ManVeer SS: Fallen Angel - Chapter 21 - pg. 145 - Page 91

that was really awsum...🥱.

u r a superb writer👏...plz pm me for the next update.

Originally posted by: fia21

You updated early? And I didn't even need to threat you for it? 😲
Woah man today must be my lucky day 😉
I am going to quickly get to writing my comment now since you know I am sick and not being allowed to use the laptop for long by some certain people who I thought had left, but came back again because they are afraid I might pass out any minute due to my weakness 😛
Loved this chapter. It was utter cuteness, and VERY romantic too . Although I have to say, I noticed a lot of traces of ME in this chapter 🤔 . Don't worry, keep reading you'll get my point. Lol.
The flashback scene -----> BRILLIANT! 👏
Like really I was laughing so hard the whole time I was reading it. But it was too short Ranju
The Awesome Threesome is back 😉 . Gosh I love these three together. Can't wait to see them all become a gang once again. These flashbacks are more interesting because they show a different side to both Uday and Ranvijay. A side that doesn't really exist now. How they used to be so carefree and fun-loving and bindaas type. Lol. Meera is still quite the same. But Ranvijay is altogether different. The flashbacks show a more hilarious, witty and cool Ranvijay whereas now he is like the total opposite of it. But that was until Manyata came along. Anyway so yea my favorite parts from the flashback and I must say, I always enjoy Ranvijay's dialogues the most in them:

"AND it's only because of me that we're all acing this thing. Admit it Meera, I was amazing up there," Ranvijay boasted.

"Is someone keeping you up these days...sorry nights," Ranvijay asked.

"Shutup...And no I'm just very very veryy hungry!"

"Makes more sense...If I can't woo you than who can?" Ranvijay asked.

"Hmm? Nahin, actually woh tumhe dekh kar humara peht bhar gaya," Uday admitted and Meera bursted out into laughter.

Now I could be totally wrong here, but the part where Meera was eating away like a starved cat, not caring a damn about what the two guys sitting infront of her would think of her, it sounded so much like me 🤔 . Especially during that particular incident that I PM-ed you once. Lol. I guess you were serious after all when you said that Meera is a mix of both me and you 😆 . Lol. And now comes my favorite part from the flashback scene that cracked me up to such an extent that I read it over and over again and than burst out laughing over and over again 😛 . Haha.

"That's not fair Meera, you can eat so much and still look so fit," Ranvijay whined.

"Be quiet," Meera told him.

"But like really where does all the food go? Hmm let's see..." Ranvijay looked at her from up to down.

"Obviously all the fat just goes to your boobs," Ranvijay stated thoughtfully after a while. (🤣🤣)

Meera started to choke on the milkshake and quickly coughed it out. She then proceeded to act like Ranvijay didn't exist.

"Ranvijay I don't know you."

"Meera why are you getting so offended. I mean it's a compliment-"

"UDAY!!!" Meera shouted for help.

Lmfao hahahahahahaha omg this part was freaking HILARIOUS 😆 . Poor Meera calling out for Uday for help. Lmao that was hilariously cute. Jeez man Ranvijay is awesome, like really he is. He is so casual about everything and doesn't even realize he might give people a heart-attack with his one-liners 😆 . I wonder how Meera will survive the rest of her life with Ranvijay and his cheesy comments 🤣

Okay now is it just me, or were there too many dialogues and less of your philosophical lines in this update? 😛 . Lol. Not complaining, trust me, because either way, I always love what you write 😊 . So Meera doesn't know about the Uday-Manyata-Ranvijay love triangle yet. That would be one heck of an interesting revelation. The whole Uday-Manyata scene in the corner of the club was really amazing. Meera cracking up listening to Manyata's swear words for Uday was so damn cute. And lol Manyata was trying to seduce Uday to divert his attention from Ranvijay and Meera 🤣 . Yea right Manyata, you need to work really hard on your seducing skills to convince your Prince 😉

"You know Princess, I was just rethinking things and now I think it's been way too long since I romanced anyone," Uday said in a seductive voice.

Oooh la la, way to go Princey 😉 . Lol. He sure knows how to turn a situation to his advantage. Hayeee how sexy

"Tumhe pata hai Uday, ke tum roz kehte ho ke tum mujhe kitni achi tara se jaante ho lekin sach toh yeh hai ke tum mujhe kabhi samajh hi nahi paye. Mujhse pyaar karte ho lekin aaj tak mujh par vishwaas nahi kiya. Pata hai kyun? Woh isiliye kyunki Yuvraaj Udayveer meri liye apni jaan deh sakhta hai lekin kabhi mere liye haar nahi sakhte! Tumhe hamesha yehi baat ka darr laga rehta hai, ke agar maine tumhe dokha de diya, agar mai tumhare haath se nikal gayi toh? Uday tumne aaj tak sirf mujhpe apna haq jitaya hai, pyaar toh kabhi kiya hi nahi kyunke vishwaas ke bina toh koi pyaar ho hi nahi sakhta!" Manyata finished.

