ManVeer SS: Fallen Angel - Chapter 21 - pg. 145

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Posted: 13 years ago

#481

awesome update i loved it and i am very happy that u try to stick to your promise for updating once a week k now RV he is an awesome character please create some super jealous scenes for uday by seeing manyata and RV together ranvijay might not want to come in between manveer but he always come unintentionally like for some scenes where uday is super possessive about manyata that will just show more love and please update as soon as possible i love your writing😊😃

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Supernatural_10

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Posted: 13 years ago

#482

Amazing Part Rajana

omg feel bad for Ranvijay but dont want him to come betwen Manveer i kinda got a feeling he might do now coz Uday has gone to Jaigar for a week

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fia21

@fia21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#483

Ranju I LOVED it 👏
But it was too short for my liking 😒 . You know how greedy I am for long updates don't you? 😛 . Lol. Anyway you really got me emotional in the last bit. Poor Ranvijay. I feel so so so bad for him. But I am sure you are not going to make him suffer that long because just like me, you like him too 😉 . I felt so bad. Poor guy fell in love for the first time, but with the wrong person who isn't meant for him. Sigh. And I absolutely loved the first bit with him where he's buying flowers for Manyata. I had a feeling that he'd buy white roses for her because they mean loyalty and trust right? Apt choice Ranvijay 👍🏼 . Hahaha. And then when the kid comes I was like "Omg is that really Ranvijay? 😲" . Oh man it was so adorable the way he went with that kid all the way to the tea stall and made him eat. I was literally like this reading that 😍 . And Ranjana this line made me go 😲😲 all over again:

He's poor from the outside, you're poor from the inside. His stomach is hungry for food. Your soul is hungry for love.

Aptly put and omg this is exactly the way I feel about him. Seriously girl you nailed it 👏 . I can't tell you how much you impressed me with this one single line. It aptly describes Ranvijay's feelings!
The Uday-Manyata bit was again REALLY adorable and very hilarious at the same time. Uday cracked me up with his one-liners 😆 . Okay so my favorite part with them was this one:

"By the way Princess, you're welcome," Udayveer smirked at her.

"Huh? Kiss liye?" Manyata wondered out loud.

"Kiss ke liye!" Udayveer winked.

🤣🤣🤣
Holy majoli Uday is a freaking GENIUS I tell you 😆
And then there were two more dialogues of Uday that literally made me "LMAO" :

"How much do you wanna bet that I'm going to have the real deal as soon as I'm back?"

"I saw that!"

Hahahahahaha this was so funny. Especially when he says "I saw that" . Omg I couldn't stop laughing. Poor Manyata. She got caught red handed while caressing her cheek where Uday kissed her 😈 . I was hoping he'd see that and yaaayy he DID 😃 . Lol. Omg the kiss on the cheeks was sooo cute 😍 . I think more than Uday, we all are waiting for the real deal 🤣 . Lmao. But I'm sure it's just on the way 😉 . Since you and everybody else, including me 😳 love Uday way too much, I don't think he'd be gone that long from your SS. I think you might just fast-forward this one week thing in the next update and drag Uday back in, in like the last part of the chapter or something 😆
I am seriously completely clueless about what's next in store for us but I am sure you have planned something really good. I could be wrong, but I think Ranvijay is going to take advantage of Uday's absence. But not in a bad way I think. He might just try to be friendly with her and might try to make her realize his love for her through that because he has evolved as a human being. I don't think he'd force himself on her now. And it's just a guess, I could be totally wrong too, but I think Uday is going to misunderstand Manyata when he comes back. He might think something is going on between Ranvijay and Manyata. Okay I should really be saying all this to you on PM 😆
Anyway I think I should stop right here. My comment is getting way too long. Haha. Once agin fantastic update Hubby! Please please update soon.
Love you so freaking much Ranju 🤗

Edited by fia21 - 13 years ago

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Nibir Chowdhury

@cnibir

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Posted: 13 years ago

#484

hello,

i just read ur ff and found it really amazing. plz keep updating for ur fans and can u plz add me tour PM list.😛

Thanks

Nibir

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Malangan

@TeriMalang

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#485

awesome update!!
ManVeer part was beautiful and the peck as well;)
Aww ranvijay again turning back to the bad guy
Ye pyaar kya kya karata hai...dobara bura bana diya na ranvijay ko
Hawww 1 weeek away from manyata :O this torture yaar..

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Mehwish

@CharmingAngel7

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#486

Originally posted by: xxDaydreameRxx

AWWW...seriouslyy reading ur comment just gave me such a warm feeling inside..seriously tight hug to you for sich a heartwarming comment 🤗... you knwo its for readers like you that i dont mind updating even at the busiest times..in fact if it was up to me i would sit and write chapters for my SS all day...yea i love writing i guess, but just as much I love reading all ur guys' response! 😃
And thanks for the compliment of the sig (my sis made it for me btw)..in my opinion - its simple yet beautiful ...just like ManVeer's love 😍
ur gonna read it over? 😲 lool sorry that still shocks me when you people say that..Gosh im so lucy to have such passionate about ManVeer readers!! 😃
I am so glad to have brought a smile on ur face! 😊 u brought one on mine!! 😃
Thanks again Wish!!! 🤗 btw..which country do u live in, if u dont mind me asking? 😊

aww a tight huggie from me too 🤗 awww thatz so sweet of u... & i'll read it all day😆
really ya the sig is really so good i really liked it ur sis did a fab job jst as u said simple yet beautiful jst like ManVeer 😳 well if chaps r good n i like em i tend to read em again sorry to shock u though😆
really very glad to hear that i bought a smile to ur face😃
my pleasure! no i dont mind at all I m from Pakistan & u?
I jst saw u updated again YAY😃 gonna read it & will comment later will b back with another long comment😈 😆

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chitra_rao

@chitra_rao

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#487

Hi Ranjana, loved the update👏. Udays "I saw it " just brough a big grin on my face. And the kiss made me blush😳. I so want the real deal to happen as soon as possible now.😆

For Ranvijay, I want him to be kind of obsessed with manyata for the time being, and I would'nt even be suprised if he hurts uday to get his manyata. And manyata realises her deep love for Uday when she sees him hurt. would make things really interseting. And then later on Uday and Manyata could help him to get out of his obsession for Manyata. all my thought, but anyways loved ur ff. And thanks for the PM doll 😊

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arya009

@arya009

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#488

loved it...plz update soon eager to know what happens next :)

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patakaguddi

@patakaguddi

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#489

hey hi dear,,😛,,,its awesum nd mindblowing update...👏

really loved manveer scene...nd poor ranvijay,,,,,,,i hope u wont turn him bad as today, he himself saw manveer ,,,,,,,just wish he doesnt turns once into a baddie...

nd besides tht...i love ur story yaar...👏👏