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Manveer ss
Love feeling-give new birth.
Part-22

Uday use pde pyar se dekhta h..
Nd ply bckground music..
"(male version)
Ek ajnabi sa ehsaas dil ko staye,
Shayed yhi to pyar h..'
(Sng is nt stop)
Manyata so ri h than,
Uday manyata ko apni arms(baaho) me uthata h,with cute smile k 7th...
Tbi manyata ki eyes khulti h bt uday notice ni krta use..manyata use dekhti whi pyar se
Nd again (bckgrund sng start)
"(in female version)
Betaabiyo me dhadkan meri chain paaye,
Shayed yhi to pyar h "
Uday manyata ko muskura k leja rha h uske rum me,or manyata use pyar se dekh ri h.
Sudden uday manyata ki trf dekhta h,wo apni eyes close kr leti h..
Then uday uski trf attract hone lgta h..
(Male version)
"kuch bi kha na,
Kuch bi suna na,
Phr bi,bechain dil h hmara,
Bhake kadam h,
Muskil me hm h,
Dekho,
Sambhale bhla keise yaara...
Then phr wo manyata ko rum ki trf le jata h..again manyata open d eyes nd wo uday ki trf cutely dekhti h
"(female version)
Chahe bina hi,
Hm nazdeek chale aye,
Shayed yhi to pyar h..."
Uday use bad pe aram se sula deta h,nd wo muskura k chla jata h..
(Male version)
"(he remember old cute moments,jo manyata k 7th the)
Wo mulaqate,
Pyar bhari baatein"
Ek pal na bhul paaye...''
Manyata rolling on bad with smile(Female version)
"kitni mohbbat,
Hai kitni chaht tumse,
Keise bhla hm btaye.."

Uday uski snap dekhta h
(M.V)
'Tera muskura dil ko sukun phuchaye,
Shayed yhi to pyar h...'

Both smiled nd sleeping...

In nxt mrng..
Vijay calng manyata 'manyata bhai,kb apne ghr aaogi,jb zindgi gujr
Jayegi tb..
M:vijay bhai,aaj aa jaungi...
V:grt manyata bhai,hm khush huye.weise aaj tumhare ofice ki chutti hogi na..
M:ha bhai,tbi to aaj aaungi...
V:chalo manyata bhai hm wait krege,aapke bina ghr-2 suna h...
M:g bhai main jaldi aa jaungi..
Cal cut..
V:manyata bhai ki awaz me jhankar beats gayeb thi,koi to bat hui h.i tell you...

Manyata phr se apni packng start krti h...
Then sudden uday-unanti cum manyata rum..
Un:manyata pckng kyn?
M:ghr ja ri hu unanti,jo kam krna tha wo to ho gya..ab rukne ka koi mtlb bi ni h..
Uday sad ho jata h,
Un:manyata plz kuch or din ruk jaona..
M:ni unanti,mere ghr pe sb mera wait kr rhey h,main idhr kam se aai thi,lekin idhr to apne bn gye.jeise tum...or main kaunsa dur ja ri hu,jb yad aye tb ofice me mil lena.ha ni to..
Uday uski bat smjhta h,'aaj tum ja ri ho to,hm teeno khin ghumne chale..phr whi se ghr chodenge tumhein..
Un:ha manyata plz ha bolo na..
M:hmmm...thik h..
U:ek min.uday manyata ka phone leta h
Uday calng vijay..
V:ha manyata bhai,bolo..
U:main uday bol rha hu,tum yha ghr pe aajao,hm ghumne ja rhey h,tumbi chalna..
V:hm bi...such me.
U:ha such me,manyata ko aacha lgega..
V:ok,i m cuming..
Cal cut..
J:kha ja rhe ho vijay bhai..?
V:khin ni,ghumne ja rhe h..chalogi.
J:ni bhai,main ni jaugi,tired hu main..
V:kya bhai?jb se party me se aai ho tb se tired ho,akhir aisa kya ho gya wha.?hm bi to party me se aye the,lekin hm to thik h...
J:hmne bhut dance kiya tha vijay bhai...isliye..wo ye bolke chali jati h...

