The Royal Comedy (FF) pt 8 updated pg 32

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THE ROYAL COMEDY (FF)

PART 1 = PG 5
PART 2 = PG 7
PART 3 = PG 9
PART 4 = PG 11
PART 5 = PG 14
PART 6 = PG 17
PART 7 = PG 22
PART 8 = PG 32

Hey guys this is my second ff...it is based on a dream I had 2 days ago...it is a little crazy and different...I hope you all like the concept...

Character sketch...

Mrinalini devi: The Rajmata of Devgarh...she is the mother of Komal who is the Mahraani of Devgarh...rajmata is a very wise and clever old lady...she loves her grandchildren and is looking for her vaaris...she has special place for her eldest grandchild in her heart which is Rajkumari Manyata...Rajmata is the one who has absolute control over everything...she is the boss...

Brijraj: The ROYAL DOODH WALA...who unfortunately got married to the princess of Devgarh and became a Mahraaj accidently...he is a loner... his wife Mahrani Komal, whom he is really scared of, always scolds him...his one and only motive is to get his daughters married to some nice boys...he does not care if the boy is a dhobhi or a business as long as he is "like him" he is willing to get them married to his daughters...he absolutely loves the royal driver (Akaash) because according to him "Akash is just like him"...

Komal: The Mahraani of Devgarh riyaasat...she during her youth fell in love with the "Royal Doodhwala" Brijraj...she was a stubborn princess who always got what she wanted and because of her stubbornness her parents got her married to him and now Komal and Brijraj have two daughters...Komal is always upset with Brijraj because of him always acting like a doodhwala all the time...she wants him to act as a royal but apparently he cannot...he just can't...impossible for him to change...

Manyata: The older daughter of Mahrani Komal and Mahraj Brijraj doodhwala...she is the older princess of the Devgarh riyaasat...she is very very beautiful but also very stupid...she is a very happy go lucky girl...she is looking for true love and so has many boyfriends but she is unaware that her true love is around her all she needs to do is to really look with her eyes open...

Udaybeer: He is a very charming young prince...he is the Yuvraj of Jaigarh riyasat...Uday is also Manyata's childhood friend and her best friend...Manyata truly trusts him and cares for him...Uday is Manyata's friend but he also loves her...he truly loves her andd cares for her but Manyata is unaware of the fact that her best friend is actually her love...

Jay: Jay is the spoiled younger princess...she is the younger sister of Manyata...she only has one motive in life is to always be superior to everyone else...she has attention seeking problem and she always wants the spot light all for herself...

Vijay: Vijay is the cousin brother of Manyata and Jay...he is kind of a confused character...he has no clue what he wants in life...he does not like girls and tries to run away from them...he later discovers that is "gay"...and that's the reason why he is not interested in girls...he also finds his true soul mate later in the story...

Unnati: she is the younger sister of Uday...she is the princess of Jaigarh...she plays an important role in uniting uday and Manyata and making them realize that whatever is in between them is more than frienship...

Giriraj: is Uday and Unnati's dad...he is also a very good friend of komal...both komal and girriraj want Uday and Manyata to get married...

Akash: he is the "Royal driver"...he is a very lost character...half the time he does not even know what is happening around him...

Chinky: She is the "Royal Dhoban"...she loves Akash and is always chipku with him which scares Akash to death...

So this was the character sketch...i will be posting part one soon...do leave your comments...

Love,

Alissa

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Finally Chicky & Akash are getting to play their respective roles😊
(no offenses meant)
love the character sketch👏
plz PM me when u update



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Posted: 13 years ago
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very nice finally Brijraj true identity out as Dhoodhwala🤣🤣


Please continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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😃Lol!! Sounds very interesting. Loved the character sketch. Please pm me when you update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i want 2 see brijraj as doodhwala😈 especially after yest's epi
contine & pm me🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice 😆
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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This is amazing...plzzz do continue soon and add me in ur pm list😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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LOLLL...FINALLY AKASH CHIKKY AND BRIJRAJ GOT THERE RESPECTIVE ROLES...
i loved the character sketch...do add me in ur PM list...thanks
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lol BR doodhwaala..oppss..MAHARAJ🤣🤣

dis ssure gonna be a fun to read😆😉

cont soon
add me to ur pm list😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice FF alissa
amazing characters BR as Dhodwala,VB as Gay , Akash as Driver..ahan royal driver, Cikki as Dhoban...🤣 🤣🤣🤣

i m really gonna njoy it..

plz do cont soon...

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