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Posted: 13 years ago
it is very well written hun ❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago
& yeah whenver uou'll update it do pm me .
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Posted: 13 years ago

Lovely update ...thxs for the pm

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Posted: 13 years ago
hahah this was soo funny 😆 & a bit romantic too ❤️
btw i am sending youu buddy req so pm me for the next part :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
nyc...but wanna read more of manveer romance...n thnxxx 4 PM...do continue...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ManVeer4ever

When wil u update it ?

I am on vacation these days...but will try to update as soon as possible :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
😆wow...awesome...bechara Brijraj...so funny..plz update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hey guys this is part 6...finally its up...not my best work...sorryyy =(

Part 6

The next morning in Uday's room, Manyata wakes up she had no clue about last night...she was super drunk last night and had no clue what she was doing in Uday's room...

Manyata: (wakes up)...Good morning...(she sees Uday standing next to the bed and gets confused upon seeing him...)

Uday: good morning sunshine

Manyata: (looking confused and tries to recall what happened last night)...

uday: oh hello...hum tumse baat ka rahe hain...sleeping beauty...

Manyata: ummm...Okay...i am not going to freak out or anything but why exactly am i on your bed...and should i be worried...

Uday: no sweetheart...worry karne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai...kal raat jo bhi hua i am absolutely cool with it...in fact hamein to bohat mazaa ayaa...(with a cheesy smile)

Manyata: (now freaked out)...KYAAA...kyaa hua...kal raat..???

Uday: princess...tum samjho na yaar...hamein sharam aati hai...

Manyata: (Manyata gets mad and pulls Uday on the bed, so he falls and starts hitting him with a pillow)...Uday ke bachey situation ka advantage liya...khotey kahin ke...beta ab bacho mujhse...

Uday: situation ka advantage hum ne nahi tum ne liya...samjhi...

Manyata: (stops hitting)...really maine kiya...par...what the...i mean...itni desperate, wow...

Uday: princess aik baat kahen...kal raat kuch nahi kiya tumne hamarey saath...hum sirf mazaak kar rahey the...

Manyata: ahhh man...seriously kuch nahi kiya...itna accha chance miss kar diya...dang it...

Uday: (pushes her down and makes her lie on the bed and holds both her hands)...baby tum kaho to hum tumhe aur bohat se chance de sakte hain...(with a flirty smile)

Uday comes closer to her, she was still pinned against the bed, both her hands were held by him so she could not move a bit...

Uday: kaho princess...aik aur chance chahiye...(Uday was still moving closer it looked as if he was going to kiss her)

Manyata: (lifts her head up and bangs into Uday's head)...

Uday: oucchhh...yeh kis liye tha...

Manyata: aisey nahi dhakkan...theek se karna kab seekho gey...

Uday: oh come on Manyata...

Manyata: ab kya tumhe romance karna bhi mujhey hi sikhana padey ga...bolo silly...???

Uday: (doesn't say anything and keeps moving closer to her)...

Manyata: (lost in his eyes)

Uday: (still moving closer)

Manyata: (Manyata snaps herself out of it)...oh hello hero...ho gaya...

Uday: (he lets her go)...abhi toh sirf shuruwaat hi hui hai princess...

Manyata: (stretches)...waisey yaar tumharey bed peh neend badi achi aayi...

Uday: princess..issi liye toh hum keh rahey hai ke tum humse hi shaadi karlo...yeh bed bhi tumhara aur hum bhi...

Manyata: haan baat toh theek hai...par bed toh poora mein le loongi toh tum kahan so gey...

Uday: princess tum ho na...(with a flirty smile)

Manyata stares at him blankly...she didn't know what to say...

Uday: princess...hamari aankhon mein aisey mat dekho kahin tumhe humse pyaar na ho jaye...

Manyata: (back in action)...mujhey aur pyaar...yeah right...mujhey tumse toh kya kisi se bhi pyaar nahi hosakta...pyaar mein sirf sayapa hi hota...

Uday: oh really tumhein pyaar nahi hosakta...aur agar hum kahen ke tumhein hum se pyaar hai...(getting serious now)

Manyata: (confused)...haan...kya matlab...???

The scene shifts to rajmahal where Vijay bhai was pacing back and forth restlessly...he wanted to tell manyata about chinky's evil plan to make Akash fall in love with her by doing some kind of voodoo tricks...