Manyata,unanti nd uday watng vijay...Unanti manyata k neck pe mark dekhti h,jo frakin k nails k marks h..
Un:manyata ye mark keisa h.?
Manyata nd uday both shocked...
M:wo unanti,wo...
U:kal madam gir gai thi..chot to lgegi hi...
Un:of oh dada,ye bat hs k btane wali h kya?...manyata i hope u al ryt...
M:unanti mere girne ki bat to btadi,or jo khud gire the wo ni btaya..
Un:laughng,of ho,both of 2 much,main ek min.me aati hu...
U:tum thik ho ab..
M:hmmm...thanku sir..app khte rh gye,ki ni ni ni...lekin mujhe lga main sb thik krdungi..
U:manyata dream pura krna jruri ni h,tum jyada important thi...main apna sapna pura krne k liye,kisi ki zindgi k 7th ni khel skta...weise ab dream bdal gya h..or ye dream mera pura hoga...main janta hu...wo bolke smile krta h...
M(thout):apka hr sapna pura ho sir,aapko kbi dukh na ho...zindgi aapko wo sb de jo aap deserve krte ho...
Both little eye cntct...
V;manyata bhai main aa gya,chalo ghumne chalte h...
Un:hi,vijay..chalo aaj mja ayega...

Jagat calng uday..
'hy,uday main ghr aa rha hu?wha se dono royal cafe chlege...
U:jagat aaj ni,main khin or ja rha hu...baad me bat krta hu...
Cal cut...
J:kamal h,uday bdal gya h,uski secratry uska 7th de ri h usko bdlne me...

V:uday sir,hm ja kha rhe h?
Un:kisi park me...ya kisi cafe me..
Manyata jaldi se uchal k bolti h ya wha jha jhule ho...
Uday use khush hoke dekhta h..
V:ni manyata bhai jhule,ni,tumhein pta h jhtle se hm drte h...
Un:jhule se to dada bi drte h..
M:kya?sir aapko jhule se dar lgta h kya?
U:wo sb phle ki bat h,main ni drta ab..
M:thik h phr done hm jhule wali place me jayenge...vijay bhai aap micky mouse jhule pe jumping krlena...
Un:micky mouse jhula...all laughng...

Manyata hsti h,or uday uski trf dekhta h,or car drive kr rha hota h..
Tbi car k aage,ek accident hone wala hota tbi manyata 'sir aage dekhiye'
Uday phr handle krleta h..
V:sir,jra aram se wrna jhula phr jeil me jhulenge..
Again al laughng...

Wo phuchte h...
V:main micky mouse jhula dhundta hu.
M:aap such me,of oh darte kyn ho kuch ni hoga..chalo hm us bde jhule me jhulenge...
Un:ha ha chalo,aaj itne dino k bad..wow
Plz chalona...
U:ha,ha,ha chalo..

4 bde wale rounding jhule pe beithte h..
Ek pe unanti-uday
Nd 2nd vijay-manyata...
V:mujhe dar lga to main khud jaunga jhule se..phr mt chilana vijay bhai vijay bhai..
M:arey aisa kuch ni hoga vijay bhai aap...wo sudden uday ki trf dekhti h..
Uday chup-chap aankhe bnd krke tightly jhule ko pkd k,wo dra h..beitha h...
'vijay bhai aap me jhule pe se jumpng krne ki himmat to h,wrna apne saamne to dekho,abi jhula chalna strt hua ni,or hwai ud gai h..
Unanti or manyata hsne lgte h..
Uday apni aankhe kolta h'main ni dar rha hu,bs itne dino bad beitha hu to ajeeb lg rha h...
M:aacha,aap dar rhe ho,saaf dikh rha h...
Uday use aankhe dikhata h,or guse me khada hota h,phr unanti khti h 'dada jhula chalne lga'uday phr ghabrake beith jata h..
Phr manyata unanti hsne lgte h...
Un:manyata tum idhr aaogi,main vijay ko jra preshan krugi...
V:ni,manyata bhai unanti ko mt bhejna wrna main jump kru na kru,wo mujhe dhakka jrur dedegi..
M:arey khuch ni hoga,ha unanti idhr aja..
Uday ko ni pta ki manyata unanti ne seat exchange krli...
Un:vijay k sir lightly hit krte huye,ab to tum gye...phr vijay bi use hit krta h...
Dono bg ho gye ek dusre ko preshan krne me...
Jhula chalna start hota h,uday abi bi dra h...
Jeisa hi jhula chlna start hota h,weise hi uday manyata ko unanti smjh k uska hath pkd leta h,
Manyata uski ghabrahat dekh k hsti h,'kuch ni hoga,sb thik h'..
Uday ki eyes close h...
Manyata ekdum khadi hoti h..'main bchpan me hmesha aise khadi ho jati thi jhule pe'sb chilate rhte the beith ja beith ja..pr mujhe mja ata tha..
Uday phr dekhne k liye eyes kholta h,ki akhir kya kr ri h manyanta,to wo khadi hoti h..
Uday use jhule pe khada dekh k dar jata h,'or wo bi khada hojata h gusse me'manyata tum pagal ho gai ho,gir gai to,aise koi khada hota h kya,wo uska hath pkad k beithne k liye pkdta h,tbi jhule me jhtka lgta h or dono ekdusre k uper girte h...
Vijay-unanti apni msti krne me lge h..
Uday-manyata both eye cntct session start...

