Ff_ do jism ek jaan (manveer) updated part_ 10 pg_59

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Hello frndz dis z my first ff hope u guyz lke this...here z d character sktch...princeuv: the most eligible bachlor,handsm hunk , hot ,smart,intellegent ,but arrogant,arrogant isliayi kyunnki uska pyaar,uski mangaitar manyata ussai bachpan mein chod k chali gyi ,uv kehta hai ki woh pyaar mein blv nhi aab karta, but manyata ko nhi bool sakta, bas uski aankhoon mein intezzar dikhta hai...princess manyata:she did not know dat she z a princess,her name z diya, she knows dat she z engaged but woh uday ka naam bool gyi hai,she had a dim memories of her childhood engagment...mernali devi:rajmata of devgrah ,very clever and wise women,grandmaa of manyata and jay... Jay nandini: lil sis of manyata ,but very loving person...brijraj and koman:carng parents of m and j...griraj:father of uday...unnati:sis of udau,beautiful.intellegent ,lovng and stylish...vijay:czn of j and m...manveer: unka pyaar bohut hi strong hai,door hokai b ek doosrai ki aahat ko mehsoos kartai hai,jism do hai par roh ek hi, dil do hai par dadkhan ek hi, dimag do hai par soch ek hi...this z diff story ,if u lke den lve cmnts ,iss ff mein phelai manyata ka confession hoga ,frndz humnai yeh ff hindi mei likhnai ki koshish ki hai... Ist promo b hum jaldi hi deegai ,hey liknai mein bohut probs hogi cuz i hav a promb in my laptop aur cellphone se type karna kitna hectic hota hai ,yeh aap humse behtar jaantai hai
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ist promo: uv returng frm london to india,aur yaha se diya(manyata) uski frnd suhana airport jaa rahai hai , suhana k bf druv ko pick karnai , when manyata enters in airport ... Uv: princess,...diya turrng her head... Suhana: kya huva diya... Diya:aisa laga jaisa kisi ne humai bulaya...uday's pov_aisa lag raha hai jaisai princess yahan hi khain hai, humarai bohut hi kareeb, uday ye hum kya soch raha hai,kya uskai pyaar ne apko itna kamzoor bana diya hai ... Diya: suhana tumhain pata hai jis ladkai ka photograph merai locket mein hai yani mera mangaitar, jisai mein janti b nhi hoon aisa lag raha hai ki woh yahi khain merai aas pass hai,suddenly diya/manyata bumped into uv, uv wot d hell ,diya:sry sry sry i 'm really sry mera apko hurt karnai ka koi intension nhi tha ,but uv ne abi diya ka chehra nhi dekha , uv :don't u hav eyes ,hw dare u ,tu yuvraj uv k raastai mein ayi ...next scene btw griraj and uv , griraj : uv beta aap manyata ko booltai ku nhi hai, woh humari zindagi ser kab jaa chuki hai,aur hum yeh b nhi jaantai hai ki kya woh zinda hai b ya nhi, uv:stop it dad woh zinda hai,kyunkiproof yeh hai ki yuvraj uv ki sansain abi chal rahi hai,isliyai woh zinda hai
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMG...wen i read the char. sketch i thought it would be an interesting ff...bt u blowed my mind with the promo...especially the last lyn...i hv seriously fallen in luv with the lyn...as well as with ur ff...already...and u hvn't even started it yet :P...plzzz plzzz plzzz cont. it...i can't w8 to read the first ch...plz update it soon...!! :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Such a nice ff.n the promo was just wow.cont soon n pm m if u can.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Interesting!! Plzzz do continue soon n plzz pm me if possible!! Thanks in advance!!:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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really Nice please continue dis ff soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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LOVED IT...AWESOME...i loved that last line aloottt...the last line of promo...hayeee...
and plz continue soon and add me to ur PM list plzzz...
ur concept is quit interesting...looking forward to it...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanx akshit i will update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanx princessnia vl surely pm u:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanx aklover vl surely update soon:)

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