ManVeer SS: Fallen Angel - Chapter 21 - pg. 145 - Page 51

Originally posted by: CharmingAngel7

aww a tight huggie from me too 🤗 awww thatz so sweet of u... & i'll read it all day😆
really ya the sig is really so good i really liked it ur sis did a fab job jst as u said simple yet beautiful jst like ManVeer 😳 well if chaps r good n i like em i tend to read em again sorry to shock u though😆
really very glad to hear that i bought a smile to ur face😃
my pleasure! no i dont mind at all I m from Pakistan & u?
I jst saw u updated again YAY😃 gonna read it & will comment later will b back with another long comment😈 😆

Originally posted by: chitra_rao

Hi Ranjana, loved the update👏. Udays "I saw it " just brough a big grin on my face. And the kiss made me blush😳. I so want the real deal to happen as soon as possible now.😆

For Ranvijay, I want him to be kind of obsessed with manyata for the time being, and I would'nt even be suprised if he hurts uday to get his manyata. And manyata realises her deep love for Uday when she sees him hurt. would make things really interseting. And then later on Uday and Manyata could help him to get out of his obsession for Manyata. all my thought, but anyways loved ur ff. And thanks for the PM doll 😊

Originally posted by: arya009

loved it...plz update soon eager to know what happens next :)

Originally posted by: imkool

hey hi dear,,😛,,,its awesum nd mindblowing update...👏

really loved manveer scene...nd poor ranvijay,,,,,,,i hope u wont turn him bad as today, he himself saw manveer ,,,,,,,just wish he doesnt turns once into a baddie...

nd besides tht...i love ur story yaar...👏👏

Originally posted by: preya_radev

wow this part was depressing yet awesome really loved it please update soon really cant wait for the next part and thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: CharmingAngel7

First of all thnx for the lovely surprise🤗 I was truly surprised couldnt believe my eyes when i saw the update but ofcourse happy at the same time.. To b honest was really missing DEK as was no epi today thn saw ur update... abt the update it was nice bt sad too poor ranvijay jst when he's good has to suffer so mch its so painful to love someone who u know doesnt love u poor soul really feel bad for him u described his feelings really well good job Ranji👏 👍🏼 but make sure u find a lovely princess for him as well😉 i know u would already hve something in ur brain... ranvijays scene wth the poor boy at start was very touching well written👏 loved manveer part ofcourse! uday teasing manyata kiss kiss😆 so sweet 😳 i loved when uday turned & said with smirk he would get the real deal when returns😆 but manveer part was so small i want more😆😆😉 no probs make uday returns soon dear n put in loads of manveer scenes😆 hmm what might happen nxt i think udays gone so manyata will miss uday n realize she loves him something like that bt u know betta bt one things for sure i dont want ranvijay to turn negative want him to stay good i m sure u will keep him positive bt jst felt like saying so... ohhh my comment again became so long😲 likhtay likhtay pta hee ni chala chalo me going now... update the nxt damakedaar part soon😃
Take care 🤗

Originally posted by: Grenade

Such a touching update Ranjana. :'( I felt as if each word you wrote down, specially for Ranvijay, was tugging at my heart.
There are no words to explain your writing skills..you made me love and feel for the character who might be a potential rift between manveer! I've always hated love triangles...up until now! Gosh, I cant believe I felt for someone other than uv!! Now I just cant wait for the story to unroll...!!!

nice ff i hope ranvijay won't have any affect on manveers relationship though i feel for him i just hope he gets another girl instead and fast :P update soon and add me to ur pm list :D

Originally posted by: harshana1

nice ff i hope ranvijay won't have any affect on manveers relationship though i feel for him i just hope he gets another girl instead and fast :P update soon and add me to ur pm list :D

the story the update and your writing were awesome as usual u are a born writer loved the writing the way u expressed ranvujay's feeling please update soon and please give us some jealous scenes for uday where he is super jealous please and ya please update the next part as soon as possible and do u any idea when u will update next like what day if u do please tell me if u dont then try to update ASAP