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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved it...how romantic!!!!but I hate J...from the precap it seems J is cooking somthing fishyyy...neway I am enjoying very much though...please update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Babe again marvellous update as usual
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome yaar.tere ko kiss keh liye pyar vhare jappi.haye kya kiss tha.n omg yaar yeh J n Jagat do evils apni evil plan main lag gaye hai toh that means koi dhamaka toh hone vala hai.aur M ofice nahi ja rahi kya???oh god agar aisa huya toh bechara Uv keise yeh shock sahega.now i cant wait.n itz just awesome yaar.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Sooo romantic!! I loved it:D Continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
hayeee luv dat kiss...waooo really awsum...but yyy J is always creating trouble in manveer lyfs...hope here also her plans backfires...same as in serial...hahahahahah...n manveer stay together 4ever,...n noone come b/w dem...n soon dey confess dere luv to eachother...
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Posted: 13 years ago
how romantic !!! gr8 as usual . continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved it!! Its sooo romantic!! Kaash aise scenes show main bhi ho!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
hayee mai marjava tujhe romance queen ka award milna chahiye ha nahi toh btw the update was awiee wowiee
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Posted: 13 years ago
Manvee ss
Love feeling-give new birth
Part-25

Uday pura lost h
Wo apne gaalo pe hath rkh k,ghost ki trh apne ghr phuchta h...
Un:ye lo jagat dada aagye..dada,dada kha ja rhe ho...
J:uday kha ja rha h. Uday to puri trh lost h or apne rum ki trf jata h.
Phr jagat use pkdta h'uday kya hua?
Uday phr khta h'ha,main ghr phuch gya..
Un:ye kya ulti-sidhi bat kr rhe ho..or ye gaalo pe hath kyn rkha h...
U:ni kuch ni,main change krke ata hu..jagat wait kr yar.
J:ha thik h,ye tumhare shrt ka button kyn tuita h..
Uday remember button scene...
Un:phr kho gye,are kya hua?
U:kuch ni wait..main change krke aata hu...
Uday apne rum me jata h,or wo jaldi se change krta h...

U:ha jagat bolo..keise ho?
Unanti nd jagat shocked...
U:kya,kya hua.?...
Un:dada wo aapke gaalo pe..
U:gaalo pe kya?
J:aacha,to tu isliye bhut bnke khada tha..
U:hua kya?
Un:arey hmein kya pta kya-2 hua,aap btao kya hua?
U:arey mujhe kya pta..pta ni kiski bat kr rhe ho.
J:idhr aa main btata hu,kya hua?
Wo use mirror dikhata h..dekh..

Or udhr manyata mirror dekh ri hoti,to jo uday ki shrt ka button hota h wo uski chain me hi ataka h...
To mayata muskura k wo phr saara scen remember krti h...or apni chunni se apna face chupa leti g..she s blushng..

Or uday apne gaalo pe lipstik mark dekh k phr wo lost ho jata h...
Un:hmmm...to ye bat h..isliye ghushuda bne huye ho..
U:ni ye pta ni keise...
Main aata hu..

Wo apne rum me jata h or hanki se wo mark clean krta h..or wo hanki sambhal k almeera me rkh dekh h...

Or manyata us button ko apni chain k 7th attach krliya...
Or button ko ek pandent k 7th flude krdiya,taki kisi ko button na dikhe..or whi pandent phn liya...
'ye button mere 7th rhega ab,ha ni to'...
She s vry happy...

U:ha ab bolo kya kam h jagat?
J:chick dikha yar...ab to kuch..
All laughng...

U:shut up yar...
J:i m kidng yar.kal wo meri dost ane wali h,job k liye..
U:ha thik h,tu to uske 7th hoga na..
J:ha main bi aaunga,mujhe bi kisi se milna h.
U:kisse?
J:aisi kaun si ldki h jisne tere chicks pe mark de diya usi se...
U:blush krte huye...tujhe mauqa chahiye meri taang khichne ka..
J:i m kidng yar,mujhe teri secretry se milna h.abi tk mila ni hu na use..chl phr kal milte h.bye.
U:bye...