Then kuch deir bad..
Jhula rukta h..
V:aaj se phle itna mja kbi ni aya...
Both break eye-cntct..
U:ah,mujhe bi..wo bolke chla jata h...
Manyata blushng krti h...

V:chalo,aaj ka din hmari life ka sbse bst din tha...
U(thout):or meri tb se shuru hui h jb se manyata meri zindgi me aai h..
Un:bhut mja aya manyata,such me..
M:mujhe bi...

Vijay kuch pics capture krta h cel me..sbki.

Phr se uday sad h...uday manyata k ghr phuchta h..
V:chalo na ghr me coffe k liye...
U:ni vijay kbi or abi kaafi deir ho gai h..
Unanti-manyata hug krte h..
Uday little cry,bt wo dikhata ni h..
M:ah,thanku sir,
U:4 what?
M:wo...
U:maine koi ehsaan ni kiya,apni zindgi save ki h maine..bs or kuch ni..
Manyata use blushng krke dekhti,or turn bck hojati h...
Uday-unanti car me beithte h,bye bolte h or chale jate h...

Jo bi ho rha tha wo dadi dekh ri thi window se..
Ds:manyata ko maine kitne dino bad khush dekha h...or wo ldka tha kaun?pta krna pdega...

Precap:jay ko pta chla manyata h mr.sharma ki sceretry,nd use pta chla jagt ni h mr.sharma or sharma compny ka malik...

Pari

Loved it.chalo ab ek raz toh khulne vala hai.itz just awesome yaar.specially the jhule vala scene.aww how cute yaar.seriously ek seh acha ek update derahi hai tu.keep up the good work yaar.cont soon.keunki mujhe humasha ki tarah iss baar ki meethe fruits bhi jalti chahiye.kya karo oh Pari main ho adad sh majbur.haye itz just Awesome,Amazing n fabulous.omg yaar i m speachless.kya kaho aur kya nahi kuch samajh hi nahi araah.

Thanks for the pm. Loved it!!!

Nice update!!! Do continue soon!!:D

OMG it was sooo gud...specially da carrying part in da beginning...den da jhula wala scene...waooo...hope to see such scene in da serial also...but dere manyata should be scared n uday should make her comfortable...by da way wich song is dat...in da beginning...means wich movie...

@soni
dis sng movie of
lucky-no tym 4 love.
Salman khan nd sneha ulala starer..
Dis s a vry beautiful sng.

awww shoo sweettt

Manveer ss
Love feeling-give new birth.
Part-23

Uday-unanti in car..
Un:dada,aapke dil me kya h?btaiye na..
U:mtlb.
Un:main jeisa apko hmesha smile krte huye dekhna chahti thi,ab aap bilkul weise ho...main to apki sis.hu bta skte ho..plz dada..
U:unanti,tum pagl ho gai ho.chup chap beithi rho.
Un:chaliye mt btaiye,lekin jis ye bat btani h,wo btane me deir mt krna...
Uday use smile krke dekhta h...

Manyata apne rum me jati h,close d door...
'wo uday ka diya hua braclet dekhti h,'sir,wo din sbse khas tha jb aap mere dost bne,meri najro me apki izzat bdh gai h..aapne hmesha meri hlp ki h mujhe bina btaye.'...
Aap ko khush dekh ke,wo mere din ka sbse cute tym hota h..'

Uday apne rum me..
'meri aankhe us waqt khusnaseeb hoti h,jb wo tumhein(manyata)dekhti h..
Pichle dino,meri aankho ko khusnaseeb bnane ki adat ho gai thi..lekin aaj phr se...

Manyata say..
'ye mujhe ho kya rha h,mujhe apna ghr aacha hi ni lg rha h..
Wo cusion se apna face chupati h,she s blushng...

Dadi nock d manyata rum...
M:kaun h,cuming...
Ds:ab to dadi ko bi puch k aana pdega..
Ha ni to.
M:dadi,wo hug krti h.
Ds:keisa h mera beta..
M:aapke saamne hu,dekhlo...
Ds:hmm..wo kaun chodne aya tha tujhe...

