'Bas itna sa khwaab hai' FF part3 pg1 M's heart belong2uv

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Posted: 13 years ago
#1
in my ff all characters are same and story like kidnapping are same and it is a continution after uday getting bail from the jail and here comes the major twist that here ds is a vampire and uday is also a vampire manyata is a semivampire here and manyata do not know that she is semivampire.rest all are human.u got to know in the story further that how ds got converted as vampire and why manayata is semi vampire when brijraj is a human being.

Promo for the ff's first part-
uday walking in the jungle very slowly looking sad and this song plays in background




tanhai kay safar main

chalna sabar say

koi na nazar main ha

jab khawab main chor jai

sochon ko nibha na pain

din woh yaad aain na

khata hogai saza hogai

puraney din yaad aain na

duniya kay is shor main

sikha hai mar kay hoti zindagi kia

main doob raha doob raha

bachana
mujay bachana

jagmagati howi raat ye

lab pay hain shikayatain

koi nahi muj ko sun raha

dhalta din mujboor hai

manzil zara door hai

bhuj raha umeedon ka chirag

khata hogai saza hogai

puraney din yaad aain na

duniya kay is shor main sikha hai mar kay

hoti zindagi kia

main doob raha doob raha
bachana
mujay bachana main doob raha doob raha
bachana
mujay bachana
jagmagati howi raat ye
lab pay hain shikayatain koi nahi muj ko sun raha dhalta din mujboor hai manzil zara door hai
bujh raha umeedon ka chirag
khata hogai saza hogai
puraney din yaad aain na duniya kay is shor main sikha hai mar kay
hoti zindagi kia
main doob raha doob raha bachana mujay bachana main doob raha doob raha bachana mujay bachana
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 1

new character

arshad(imagine vivian dsena as arshad)=vampire friend of uv

in the jungle


uday hunting a wolf.he hunts two wolf and drank their blood.

Arshad=hey,uv why not you try human blood.

Uv=bro u know very well that i am a pure vegetarian (for vampires the vampire who drink human blood are non vegetarian and the one who drink animal blood are vegetarian lol)

arshad=kya manyata ab bhi tumse nafrat karti hai.

Uv=nai wo to hum se pyar karti hai par wo khud hi nahi janti par ek na ek din wo hame jarur chahegi.

Arshad=wo thik hai bro par manyata ke chahne wale bahut hai akhir wo duniya ki sabse khubsurat vampire hai.use to insaan aur vampire dono pasand karte hai.

Uv=hamara aur manyata ka rishta bahut atoot hai tumne dekha nahi hamare chute hi uspe se jehar ka asar utar gaya.

Arshad=ha wo to hai

tum dono ke ek hote hi tum dono human ban jaoge.

Uv=wahi to hum manyata ki aur manyata hamari jindgi hai aur hum use iska ehsaas dilane ja rahe hai.


Then all the event like uv sending shagun to manyata and manyata's aproval for auction took place as shown in the serial.

To be continue

precap-akash enter the auction hall and seeing him manyata appolize to uv.
Posted: 13 years ago
#3
hey arif nice one vampires cool hey pls so some manveer scene shown ikpkyek maneta n somke vampire inj action cenes of uday
pls update soon n pls pm me when update pls
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Posted: 13 years ago
#4
It's awesome...vampire theme is nice...i love vampire story...
Pls continue soon...and pls pm when it will be update to inform..😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#5
Ok i will inform u all when i'll update.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#6
Part 2

auction on the go

when uv bid 2 crore at the moment akash enter and bid 50 crore

uv was shocked by seeing akash and due to shock he was speechless hence he was totally lost there fore akash won the bid.manyata was happy seeing akash but she at first said sorry to uv.then hugged akash.akash smiled evilly.he then brought manyata with him outside.uv followed him and he saw that akash was about to kiss manyata but wait he saw that akash bring out his fang and pressed his teeth into manyata's neck

manyata=crying,choro akash dard ho raha hai.ye tum kya kar rahe ho.

Akash=chup kar bewakoof mera naam akash nahi hai mera naam to "kacharu" hai aur mai ek vampire hu

manyata=jhooth kyu bol rahe ho akash

kacharu=maine akash ban ke tere sath pyar ka naatak kiya tha kyu ki mai tera khoon pe ke duniya ka sabse powerfull aur sexy vampire banna chahta tha kyuki jo bhi tera khun piyega wo powerful ban jaega kyu ki tu ek semivampire hai aur tu insaano ki yuvrani hai.

Manyata=akash bas kar mai koi vampire nai hu ha nai to

kacharu slaped manyata and her lips starts bleeding .

Kacharu=mai akash nai hu tujhe samajh me nai aata kya

uv=tumhari himmat kaise hui kacharu princess ko hath lagane ki.

Then the fight between uv and k started.

Uv beats k badly and drived the wood stake in k's heart.

So finally akash is dead in real.

The uv heads on to the unconcious m and kissed her lips fondly and also kissed her legs and hand which had wound mark of the nails of akash.so in short he gave kiss therapy to manyata.

Precap=>manyata questioning ds that how i am semi vampire?
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Posted: 13 years ago
#7
Nice one.n pliz add me in ur pm list.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#8
wow...
tahnks 4 pm...😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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love it
Posted: 13 years ago
#10
TNNX FOR THE PM PLS KEEP IT A LIL LONGER GOOD JAB

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