Vijay bhai: (looking at his watch)...Moti bhainsss kab aaogi...itni der hogayi...kab aaogi...

Vijay bhai: jaldi aajao...waisey hamein nahi pata tha ke hum apni moti behna ko itna miss kareingey...waisey toh pura din hamarey sar peh charh ke naagin dance karti rehti hai aur ab jab humein uss ko ko batana hai toh ghadhi ghar peh hi nahi hai...

Jay comes into his room with an evil smile...

Jay: hey gay bhai...(smiling)...

Vijay bhai: (turns around)...aaj subha subha jay kamini hamarey room mein...kya baat hai..

Jay: yahi toh hum aap se pooch rahe hain...akhir baat kya hai...aap bade tension mein lag rahe hain...

Vijay bhai: hum aur tension mein nahi toh...waisey tum yahan kya karne aayi ho chipkali...

Jay: kuch nahi...hum toh bas aapse yeh kehne aaye the ke abhi bhi time hai party badlo...faidey mein raho gey...hamarey paas uss hippo ko tang karney ke bohat saarey plans hain..

Vijay: oye jay tum na apne plans apne paas hi rakho...tumhari team mein aake kya hota hai hamein pata hai...pichli baar humein mom ne bathroom mein lock kar diya tha yaad hai hamein...iss baar hum wall peh apna sar pathak kar suicide kar leingey par tumhari team mein kabhi nahi...

Jay: your loss...hum toh aapke faidey ki baat kar rahe the...

Vijay: well hum na soch rahe the ke apni party banaye...vijay deenanath chohan ki khud ki party...acha idea hai na...

Jay: suicidal idea hai...go for it...classic insult hogi jab party mein aik akele aap hi honge...lovely idea...go for it...

Vijay bhai: that is it...ab hum aik aur minute tumhari bakwaas nahi sune gey...out...abhi ke abhi room se out...kamini aurat...

Jay: whatever...looser...(she leaves)...

Vijay bhai (to himself): Manyata bhai...ab hum yeh baat aik minute bhi apne pait mein rakha na toh woh zaroor explode hojaye ga...

The scene shifts back to Uday's room...where Uday tells Manyata about her feelings for him and she gets confused...she had no clue what he was talking about...

Manyata: (confused)...haaan...???...kya matlab...???

Uday: matlab yeh ke...tumhein humse pyaar hai...hum aisa pooch nahi rahey balkey tumhe bataa rahey hain...tumhe humse pyaar hai...

Manyata: uday...bas haan ho gaya tera...ab aur mazaak mat karo...

Uday: (holds her tight)...yeh mazaak nahi hai...yah sach hai...accept it...kab tak khud se hi jhooth bolti raho gi...kab samjho gi keh tum jo hamarey liye feel karti ho woh dosti se bohat ziyada hai...

Manyata: uday you have lost it...faltu mein mera dimaag kharaab mat karo...(she tries to leave)

Uday: (he holds her back)...manyata aisey nahi...abhi hamari baat khatam nahi hui...

Manyata: choro...hamein ghar jaana hai...(he was still holding her)...kya sunna chahte ho...kaha na hum ne...pyaar nahi hai...nahi hai...ab kya likh kar doon...

Uday: hai...tumhe hum se bohat pyaar hai...aisa tum khud hum se kaho gi...i promise you...(he lets her go)

Manyata: uday...what happened to you...i dont understand this...yeh sab kaisey...i think tumhe kuch waqt akeley rehna chahiye...i guess i'll see you later...(she leaves the room)

On her way out she sees Unnati who seems to have guessed what happened between the two...

Unnati (to Manyata): kya hua Manyata...sab kuch theek toh hai na...

Manyata: unnati...yeh uday ne aaj breakfast mein kuch ultha phulta kha liya tha kya...jo aisi behki behki baatein kar raha hai...

Unnati: nahi toh...par kya hua...hamein batao...

Manyata: uss khotey ko lagta hai ke main uss se pyaar karti hoon...seriously unnati itna crazzy idea uday ke dimaag mein ayaa kaisey...yeh idea jis ka bhi hai na uss ki toh khair nahi...

Unnati: Manyata...please buraa mat manna par hosakta hai ke dada theek keh rahey hon...I mean may be you do feel for him but you are just unaware of it...you know what I mean...