J:vijay bhai aap aagye,kha ghumne gye the btaiye na..
V:aaj,to bhoot mja aya,jhula jhule hm.
J:hm,kaun-2 tha.
V:oh,main btana bhul gya tha..manyata,mr.sharma unki sis.unanti or main..
Jay shocked 'jagat ne mujhe ni btaya'...
V:jagat,kaun jagat?
J:ah,i think mr.sharma jo h unka nam jagat h na..
V:tumse kisne kha,jruri to ni ki tum j se se start hoti ho to wo bi j se start ho..
J:vijay bhai shutup..
Nam btaiye na...
V:mr.uday sharma...
Or tumhein pta h manyata bi aa gai h..

Jay shocked h,wo bhoot bnke khdi ho gai ho gai h..
V:jaybhai,kha kho gai,manyata bhai se ni milungi..
J:ha,ha jati hu..wo chali jati h chlte-2 bolti h'uday jagat ne ye nam to kbi ni btaya apna..ni ni vijay bhai ko gltfahmi hui h..'
Jay manyata k rum tk phuchti h,wo dadi or manyata ki baatein khadi hoke sunne lgti h...

M:kaun dadi,kiski bat kr rhi ho?
Ds:whi jo tujhe ghr tk chodne aye the..
M:dadi,wo mere boss mr.uday sharma the,sharma compny k malik or unke 7th unki bhn unanti thi..
Pr aap itni khusi-2 ye bat kyn puch ri ho..
Ds little cryng.'itne saalo se jo tere chahre pe jhuthi khushi dekhti aai hu,aaj wo puri trh schi khushi lg ri h...
Or beta wo ldka,use dekhta hi uske liye blessings niklne lgi.. Manyata dadi ki baatein sunke happy hoti h,with little bit cryng...

Bahr jay wo saari baatein sunke pather bn jati h..
Wo wha se rote huye apne rum ki trf jati h'hm itne dino tk ek aise insaan k 7th rhe jo mr.sharma h hi ni,wo rich bi ni h.'..
Wo apne kmre me phuchti h,saara saaman faikna strt krti h...
Ni,mere 7th ye hmesha kyn hota h,maine jise duniya ka sbse rich insaan smjha wo,koi or h...
Mujhe jagat se bat krni pdegi.. j calng jagat
'hello,jagat tum sharma cmpany me ho kya?
J:relax jay,kya hua?achanak ye swal..
Jay:maine jo pucha h wo btao..
J:accounment maneger hu..kyn?
Jay:cryng nd say'us din aruna ki party me phr mujhse kyn kha ki tum unanti k bhai ho..
J:laghng,wht main or unanti ka bhai,uska bhai uday h,hm bchpan se ekdusre ko jante h..
Or maine tumse kbi ni kha ki main mr.sharma hu...
Jay cal cut krdeti h,or apna phone guse me faik deti h..
Demit,
Wo ekdum guse me burnt ho ri h...
Use kuch smjh ni aa rha h...
Finaly,she thout..

Main hlp lungi jgat ki mr.sharma ki company me job lene k liye...
Glti ki h to use sudharna to pdega..
Jagat,ab tumhein meri hlp to krni pdegi...

Jay again calng jagat
'hello,jagat mujhe tumhari company me job krni h..
J:job krni h achanak...
Jay.:tum meri hlp kroge ki ni,bs ye btao...
J:ha,uday se bat krni pdegi...lekin plz kal ni,uske nxt day..
Jay:okay,fyn...
Cal cut...

Manyata nock d jay's door..
Jay chowk jati h'kaun?
M:main hu jay,drwaaza khol...
Jay apne aap ko fresh up krti h,or drwaaza kholti h...
J:di,aap itne din bad is ghr me aai h..bhul to ni gai..
M:arey pagal h kya?ye kamra aisa kyn h tera..?
J:wo,di kafi din se saaf ni kiya tha to bs whi...chaliye na vijay bhai k kamre me...
Wo vijay k rum me jate h...

V:aao,mere dono bhaiyo..
J:vijay bhai,to btao kya-2 kiya aaj..
M:vijay bhai to bs unanti k 7th njoy kr rhey the..ha ni to
V:or tum uday k 7th.
Manyata surprise hoke vijay ko dekhti h,
M:vijay bhai aap bi aacha mjak krta ho.
V:start kisne kiya..
Anyway,jay bhai bhoot mja aya aaj to..dekho hmne to pic bi capture ki h...

