ManVeer SS: Fallen Angel - Chapter 21 - pg. 145 - Page 90

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: CharmingAngel7

First of Yay I m the 1st one to comment (on ur FF) for the 1st time for a change😆 Secondly I jst woke up n chkd up ur FF I was like this when i saw u updated that was bit of a surprise i didnt expect an update i thought u'll update tomorrow bt was surprised ofcourse a pleasant one... now coming back to comment it was super awesome splendid I loved it to the core... first starting off with the flashback Meera stuffing all the food n guyz amazed by that was funny 😆 thn Manyata came in all of a sudden n started dragging Uday n surprised Meera with her colorful Manyata special language😆... lol uday embarrassed n Meera couldnt hold her laughter Manyata is one of a kind😉😆... & it turned out to b Manyata trying to get Runvijay & Meera back togetha so sweet😳 so Manyata is gonna b the cupid in Meera & Runvijay lovestory.. bt she cant fool Uday for long hes too good for that n he caught her what her plan was... lol Manyata trapped in her own plan.. again Uday going on abt Runvijay n all & the way Manyata replied i was like no more misunderstanding n fight & thn Manyata talked him thru abt importance of trust together with love that its equally important & thank God she did he needed the talk Manyata gave her... Uday smiling n chuckling was hilarious😆 no doubt he got manyata angered... & thn those men grrr the first & only name manyata called for when in danger was udays so sweet😳.. nxt ManVeer part dreamy dreamy dreamy Uday making all his fairytail knowledge into effect😉 i loved these dialogues:
"So now instead of focusing on the road and driving can you please like find some way to entertain me. You need to get that adrenaline rush running!" Manyata informed him.

"Ummm...okay..So Manyata what would you like me to do for you?" Uday asked unsure.

"Uday I am too tired for this! Figure it out yourself otherwise Good Night and Sweet Dreams to you!" Manyata shouted then proceeded to close her eyes.

"No Princess wait!" Uday shouted but by now Manyata had closed her eyes.

Great! She was resting away peacefully like Sleeping Beauty while he was having heart attacks...wait that's it! Come on Uday, use your Disney Princess knowledge! There has to be some benefits from reading Choti all those bedtime stories. How did the Prince awaken Beauty from her sleep!!?? ... Kiss! Kiss! Kiss!😉😆

& thn the kiss☺️☺️ v got a moral of the story as well at the end

Moral of the Story: Fairytales are not useless crap😉😆

if v get it into effect at right place at right time😉😆I really loved whole of the update to the core do i even need to say that after writing sch a long comment oohh my comment again became like half a update😲😆 thnx for awesome manveerlicious update🤗 & pm too even though i had started reading even before pm came😆

Take care love ya



Yess you're finally first!!! Oh trust me it was like 4 at night when I posted this and then I saw that u reserved so i was like jumping up and down adn then I think I waited for some time and must have fallen asleep waiting but then I read this first thing in the monring! 😃 And as usual your comments are a pleasure to readd!
Yep...I tend to surprise readers a lot with my updates. Sometimes they expect me to udate and I am noweher close to finished and then other times I seem like im not gonna update for a while but then I get this like sudden inspiration adn some next idea hits me on my head and before you know it I am like writing away like madd! So that was this. The whole sleeping Manyata idea hit me outta nowhere and then I was just too excited to write it and read your guys' reaction! 😉
HAhha love the monkeys you use! especially the one after Uday cant be fooled..making me 🤣
But its soo true eh? UV is just too good. 😎
Awww yea I know UV to the rescue, because of course hes thr first one she remembers when he's in trouble..but no you remember someone who you forget but at least the Manyata in my FF (dont knwo about the one in the show) but this one's majorly obsessed with him and never exactly forgets him in the first place! 😉 Caz our Princey deserves just that! He deserves to have someone love him that blushy and butterfly-in-tummmy kinda love! 😉 Which Manyata sure does! 😳
So happpyy you liked this kiss part!! 😃 To be honest, the Sleeping Beauty idea hit me outta nowhere and then im just like PERFECT! 😃 Thank God you guys liked it! 😳
Ahaha, you liked my moral! 😉
Now only just I should get my Prince soon too! ANd then I dont need drugs, I'll just fake the sleeping part, just so he can wake me up! 🤣
Thank you sooo much Wishyyy!!! Love ya tooo! 🤗
Edited by xxDaydreameRxx - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ARMaaneetAbhiya

awww...too chweet yaar...Manveer last scenes were just...finally!! update was gr8!! continue soon...
luv ya:):)


Oysheee!!! Thank yoouuu!!! 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: vrinda.diva

AWESUm uPdAtE ..:):)

PLZZ PLzz plZz pM mEE wEn U uPDAtE NeXt TiME ..:)


Thank you!! 😃
I will! 😊Wait did you get this time's pm? 😕
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: rocker12

superb update !!!

it was brilliantly written , loved it to the core :)


Thank you sooo much Rocker..can I just call you Rockstar? 😛
Happy you liked it!! 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: FireNIce

EEEKS!!! LOVED the update!!!😃 Manyata acted like a true friend by giving some space to Meera and Ranvijay to rekindle their budding romance.😳 The ManVeer scenes were just tooo cute!! UV using his Disney Princess knowledge was classic!😆 Completely agree with the moral of this chappy!👏

P.S Is it possible 4 u 2 pm me when u update next?


Awww!! Thank you sooo much! 😳
LOL yea my moral rocks! 😎
And yes of course I can pm you..I'm always looking for excuses to pm and bother people 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: DEK_girl

loved it!!enjoyed it thoroughly!


Thankss! Happy you enjoyed it! 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Cham42195

That was amazing,
you're right, fairy tales are not useless at all, but I wonder what will happen if people starts to take such uses and advices from them. I'm certainly not telling anyone to wake me up,LOL
Loved the chapter
update soon :)


Thank you Chamsy!! 🤗
AHahah really?? You dont want anyone to wake you up? 😉 And here I'm ready to fake sleeping if need be! 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: pia.raha

it wass super duper!!!!!!!!!!! right frm the 1st scene it was gr88!!!!!!!!!! thank god uday caught that man!!!!!! m and uday always creates sparks!!!!!!!!!!


Thank you thank you!! 😳
Yep UV caught and beat the shit outta that dude just like he deserved!
You knwo, you're right - trust me even writing ManVeer is pretty easy - their scenes just write themsleves up because these two have so much firing chemistry between them! 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mahi0809

Fantastic update. There were many things I loved/ appreciated...but will comment more in detail later!!

Your updates deserve praise!


Yay! And I was beginning to get worried whether you reserved and forgot! 😆
Awww thanks so much Mahi. 😳 And okay, takey your time but remember the more time you take the more time I delay the next update! 😈
PS: I'm just kidding. 😆 I think I'm addicted to writing. 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: saneha85

Hi..

Great update yarrr.. and i hipe m the second one to comment ..
this for u 🥳such lovely update


Awww Thanks soo muchh!! 😃
And this ones for you -> 🤗

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