Amazing <----- is all I am going to say for this part 👏 . That was actually sort of a much needed reality check for both Manyata and Uday. For Uday, because he needs to learn to trust the person he loves even in the oddest of situations, and how it's not always about winning and loosing when it comes to love. And for Manyata, because she too needs to realize a simple fact that she is the ONLY thing he actually cares about, it's always only about her and he couldn't care less about what Ranivijay does. It's only Manyata's actions that can affect him, no one else's, and she needs to understand that. But you explained it all really well in these lines below so I don't think I need to add further to it.

You're right Manyata. Yuvraaj Udayveer won't ever lose, because losing this game means losing you. And I can't lose you even for you. The idea itself was ridiculous...it was like expecting someone to breath without air. That was Manyata. She wasn't just his obsession, she was a necessity. She was like a drug that made him crave her more everyday and he knew that anything less than forever wasn't good enough to satisfy him.

The depth of Uday's love is scary is a way. Because once you begin to drown yourself in it, there's no going back. Maybe that's why we're all so crazy after him, be it the show itself, or an FF/SS/OS 😳 . Uday's reaction to Manyata's extra-long lecture was hilarious though 😆. Even I hate it when people do that to me so I can totally understand how frustrated Manyata must have felt looking at him smiling in such a serious situation 😛 . Lol.
Loved the entire part where the two men slip pills in Manyata's drink in attempt to take her away from there and Uday then beats the shit out of them. That was bad ass 👍🏼

"Uday, mujhe sone kyun nahi deh rahe ho. Waise bhi, you're so comfortable to sleep on," Manyata said tiredly.

"Princess, on a different occasion I would be delighted to hear that from you but not right now. Come on now get up," Uday ordered her.

Hahaha this was hilarious. Uday and his double meaning lines, gotta love this dude for them 😉. Remember when in the beginning I said I found traces of myself in this update? Well I found another one here, in Manyata's part. Lol. I could be totally wrong here, but something tells me I am not 😛 . You better give me some explanation missy 😆

Come on Uday, use your Disney Princess knowledge! There has to be some benefits from reading Choti all those bedtime stories. How did the Prince awaken Beauty from her sleep!!?? ... Kiss! Kiss! Kiss!

Who knew fairytales could come in handy someday 🤣 . Gosh Ranjana my eyes were literally popping out when I read this part, not because it shocked me, but I was surprised to see the innovation of your mind. I swear, no one other than you could have ever come up with something like that. Hats off to you girl 👏 . This kiss was by far the most unique from whatever I have read on ManVeer till now! Truly amazing. And utterly hot 😳 . Oh by the way, the "Disney Princess Knowledge" part was freaking hilarious 😆

Without a second more of delay, Uday crushed his lip on Manyata's and kissed her as hard as he could. Princess you can't give up on me. Come on, respond! Uday begged in his mind and then continued to kiss her like his life depended on it, which technically it did.

Now this might sound odd to you, but I found this part very hot ☺️ . Lol. The kiss was out of the world, but this particular part really caught my attention. The way Uday was waiting for her to respond to his kiss like his life depended on it was kinda sexy 😳 . Okay I am officially going crazy here, my fever has surely gotten to my head 😆 . I don't know why, but the whole impact of this part in my imagination was really very H-O-T!

The entire paragraph with the kiss that followed was truly amazing, with romance, passion, relief, intensity, desire, all mixed together beautifully. And I really loved it. I mean, who in their right minds wouldn't want to get kissed like that? 😉 . Lol. And Manyata wanted him BAD, her hormones were on fire 🤣 . I loved her flirty side in this update, It was a pleasant surprise. And she wasn't afraid to show her real feelings and emotions to Uday and thankfully wasn't excessively shy either.

"Are you sure Princess you can make it? Otherwise..." Uday winked.

Hawww control karo Prince jee ☺️ . Lmao 😉

Fabulous update Ranjana. Really I loved it from the bottom of my heart. It was so pleasant and there wasn't too much drama either so it felt like a breath of fresh air. But, I do like drama too 😉 . Hahaha. Great work Hubby. And lmao you are totally right. Fairytales are not useless crap, you just proved it 😆 . But we'll all have to act like Sleeping Beauty then 😉 . Although I must warn everybody with an "At Your Own Risk" signboard 🤣 . I know you would want to kill me for saying this but please update the next part soon 😳 . You know it's your fault for writing such an amazing story that has got your readers so curious and makes them highly impatient 😛 . I don't know what you have planned for your next update, but I think it would be nice if you showed Meera-Ranvijay's point of view in the next chapter. As in the scene that was happening between them while Uday and Manyata's meeting in the corner and later during the drive was going on. So in the next update it could be like the opposite thing where Meera and Ranvijay's meeting would be shown while simultaneously Uday and Manyata's scenes from this update would be going on. Did I make any sense? 🤔 . I think I should stop here now. Lol. Once again, marvelous update Hubby, keep them coming. And would be looking forward to more of Ranvijay-Meera-Uday flashback and present scenes 😃

Originally posted by: a.anu

wow! cool!super duper awesome manveer scene k liye a big hug!loved it. manveer kiss was so dreamy☺️ but in next part i want 2 read RV-meera meeting(after 5 years) n of-course manveer nokjhok.plzzzplzzzplzz.