ManVeer SS: Fallen Angel - Chapter 21 - pg. 145 - Page 92

Originally posted by: vampire12345678

K the whole thing was awesome and i loved it i am so super glad u did not listen to fia and gave us a manveer update everything was so beautiful i loved manyata the way she acted like a true freind, the way she acted super romantic in the jeep and the kiss part was so so so dreamy i loved the whole update and the whole flashback was good i love ranvijay and meera and manveer please update soon and thanks for the pm 😃

Originally posted by: fia21

And since when do you think I even care? 😉

Originally posted by: fia21

Hawww Ranju yeh to seedhi seedhi black mailing hai 😲
Come one man, you can't do this to me *runs away crying*
Okay I'll end my drama here 😛 . But seriously I really want to read another OS from you. Loved the two that you wrote. And I promise I will try writing another one too as soon as possible. You know I am a little caught up these days 😳 . And on top of that, I am sick 😒 . But will definitely try to write one soon, only and only for my dearest Hubby 🤗

Originally posted by: Sunshinegirll

wow super duper update😃
parts of it was hilarious including the moral😆😆

n it was romantic as well...
loved the line " cant lose you even for you"😳😳
n d way uday responded to manyata's lecture was so cute.. 😆 she was almost shouting at him n he is on cloud 9 after understanding that his princess too loves him😆

btw wat kind of pill was that.. n why dint uday let her sleep... if it was a sleeping pill.. wats wrong in sleeping for few hours.. 😕
manyata saying u r too comfortable to sleep on was so cute n romantic..
haha poor uday cudnt let her do so or even enjoy her comment 😆
n manyata expecting uday to lift her n uday saying u urself have to get into the jeep was again really cute...😳
uday thinking of kissing her after getting reminded of sleeping beauty was so funny😆
n manyata saying not bad halkat veda...😳 n thinking of saying she is sleepy again😆


I just loved this chapter... Cant find more words...
each n every single scene was so so so cute😳😳👏

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

wow loved it dear thanks for pm!

Originally posted by: Grenade

I not only really liked this update, i really really loved it..!! Like Gosh, there were so many adorable scenes out there..I was seriously 'aww'ing every few seconds..right from-
"Uday, mujhe sone kyun nahi deh
rahe ho. Waise bhi, you're so
comfortable to sleep on," Manyata
said tiredly.

To
"Are you sure Princess you can make
it? Otherwise..." Uday winked.
"Yes. I'm sure. I feel wide awake,"
Manyata said determinedly although
really in her head she was so
tempted to just say no, just to kiss
Uday again. But Manyata controlled
those emotions.

Has to be the cutest chapter I've ever read..!! Oh and I found one more thing super super cute..totally childish kinda cute, so Manyata-like, lol :

She walked only a few
steps then turned around and walked
back.
"I hate you Udayveer Singh!"
Manyata shouted then finally
stomped away after hearing Uday
chuckle.
A brilliant job once again, Ranjana and I know it will only keep getting better!! :)
Update sooon!

Originally posted by: xxDaydreameRxx

Thanks Payal! 🤗

I am soo happy you liked it!! 😳 Honestly your guys' comments just pressure me to write even better in the hopes that I wont ever disappoint you. Thank you so much for always being so supportive! 😳

But Payal even now I am not gonna let go of this opportunity to say: please start an FF! Yea I know I am totally pestering you constantly but like reallyy I wanna read more of your wirtingg!!

Edited by xxDaydreameRxx - 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Sanarasheedroxx

Literally fairytales are nt crap...AWESOME Manyata ki bhasha mai bole toh Rapchikrapchundas

Originally posted by: udaymanyata07

👏👏thanks...awesome...superb...👏👏

Originally posted by: pmpm1

like like super like!! 👏👏

Great update as usual! and thanks for the pm. The best part of the update was the moral of the story. 😊