Wo 3no pic dekhne me lg jate h..
J:ye kaun kaun h?
V:ye uday h.
J:aww..how cute.
Manyata use little jealous hoke dekhti h..or vijay manyata ki trf dekhta h...
J:vijay bhai,main apka cel thodi deir me deti hu,ye pics main apne pc me download krke dekhugi...
V:ha jrur...
Jay chali jati h,manyata bi jane lgti h,tbi vijay
Manyata bhai tum ruko na...
M:bolo kya bat h?
V:manyata bhai,uday ki koi or tarif kre aacha ni lgta na tumhein.
M:mtlb?
V:arey hmse kya chupana,tumhari eyes jo blush kr ri h,jis trh tumne jealous hoke dekha wo hmein kuch sochne pe mjbur kr rha h..khin kuch hua to ni?
M:vijay bhai,aisa kuch ni h..
Agr hoga bi to shayed himat ni h...
Dubaara dil tuite,ab shne ki himmat ni..
V:hr tym ek jeisa ni rhta manyata bhai,zindgi me jb koi aye hmari khushi ki wjh bne usse behter insan is duniya me koi ni...sochna manyata bhai...

Manyata uski trf decent tarike se dekhti h...

V:jo dil me h,wo btadena chahiye,use to specialy jiske liye feel krti ho.khin past k dar k chakker me,apna presnt na kho do...
wrna khi aisa na ho,'tu pyar h kisi or ka tujhe chahta koi or h'wo smile krta h..or chla jata h...

Manyata sochne lgti h'kya mujhe such me...

In nxt mrng...
M:dadi,maa main ofice ja rhi hu..bye
J:di,gud mrng...
M:gud mrng j,chal main chlti hu..late ho jaugi wrna...
J(thout):jaiye di,kuch din bad hm 7th chlege...
'ah,ha di bye...
She make a evil face...

Manyata ofice phuchti h,or uske piche uday bi phuchta h...

Manyata jaldi-2 bhaag ri hoti h,to uday piche se run krta hua ata h or manyata ko apna shoulder se thoda sa push krta h'or uska ear me bolta hua jata h,'gud mrng dost,tum mujhse dhire bhagti ho..

Manyata ruk jati h or hsne lgti h..
Or uday use hske dekhta h or chla jata h...

Office member..
Boy:sir bdal gye h,gussa ni krte..
Grl:hste huye kitne cute lgte h...haaayee..hmesha se chahta thi inhe hste huye dekhne ki,aaj puri hogai..

M(dhire-2):'ye sb inhe cute kyn khte h,hste huye to sb aache lgte h,gadhi'..

Maneger announcment krta h..
'saara ofice staff presentation hall me aajaye'

All member colect hote h..uday ata h..

U:sit ol of u...
U:mr.sexsena k 7th hmari deal final ho gai h..
Uday jb bolta h to uske face pe means gussa bilkul ni h,uska face phle jyada glow kr rha h...
Or wha beithi grls,presentation pe ni,uday pe dhyan de ri h..
Or manyata ka concentration uday pe ni un grls pe h,jealousy se unhe dekh ri h...
Uday bolna bnd krta h.
U(smile k 7th):ha,to mis.kamya aap btaiye keisa lga aapko hmara plan..aap hmari cmpany ki purani worker h.
Kamya(little faint):sir bhoot acha lga,apki smile.. Manyata shocked hoke uski trf dekhti h..
U:sry..
K:mtlb sir presantation..
Uday aise hi 5-6 logo se puchta h,sb usko smile krta dekh k sb ajeeb behave kr rhey h...

Manyata unko dekh k gusa ho ri hoti h..
Tb uday manyata se puchta h'tumhein keisa lgta prestation manyata?

M:aacha tha...
U:sbse bst part kya lga prestation ka.?
Manyata uday ki trf dekhti h,litle eyecntct..
M:aapki smil...a,a,a
Wo.wo.
U:wo kya?
M:of,oh..aap hmese sawal puch rhe ho?koi joke ni suna rhe ho jo ye smile kr rhey ho...aise bi koh swal krta h ha ni to..

Wo jb bolti h tb,uday use surprized hoke dekhta h..
M(realize):ye kya bol ri hu
sry sir...

U:meeting over aap sb ja skte h...
Manyata sbse phle bhagti h..wha se..

Uday use dekhta h,or hsta h'pagl h ye'...

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Pari

it was so ice i could actually imagine the scene please pm me when u write nest u rock