust him n r wid him...par manyata plz u also trust ur uay...he cant be a betrayer...he only luvs u...n wants u...plzzz J ki poll jal khulooo...
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Posted: 13 years ago
@sonam-darlng watng itna wait kiya to thoda or...
Definately jay ki poll main kholugi...

@Arieltabi-dear,firstly jagat 2nd name jaggu.lol.
Nakur bn gya.gud 1.
Nd ofcourse dream come s true..
Ofcourse manyata to sbse jyada gussa or hurt hoyegi to jay k as a prize slap jrur milega...

@sirjee-uday h hi itna pyara...bs manyata smjhne me deir krti h hmesha..

Pari
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Posted: 13 years ago
u are doing a wonder ful job👏
the planning part was amazing as ds also
joined the gang👍🏼
and plz j kp 1 slap frm komal and gr plz mazaa ajaega 😆

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