Ff_ do jism ek jaan (manveer) updated part_ 10 pg_59 - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
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{part 2nd} suhana:diya tum itna restless kyun feel kar rahi ho.diya:tum druv ko lai avo hum yahi intezaar kartai hai,manyatas pov...humain pani pena chahiyai phir hum better feel karein gai,suddenly manyata bumps into some1.manyata:sry sry i'm realy sry.uv:wat d hell,don't u hav eyes.manyata turns her face towards uv,uv was abt to sht on manyata but stops wen he saw her innocent face,dey both stare into each others eyes and share a cute but intense eye lock,but uv cm bck to his senses.uv:driver gadi jaldi nikalo,uv sat into the car.uv:fast drive karo humein ghar jaldi pochna hai,griraj:welcum bck my son hw r u.uv:i'm f9 dad,ds:kaisai hai aap uday betawith tears in her eyes,uv huga her and whispers into her ears with painful voice ds hum waisai hi hai jaisai princess humein chod k chali gyi thi,komal :kaisai hai aap uday beta.uv:hey my girlfrnd hw r u.komal:aap b na khabi nhi sudrogai.uv:meri cute se gf k liyai toh khabi b nhi ,khain aapnai kissi aur ko toh bf nhi banaya,komal:nhi apkai hotai huvai toh koi nhi.brijraj:beta kaisai hai aap.uv:hum theek hai uncle.unnati:hey watz up dada.uv:nthng spl my lil princess.uv:dad hum aram karna chatai hai,uv:gud night evey1 ...uvs room...unnati dada kya hum andar a saktai hai.uv:cm in chotti.unti:dada yeh sarai dresses merai liyai hai kya.uv:nhi yeh manyata k hai,humnai aaj tak jab b shopng ki toh uskai liyai b kii.gri:aap usai boltai kyun nhi hai uskai pyaar ne apko kamzor bana diya hai.uv:agar yeh kamzori hai toh humein yeh kamzori pasand hai.gri:hum toh ye b nhi jantai hai ki kya woh zinda hai b ya nhi.uv:woh zinda hai dad kyunki abi uv ki sansai chal rhi hai,both unnati and gri lve d room.uv: on his knees with tears in his eyes kyun princess kyun humein yu akaila chod k kyun chali gyi aap,apkai bina yuvraj adhoorai hai,yeh adhoorapan yeh akalapan kyun diya apnai humai kyun .gri on phone,jisi ladki ne humarai office k liyai interview diya tha ussai hum ubeta k liyai personal asisstant appoint kartai hai ussai inform karo ki woh kal subha yaha honi chahiya.suhana:diya tumhai job mili yuvraaj uv ki p.a,abi call aya tha,both hugs each other.next morning,,,uvs room.hello sir aap bohut late ho rahai hai aaj aapki meeting hai.uv turns his head tum.diya:aap ,oh no toh aap yuvraj hai.uv:tum yahan kya kar rhi ho.diya:sir woh mein.uv:getout of my room now.diya:but sir.uv:grabd her arm & pushd her out of his room and shut d door on her face,diyas hand got stck into door & tears wre rollng down on her cheeks..ouch,ahhh.uv opens d door,wot hapn ,tum ro kyun rahi ho den uday saw her wouded hand.uv:andar avo.diya:nhi sir hum yahi theek hai.uv:shouts meine kaha na andar avo &diya cm inside d room.uv:tum iss dewaar k sath kyun baithi ho,kya yaha pe jageh nhi hai.diya:hum yhi theek hai.uv:apna hath do,hum tumharai iss chot ko wash karegai,diya gav her hand to uv,while uv was washng her wound diya was starng at uday.uv:bohut dard ho raha haina,tears wre rollng down through her cheeks,both stare into each others eyes and share eyelock.uv kissd manyatas wounded hand &diya closd her eyes.uv moved towards her forehead and kissd her ,den kissd her eye lids,den kissd her cheek.uv bend her head &kissd her on her neck abt15mins,den uday leand towards her lips and was abt to kiss her lips and he cm bck to his senses.uvs pov,yeh hum kya kar rahai thai,yeh kya horaha hai humai, he grabd diyas arm in anger.uv:hey miss wot ever u r i hate u ,nafrat hai mujhai tumse,diya lvs d room and went towards garden,diya pov...yeh humnai kya kiya ,humnai ussai chunai kaisai diya,uskai chutai hi humarai andar yeh kya ho raha hai,she opens her locket,hum apse pyaar kartai hai,aap humarai mangaitar hai .uv:also opens his locket ,i luv u princess ,pata nhi kyun princess jab b woh ladki humarai pass ati hai toh lagta hai ki aap humarai pass ho,usski eyes aur apki eyes bilkul waisi hi innocent hai,uski smell aap jaisi hai, but yuvraj uday veer singh only loves manyata uday veer sing,hum apki jageh khabi b kissi aur ko nhi de saktai hai .griraj:uday toh aap apni p.a se milai ,uska naam diya hai,aur haan uv hum manyata k dushman nhi hai ,apko toh yaad hi hoga ki humnai humesha aapse aur unnati se ziyada manyata ko pyaar diya hai,apko yaad hai woh bachpan mein humai apna boy frnd kehti thi aur apnai aap ko humari gf ,toh yeh bf apni gf ka intezaar kar raha hai ,uday beta aapko jalnai ki smell nhi aarahi hai.uv:wot.gri:i think tum jealous ho rahai ho humse kyunki apki honai wali biwi humari gf hai,ab har pati ko bura toh lagta hai jab uski biwi ka alreay koi aur bf ho,both smile.gri:uv beta aisai hi smile kartai ho aur haan agar aap manyata k yadoon k saharai jeenai mein kush hai toh hum b kush hai ,uv: thanx dad mujhai samjnai k liya and griraj lvs d room, unnati: dada kya kar rahai ho.uv: kuch nhi chotti hum bas meetng k liyai jarai hai .unnati:kya dada abi aap kal hi ayai thoda rest karna tha.uv:accha choti hum chaltai hai tum merai closet mein ek side pe manyta k dresses rakhana.unnati:kk dada...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Precap... Bedroom scenes between manveer,manyats locket gt stck into udays shirt,manyata looses her balance and both fall on bed ,uday at d top of manyata:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi anny...
Nice update...intresting story...plz countinue
Edited by Poojapange - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
Amazing update Anny 👍🏼
Precap sounds interesting.
Update the next part soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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It was really good anny...great job...update soon :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awww...how can anyone love someone so much...😳plz update soon...can't wait to read the nxt part...
this update was awesome...loved it...👍🏼
thank u so much for PM...
Edited by -JEHAN- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
Thanx fia di vl surely update next part, i know i'm not a good writer
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Can i tell you how awesome that was..??? And yea thnx d PM..!! Continue soon...!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanx jehan ,thanku sho sho much
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: annysyed

Thanx fia di vl surely update next part, i know i'm not a good writer



Don't say that Anny. You are a really good writer. Just remember one thing. Nobody is perfect and there is always room for improvement in a person's life. The more you practice writing the better you'll get at it. So don't ever think you're not a good writer. Mujhe dekho. Maine to koi FF OS SS likha bhi nai aaj tak 😛 . Lol. You are a good writer okay? Just keep practising because Practise makes a man perfect 😊 . You're doing a good job. Keep it up! 👍🏼

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