Ff_ do jism ek jaan (manveer) updated part_ 10 pg_59 - Page 9

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Posted: 13 years ago
#81
When will u update Anny?now i cant wait sweetheart.pliz pliz pliz update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#82
Awww hw sweet .actually i gt lil bit lazzy :):)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83
dyin 4 ur update swthrt plz make it soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84
Thanx kushi i m glad dat u liked my ff
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
Hmm I really like this ff, please update!

Simran :D...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: annysyed

Awww hw sweet .actually i gt lil bit lazzy :):)


bass bass aur nahi warna mujhe diabetes ho jaye ga.anyways cont soon na yaar.cont...choon...Anny.dying for ur update.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#87
Hey nia i m busy with my czn sis engagement after dat i will update next part,,,,,,by d way i m not dat sweet which causes diabetes , i m sugar free hehehe
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Posted: 13 years ago
#88
PART 4 ...uV:diya get out of my room.MANYA:not urs ,itz ours.UV:r u mad,manyata goes towards udays wadrobe and opens it.UV:dnt u dare to touch my wadrobe.MANYA:again my ,no no itz ours wadrobe.UV:wat d hell z gng on ,manyata cm close to uday and hugs him tightly,,uday hum hi tumhari princess hai,jiska intezaar apko bachpan se tha woh hum hi hai,hum manyata hai,uday broke d hug in anger.UV:meri princess ka naam b mat lo,tumhari himat kaisai huvi meri princess ki jageh lanai ki,uv grabd manyatas arms.MANYA:uday u r hurting me.UV:sshhh dnt u dare to utter one more word frm ur mouth ,tum ye sab paisoo k liyai kar rahi ho ,phelai bata diya hota toh hum de detai ,humarai sath ek hi bed par sonai ki zaroorat hi nhi padti,manyata was shockd to hear such harsh words frm uday,she ran away frm mahal and reachs on open road,she was crying dat she didnt realise dat she z walking in mddle of d road...UV:driver gadi jaldi nikalo humein late ho raha hai.D:je sir.UV POV,humara dil itna pareshaan kyun ho raha hai...ROAD SCENE.manyata was walking n d road n was remmberng dose harsh word ,suddenly a big truck hits her very high n den fell on ground.3RD PERSONs pov,d blood was oozng frm her whole body,every breath was decreasing her time,she was lyng dere lke an angel,aisa lag raha tha ki uski zindagi khatam honai ko hai bas uski ankhein kisi ka intezzar kar rahi thi. Manyata was dead but a lil bit alive ,she was able to hear crowd but was not able to response.MANYA POV,,kahan hai aap uday bas ek akhri bar dekhna chatai hai tumhai,phir mar b jayai toh koi gham nhi,ab b javo uaday,mera saans lena muskil ho raha hai,humari sansai humse cheen rhi hai,kyunki aaj manyata ki zindagi ka akhri din hai,humari ruh bohut door jaa rhi hai uday,bas apko dekhnai ki deri hai,humarai pass samay bohut kam hai uday bohut kam time bacha hai,hey baghvan bas tab tak sansai mat cheenai jab tak na mein uday ko dekhouday samay nikalta jaa raha hai aur humari rub b humse door hoti jaa rahi hai.CAR ScENE.UV:driver gadi kyun roki tumnai.D:sir agai kisi ladki ki dead body hai.UV:mein dekh k ata hoon,uday reachs to manyata and turns her head.uv was shockd diya ,ankhein kholo diya ,open ur eyes u r a brave girl ankhein kholo,merai liyai ,manyata open her eyes ,she was pointing her finger towards her locket.UV:haan diya bolo kya ,ye locket khol k dena hai kya,manyata nodded,uv reachs towards her neck n saw d sam locket with a ring hangng in it,uv was shockd,princesss,he den opens her locket n saw d sam photos.UV:tum hamari princess ho,humari princess manyata,ye sab meri wajeh se huva tum subah mujhe yehi kehnai ki koshish kar rhai thi aur meine tumhari baat hi nhi sunni,hum tumhein kuch nhi honai deengai kuch b nhi .MANYA:i.i.luv u u.u.day,UV:luv u too princess,uday took manyata into his arms and rushs towards car.UV :driver jaldi chalo,cmon quick,driver jaigrah aur devgrah family ko princess k barai mein inform karo ,aur humarai liyai ek flight bulvavo.manyatas head was resting in udays lap,uday hugd her tightly and kissd her whole face,MANYA PoV...shayid itna hi sath tha humari kismat mein ,uday was crying tears wre rollng down frm his eyes n fell on manyatas face,MANYA pov,aap aisa mat royiyai kyunki humari ruh ko bohut takleef ho gi.UV:tumhein ek bar khoya ,agar iss bar phir se khodiya toh woh humari zindagi ka akhri din hoga kyun tum ho toh hum b hai,agartum nhi toh kuch b nhi humara wajood nhi,MANYA POV...humara pyaar sacha hai ,par iss zindagi mein itna hi sath likha tha ,par hum aglai janam mein phirse ayeengai ,apki manyata ,apki princess ban kar,humara sath kam tha par humara pyaar amar hai,DRIVER...sir gustaki maaf par humein lagta hai ki princess manyata z no more.UV:jus shut ur mouth humari princess ko kuch nhi hoga,UV:manayata open ur eyes my luv ,open ur eyes my life ,ek bar meri taraf dekho,mujhse lado,ye sab meri wajeh se huva utho fight karo merai sath,ek bar humara naam lo,ek bar humein uday keh k bulavo.MANYA POV...ab koi faida nhi yeh zindagi b ajeeb hai ,jab kushi di toh saansai cheen li.UV:utho princess utho ,tumhein wapis ana hi hoga humarai liyai.MANYA POv..kaisai wapis avo,hum apki duniya ko chod kar ayai hai,hum humari dusri duniya mein pounch b gyai hai,aglai janam mein phir milege,hum bohut door aa chukai hai jaa se hum wapis nhi aasaktai hai,...UV :uthona princess humein bohut darr lag raha hai .MANYA POV..kaisai uthai uday yeh toh sirf humara jism apkai pass hai, humari ruh toh dusri duniya mein hai,hum apki duniya se bohut door hai...,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,PRECAP...uday sleeping on manyatas dead body...door raho aap sab humari princess se ,unnati:dada meri baat toh suno.UV:sshhh choti chup princess disturb ho jayai gi ,woh so rahi hai ,thak gyi haina isliyai ,agar woh neend mein disturb ho jati hai ,toh woh gussa hoti hai,
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Posted: 13 years ago
#89
Ahhh!!! tell ki manyata is dead!!! ahhh!!! keep her alive pls!!! guess sum miracle will happen!!!! pls sum miracle happen!!! very nice ypdate though!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#90
Thanx gowri jus wait n watch and remmber manyatas word PHIR MELIGE

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