In nxt mrng.
Jagat calng jay
'jay main aa rha hu,tumhein pic krne!
Jay:ni,tum mt aao,hm royal cafe me milte h.
J:oh,ok...bt jaldi krna...
Jay:ok.cal cut...
'main aisa kya kru,jisse di na jaye paye ofice!!

Manyata taiyar hoke aati h,'chal jay main chlti hu..maa bta ri thi tujhe bi job k interview k liye jana h.'
J:ha di wo mujhe bi lga ki job krni chahiye...to
M:aacha socha...chl sham ko milte h...
J:g,(thout):kya kru??
M:of,oh main cell bhul gai,kamre me..
To wo kamre me jati h...wo apna purse whi table pe rkh deti h...
'main cell leke aati hu'...
J:g di,wo manyata k jate hi uska purse almeera k piche chupa deti h...
Phr manyata aati h,chl main nikalti...mera purse kha h?idhr hi to rkha tha...
J:yhi khin hoga,ya rum me to ni rkh diya...
Manyata rum me jati h,
Ds:ary halla kyn mchaya h?kya hua?
M:mera purse dadi.pta ni kha rkh diya..
Komal
-kuch jruri saaman tha kya?
M:arey usi me to sb tha,paise ek file bi rkhi thi..plz dhundo..
J:aaplog dhundhiye,mujhe deir ho rha h.
M:deir to mujhe bi ho rha h,pr tu ja.all d bst.
J:evil smile,thank u di..
Wo chali jati h...
J:dundhti rho apna purse...or file...

Uday:dad,gud mrng..
Gr:gud mrng beta...kam keisa chl rha h.?
U:bs dad sb thik chl rha h...
Gr:mr.sexsena ki deal ka kya hua?
U:final h dad,hmare 7th hi hoga...
Us project pe kam shuru ho chuka h..
Gr:weise jo mr.frakin k liye itni bdi party di thi us party ka asar mr.frakin pe kuch pda ya ni..
Uday stop drinking coffee'dad,mr.frkin ne ni maine unhe mna kr diya.
Gr:pr kyn ye to tumhara sapna tha..
U:sapna bdal gya h dad..anyway dad main chlta hu..ofice k liye..
Gr:ok,beta..bye tc.

Jay meet jagat..
Jay:chle,jagat...
J:yes mam..chaliye.
Jay:weise tumhare uday sir guse wale to ni h..
J:ah,phle aati to gussa krne wala uday mil jata tumhe...pr ab wo gussa ni krta.
Jay:kyn?
J:pta ni,lekin agr abi bi koi glt bat ya glt kam kre to gusa krdega wo...kyn puch ri ho?
Jy:ni bs aise hi..
J:weise,ab se hm dono kreeb honge..means ek hi ofice me..
J(thout):tum mere kareeb or main uday k...
'hmmm..chalo...

Manyata purse dhudhne me lgi h,
'aakhir ye achanak purse gya kha?
Mujhe or kuch ni,wo file chahiye,wo mr.sexsena ki cmpny ki file h,or aaj uski jrurt h..
Hy bhagwan kuch kro...

Unanti calng vijay
'or vijay keise ho?
V:arey,meri chodo phle ye btao,uday ki aankho me manyata k liye pyar dekha h..
Un:main jo puchna chahti thi tumne puch liya,ha dekha h...
Meine to dono ki aankho me dekha h..
V:mtlb pyar krte h lekin bta ni pate..
Un:of,bta ni pate ni,kh ni paate...
V:arey ha whi...chodo tum btao keisi ho?
Un:hm to thik h..phr se hm sb ghumne ka plan bnaye..
V:actualy,hm bi yhi kh rhe the...main manyata se bat kruga.
Un:or main dada se..mja ayega...
Ek min o my god...

Ni ni ghumne ka plan cancel,mujhe to kuch or jruri kam h...
V:hmara dil mt todo,plz mna mt kro.
Un:arey tumhara dil todna mnjur h hmein,apne dad ka ni..arey kuch dino me unka bday h... V:o,wow..phr to party bi hogi.
Un:ha jrur hogi...isliye to ghumna cancel,sb party attand krege...

