ManVeer SS: Fallen Angel - Chapter 21 - pg. 145 - Page 114

Originally posted by: Inkpen4877

Such a PHENOMENAL update!!

You have no idea, I had a REALLY crappy day- and then I got to read this update, and it made me SO happy! So now I have this perma grin on my face 😊

Originally posted by: hemvb

awesome update yaar..finally manyata admitted her love for uday..yayyy!!!!

but feel bad at the end..hopefully uday finds her..

do update soon yaar...all the best..cheers!!!!

Originally posted by: pia.raha

dat wass beautifulll!!!!!!!! uday and m ka phne convo wass jstt too good!!!!!! vijay and m ka convoo suprlike!!!!! m in uday's arms was soo lovellyy!!!!!!! oh my godd m wo rastein parr!!!!!!!!! bt its rainin dats a good thngg!!!!!!!!! plz plzz udpate the nxt part soon!!!!!!!!!!!😊

Originally posted by: Ekra-Meer

Day dreamer its an amazing ff u have here... I like the idea of bringing sombody as good as UV!!! This past week i read quite a lotof ff's and a 7-8 of them stood out... Urs is one of them!!! Definitely on my watchlist frm now on... KEEP SHININGGG!!!!

Originally posted by: sweetshab

Awesome ranjaan!
Loved it
The way u mentioned their loneliness without each ,manyata's realisation and wanting to get her love at the very moment wodout realisng physical pain the madness in her love and UV bounded by his own oath wow !
And i really loved the way manyta tried to explain a thing abt life &death and the way human choose to live

Cont soon :)

Originally posted by: AndreaBaid

Oh MY GOODNESSS that was so amazing i really like each and every bit of it and yess it was quite stretched but your flawless writing skills killed that😉 and what about meera and ranvijay?? but anyways the update was full with manveer manveer and manverr and manyata is seriously so stubborn how could she leave when she had an injured foot especially when she had Uday with her haaye if i was manyata i would have done all the dramas like uff i can't walk so that he picks me up in his arms and i enjoy getting goosebumps and blush blush blush but seriously you wrote it so well i really love you but i am angry itne time baad update kiya😡 so plzz update soon plus if i am not wrong you name is Rajana right??

Originally posted by: milhan

awesome awesome awesome...

luvd it

thnx for pm and continue soon

Originally posted by: Sanarasheedroxx

Awesome Ranz i jst loved d update and this ws not at all stretched the hug ws soo magical and realistic He took her into the hospital in his arms Atlast she accepted dat she loves him ...rain,manyata,uday & their feelings 😛
SUPERB EK DUM RAPCHIKRAPCHUNDAS 🤗 🤗

Originally posted by: Sunshinegirll

ranjanaaa such a lovely chapter👏
so finally uday decided to let go manyata so that she can choose him and he wudnt have to force himself upon her anymore😳😳
loved how u had showed the emotions of manyata n uday..
how manyata dint feel the pain in her foot coz the pain in her heart was worse..

just a suggestion.. instead of writing chapters purely on either manveer or ranvijaymeera, pls write a bit of both.. now am eager to kno wats happening in their lives along with how will uday confess to manyata or how they will confess to each other...

pls pls pls ranjana update soon d next time😊😊
wat can we do.. u write so well making us desperate for reading more😃

Originally posted by: nityatandon

hey... ur update was awesome but i hope the next chapter will be more better... anyways.. can anybody tell me how to write a ff... i will start writting it tomorrow... will giv u the link... do read...