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Posted: 13 years ago
#61
the promo was awesome update soon really cant wait for the next part and hope manyata find out that its uday who she has been waiting for update soon and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanx priya radev ,a great twist z cmng
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Super dooper interesting precap anny...loved it...update soon and do pm me :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART 3RD...UV:chotti hum meetng k liyai jaa rahai hai,tum manyata k dresses merai wadrobe mein fix karna.UNNATI:kk dada.uv leaves d roomand went towards parkng area,UV:miss diya jaldi se car mein beithiyai,shayid hum late ho rahai hai.MANY:turns her head on other side and wipe her tears, ok sir arai hai,both sat in d car.UV:miss diya apna seat belt pehno.MANY:hm,after half an hour dey reach uv's office.UV:miss diya presentation tiyaar haina.MANY:yes sir,both went towards uvs cabin,MANY starts presentation uv was starng at manyata whole tym,he was lost in her innocense and beauty,UV pov,humein ismein princess kyun dikhayi deti hai,MR.SHARMa,thanx miss diya presentation was awesome,mr.uv toh hum yeh deal finilize karaein,uday was busy in starng manyata,MANY:sir aap theek toh haina,UV:hm,MANY:toh deal finilize karai.UV:hm still starng at manyata,mr.sharma lvs d cabin,uv walked towards manyataand manyata bckng off.UV:with painful eyes aisa kya hai tummein,and he hugs her tightly,MANY pov yeh iss khadoos ko kya hogya,isnai humain itni zor se kyun pakda hai,suddenly manyata feels his lips on her sholder,manyata closes her eyes cuz she wz also enjoyng d hug and kiss,uday wz still kisng manyatas sholder,suddenly realises her position,MANYA:sir i think ab humein ghar chalna chahiyai,uv realises wat he has done,UV:hm tum car mein baitho hum atai hai,manayata nodded and lvs d cabin.CAR SCENE..MANY:sir hum yeh kaha jaa rahai hai.UV:my club.MANY:sir hum ghar jana chatai hai.UV:hum tumharai boss hai ya tum boss ho,agar tum itni raat ko akailai jana chati ho toh jaa sakti ho,manyatas pov...khadoos ab mujhai inakai sath jana padai ga,CLUB SCENE.uv remmbers office hug and kiss,uday's pov.hum apni princess ko cheat nhi kar saktai hai,khun kiya humnai aisa,he wz really very upset,UV:drink ek do,ek aur ,ek aur ,ek aur,uv wz now fully drunk.MANY:bas kijiyai sir.UV:turns hz head and start lookng into manyatas eyes,he grabd her arm and hold her by her waist,manyata wz breathng heavy cuz of closeness of uv,MANY:sir yeh aap kya kar rahai hai,UV:tum meri princess hona,tumhain pata hai jab b tum merai pass atai ho toh humari dil k dadkhnai teez hoti hai,hum tumhein mehsoos kar saktai hai,phir kyun chod k chali gyi tum princess,i luv u princess,hum apkai bina adhorai hai,MANY:chaliyai ghar chaltai hai,sambal k sir ,hum aapki madad kartai hai,aap toh chal b nhi saktai hai,manyatas pov.oh God uv sir drive nhi kar saktai ab humein hi drive karna hai,both sat in d car,manata,uv sir k kahaani bilkul humari jaisi hai ,khahin yeh wahi toh nhi,arai nhi diya kya soch rahi hai tu,both reach rajmahal,manyata holdng uvs arm chaliyai sir hum apko apkai room tak chod aatai hai,UV's room scenes.both manyata and uday reach towards bed,tak tak.MAnya:kuch girnai ki awaaz ayi ,acha yeh locket uv sir ka,sir aap aisai hi rahiyai hum apko apka locket utha k detai hai.UV:ismein hum dono k phtos hai,hum b tumein aisa locket diya thana,manyatas pov,strange merai pass b aisa hi locket hai aur usmein b photos hai ,ek kaam karti hoon phelai ye locket khol k dekti hoon ki uv ki princess kon hai,manyata opens locket and wz shockd,baghvan g yeh kya hai,iska matalab ye hai ki uv sir merai honai walai pati hai,tears wre runng frm her eyes,hum jiska intezzar kar rahai thai woh itnai dinno humarai khareeb thai,hum apnai dil ko samaj kyun nhi payai jo humesha innki taraf kheccha chala jata tha,hum apsai bohut pyaar kartai uv sir ,i mean u.u.uday,she closes d locket andplace it on d table.UV:uday hum apki princess hai,she cupd his face in her hands,she kisd him on his cheek and den hugd him tightly,uday apko nhi pata hai ki humnai iss din ka kitna intezaar kya,aaj apnai humein poora kar diya,thanx meri zindagi mein wapis anai k liyai,she wz abt to broke d hug wen her locket got stck in uday shirt button ,manyata looses her balance and both fall on d bed ,uday wz on top of her.Uv:i luv u princess.MANYA pov ,oh no ab hum kaisa uthin gai ,she wz not able to move cuz udayz whole weight wz on her body,uday stares into her eyes,uday tum roo kyun rahi ho ,manyata:hum roo nhi rahai hai hum kush hai ,aap iss tym nhi samjee gai kyunki bohut drunk ho hum kal batai hai ,uv still on top of her and cms close to manyata ,uday kisd her on her cheeks,manata ..aj hum aapko rokigai nhi yeh aapka haq hai,uday kisd her lips and manyata closes her eyes,uday wz suckng manyatas lips and manyata gv it to bck .MAnYaA pov ..lagta hai humein aaj raat aisai hi soona padai ga kyun hum uth hi nhi paa rahai hai ,uday wz kissng her neck and both fell asleep.NEXT MORNING...uday wakes up ist ,ouch my head ,suddenly he saw dat he z lyng on top of manayata,manyata wakes up..gud morning princey,uv confused ,wot d hell tum meri room mein mya kar rahi ho ,aur woh b aisai ek hi bed pe aur hum tumharai upar yak,manyata..ab toh utho merai bck mein pain ho raha apkai wght ki waja sai,puri raat apna weight humarai upar ,u shld thank me,UV: r u mad get out of my room now,MANYA:let me clear u dis z our room not ur
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PRECAP...uv to manyata ...miss diya don't u dare to touch my wadrobe.manyata,,,not ur ,itz ours aur aaj hum apkai clothes choose karein gai,uv...wot d hell z going on ,manyata...uday apni princess se aisai baat nhi kartai ,hum hum hi woh hai jiska apko intezzar hai ,jo apkai locket mein hai woh hum hai,uv...tumhari himat kaisai huvi meri princess ki jageh lanai ka,mujhai bol diya hota ki kitnai paisai chahiyai hum de datai ,ek sath raat bitanai ki nobat hi nhi atai, mnayta cryng and lvs d rajmahal ...NEXT SCENE...manayatas accident and uday knowing d truth
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Posted: 13 years ago
#66
Yay first one to comment.Awesome awesome n awesome update.Continue soon n thanks for pm.
Edited by princessnia - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67
Wow was a real gud update and pm me wen u update!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68

Awww welcome anny.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#69
Amazing update Anny 👍🏼
Lol. Liked the last line of Manyata a lot. Poor Uday must be thinking his employee has lost her mind or something 😆
Can't wait to see what Uday's reaction to it would be.
So update soon.
And thanks for the PM! 😊

Just read the precap. Wow sounds interesting. Now I am even more curious. Lol.
Edited by fia21 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sorry. Double post hogaya!
Edited by fia21 - 13 years ago

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