Manveer's love story's beginning Updated Part 2! - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank you to everyone who liked it! hopefully updating it soon with the help of Reihanna!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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It's really nice. Do continue soon!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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👏wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!👏

loved it😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
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You guys should tell me if the story you like needs improvement! PM me or leave a comment. Thank you everyone who liked the story and commented!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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GUYS YOU NEED to let me know if you want it to be romantic or tragedy. Hopefully, i will fulfill your desires :)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome, loved the romance and the beach fun ;)
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Well Written, Loved it :D xx
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Guys be sure to share any comments or thoughts for the next updates!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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please leave comments guys!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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BIG Thank you to all of you guys! This was my first OS and it turned out to be great! ( also credits to Reihanna!) LOVE YOU ALL <3

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~Uday's POV~

I couldn't believe that I actually kissed her. I mean, didn't she love Akash? But i am glad i took this step. I think she seemed to like it. Manyata you will be mine forever.

All of a sudden when I pushed myself away from her, she was starting to drown. Oh man, I needed to help her. It is all my fault! Why did I bring her so far from shore? I am such an idiot. How can I let Manyata suffer like this? I have to help.

I grabbed her arm and pulled her towards me. She wasn't opening her eyes. What was happening? I picked her up and ran to the shore, wishing that everything was fine.

I pressed her stomach to check if she had too much water inside her. I gave her mouth to mouth. I waited a few seconds. She was starting to open her eyes. I thanked god.

U: Manyata! Are you ok?

M: (coughing) I.. I..

U: Its ok! Don't worry, I am here for you.

I go to the place where we kept our clothes and reached for the bag. I took out my shirt, the closest thing I could find and put it on her so she didn't feel cold. While I was putting my shirt on her, I held her gentile body in my arms because she was unable to do it herself. I felt protective; I couldn't let anything happen to her. She was my life, my everything.

U: Are you ok princess? I am so sorry I took you so far from the shore. I shouldn't have done that.

M: Udaybeer.. I am fine.

U: Oh thank god. I will take you home now.

I picked her up in my arms and walked towards the car. I asked for someone's help to pick up our bags. I gently put her on the car seat. It was getting dark. I shouldn't take her to raj mehel because everyone will start asking us questions. For the night, I will take her to my house. When I looked at her, she was sleeping. She looked so beautiful. I had never seen anyone like her before, NOT even Jaynandini.

After half an hour, we get home. I gently pick her up because she was still sleeping. From the back window, I take her to my room. I made sure that no one saw us. I smoothly put her on my bed. I take off her shoes and throw a blanket at her.

U: The most beautiful person I have ever seen.

I heard footsteps. I think it was Unnati.

Unnati: dada? What happened? How come Manyata's here?

U: Choti, Manyata and I went to a beach and we went a little bit too far from shore. We were having a lot of fun (blushing).

Unnati: Then what happened?

U: She started to drown and I brought her here.

Unnati: anything else?

U: uhh no (hiding the truth about the kiss). Can you please help me and get Manyata ready?

Unnati: obviously I will, hopefully she will get better.

U: I hope so too.

Uday walks out. Manyata sees Unnati (confused) thinking where Uday is (blushing because she started remembering the kiss).

Unnati: are you ok? We have to get you ready. We have to get you home soon.

In a few minutes, Unnati gets Manyata ready. The three of them head to Uday's car. Uday is holding on to Manyata's waist because he is still worried if she is ok or not.

TO BE CONTINUED! Please comment ( x.

(Credits: dreamed by Reihanna)



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