V:chalo,wo bi aacha h...kb h?
Un:jb h tb hm invite krdenge..
Infact hm khud ayenge manyata ko lene..
V:bs manyata ko..
Un:arey hm sbko invite krege..chinta mt kro...
Weise tumhare ghr me h kaun-2?
V:mumy,papa,dadi,2sister.nd me.
Un:main aau tumhare ghr kbi.
V:ofcourse..jb man kre...
Un:okay...manyata k 7th kbi aajaugi...ok.bye
I talk 2 latter...

Cal cut...

Jagat:chalo jay utro,yhi h sharma cmpany...
Jay:hmm..chalo..
Wo dono uday k cabin me jate h,uday apna kam kr rha h.
J:hy dude,i m bck in ofice..
U:yeah,i m hapy.to kha new ofice asistance...
J:oh yes,cuming jay aajao ander..
Jay ander aati h..
'gud mrng sir...
U:gud mrng,beitho..
J:dude ek kam kro tum apni seretary ko bi bula lo,main bi usse mil lunga...

Jay thout'bula lo mr.uday wo aaj ni aane wali...bina file liye keise ayegi...di i m sry bt main kya kru apne dreams pure krne k liye kuch bi kr skti hu..kuch bi...'


U:i think u r ryt...

Ek min.main bulata hu,
Uday cabin se hi cal krta h,
Maneger:yes sir..sir main manyata ka wait kr rha hu,wo aai ni h abi tk..
U:what,aai ni mtlb..
Uday thout-manyata kyn ni aai..khin kisi problem me to ni...
J:kya hua?
U:ha,wo abi ofice ni aai..jay tum apna kam sambhalo..job fix h tumhari.jagat tum jay ka table dikha do...
J:ok.dude...

Mr.sexsena aate h meeting k liye.
Mr.s:hello mr.uday..
U:hello.plz bathiye..
Uday bar-2 manyata ko dekhta h'
Bt wo aati ni h..

Manyata's home..
She s cryng'wo file mujhe chahiye,ab tk to mr.sexsena aa chuke honge!!

V:arey,hmari manyata bhai ro kyn ri h?or kaun si file kho gai.
Dadi saari bat btati h.

Wha sb file ka wait kr rhe h..
Uday again gussa ho rha h..
Phr bhoot deir bad
Jagat bolta h
J:mr.sexsena uday k jo secretary h unki aachanak kuch problem ho gai h,wo idhr phuch nh payegi...aap ye meeting kal rkh skte h..
Mr.s:mujhe koi problem ni h,bt mr.uday itni irresponsible ldki apki secertry h... use pta tha aaj meeting h,or na aana...chaliye mr.uday meeting jb krni ho bta dijiyga..i m always presents...

Jay ye baatein sunke evil smile deti h...

V:of oh,ek min.almeerah me to ni rkh diya..
Vijay almeera khol k dekhta h,bt ni hota to wo irritate hoke almeera ko hit krta h...to jhtke se file girti h..
'manyata kya ye file h,
M:ha yhi h,lekin ye yha keise..
V:pair aa gye honge ,
M:arey jo bi ho mil gya na,main chlti hu..pta ni wha ka hal kya hoga...
Manyata wha se bhagti h...

Jagat:uday chl main chlta hu,tncn mt le..meeting ho jayegi..don't wory.
Bye jay apna kam
thik se krna...
Jay:ok,jagat thanku...
Uday gusse me hota h ek jagh khda hoke lal-pila ho rha h...

Manyata jldi-2 k chakker me use texi me iron rod se uske shoulder pe chot lg jati h..
M:hy bhagwan ye chot bi abi lgni thi...

Jagat jata h,nd manyata ofice phuchti h...
M:uncle kitne paise huye?
Driver:50rs.
Wo purse me se paise nikal ri hoti h,
Tbi jagat apni gaadi me beith k nikal jata h...
Or manyata ofice k trf jati h..

Manyata phuchti h ofice me,
Wha uday bi aata h or use gusse se dekh rha hota h.
Or sare ofice members bi manyata ki trf hi dekh rhe h.
Jay ne notice kiya manyata ko
Bt manyata ne ni...

Precap:uday again shoutng on manyata..

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yaar jaldi dusri post karna plsss mujshe wait hi nahi o raha tujhe maza aata hai hum sabko uksakar besharam haan nahi toh 😆😆😆😆

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