Manyata: unnati tum bhi...yeh galat hai haan tum toh apne dada ki side hi lo gi...

Unnati: nahi manyata hamara woh matlab nahi tha...hum toh bas itna keh rahey hain ke tumhe iss baarey mein sochna chahiye...think about it...

Manyata: tum dono bhai behen ko kissi ne hypnotise kiya hai kya...unnati tum mujhey darrao mat yaar...pyaar ka naam sun kar bhi mujhey panic attacks aaney lagta hai...

Unnati: Manyata...love is not a bad thing...tum sochna iss baarey mein...and don't worry dada ko hum handle kar leingey...alright...(she puts her hand on Manyata's shoulder)...okay..calm down now...

Manyata: thanks Unnati...please Unnati hamara aik kaam karna uss ghadey ka khayal rakhna pata nahi kya hua hai ussey...humein call karti rehna...

Unnati: dont worry...hum dada ka pura dihaan rakhein gey...okay...

Manyata leaves...

In rajmahal Brijraj was wondering around aimlessly...and while passing by chinky's room he hears about her plans to get Akash...

Chinky: (to herself) chinky...chinky...chinky...tu itni kamini hai ke bas aaj amma tujhey dekh kar kitna khush hongi...bas ab Akash driver ko yeh lemon ka haar pehnana hai aur uss ki pitai karni hai baba ke jhadoo se phir woh sirf mera hoga...Akash driver mujh par fida hojaye ga...dhinka chicka dhinka chika rehehe...

Brijraaj overhears chinky's converstion with herself and he gets worried...he had some other plans for Akash...as you all know Brijraaj uncle loves Akash and so he wants to make him his Jamai...yes I said Jamai you guys are not mistaken...he wants his daughter to get married to Akash...but Komal already decided that Manyata would get married to Uday whatsoever which leaves Jay being the only option for brijraaj...so now Brijraaj's only motive in life is to get Jay married to Akash...

Brijraaj (to himself): hamein chinky bitiya se yeh umeed nahi thi...hum un ke kaka baney aur uss ne hamein dhoka diya...(sobs)...Akash driver sirf aur sirf hamari beti Jay ke liye baney hain..dono saath mein kitney acchey lagtey hain...(starts crying)...hum jald se jald jay aur Akash ki date fix kareingey...(wipes his tears)...

It was night now...Uday was in his room when Unnati decided to come and talk to him about Manyata and his fight...

Unnati: dada...aap theek hain...???

Uday: haan choti...hamein kya hua hai...I am perfectly fine...(he smiles)...

Unnati: hamein aapki aur Manyata ki fight ke baarey mein pata hai...and you know she was so worried about you...

Uday: exactly my point...kyun hai ussey meri itni fikar...ussey yeh kehna zarroori tha...kyun ke woh khud toh kabhi apna dimaag lagaye gi nahi..bevakoof larki...kab samjhey gi...

Unnati: par dada ab kya...aap ne ussey keh toh diya...what are you gonna do now...

Uday: (smiles)...choti ab hamein kuch nahi karna hai...jo karegi Manyata karegi...dekhtein hain kab tak ussey farak nahi padta...(evil smile)

Unnati: OMGGG...dada don't tell me ke aap...no dada please...jal jaye gi woh...

Uday: choti...hamari pyaari choti...yahi toh plan hai...Manyata ko full time jealous mode mein dekhney mein bohat mazaa ayega...SHAWTY FIRE BURNING ON THE DANCE FLOOR woahh...(evil smiles)

Unnati: dada...you are so evil...seriously...bechari Manyata...I feel bad for her already...

Uday: ussey realize karwaney ke liye itni si qurbaani toh deni hi hogi...(to himself)...Manyata baby get ready cuz i am going to give you a hard time...(smiles)

TO BE CONTINUED...

Fia darling thanks for threatening me to update..👏👏👏...its finally up..😉😉😉...but not my best work..😭😭😭.please dont kill me 🤢🤢🤢=(

Alrighty guys this was it...part 6...hope you liked it...

Love,

Alissa😊

Edited by alissa345 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
yup thanks for the wonderful update.👏
alissa when will u update You are my miracle FF...pls update it soon..J and akash made for eachother wow🤣...I just love brij in ur FF...
Edited by snowdream - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Beautiful update...aww jay with driver akash ,,not bad brijral keep it up...

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