MANVEER: I'M SORRY ONE SHOT

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Posted: 13 years ago
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HEY GUYSSS VERY NEW TO INDIA FORUMS 😊 AND ITS MY VERY FIRST STORY
HOPE YOU LIKE IT😉 ... AND REALY HOPE I MIX UP WITH YOU ALL AS NO FRIENDS TILL NOW BUT I SURE WILL HAVE SO JUST BE COMFORTABLE WITH ME 🤗ANYWAYS HERE IT IS ENJOY...😃



"I-Its not possible..." She mumbled as she sat on her king sized bed alone.
She looked at the happy couple in the picture, At there hunnymoon. Why couldn't they be like that? Like the old times. "He's gone...He left m-me." manyata didn't consider she was crazy, She considered she 'Would' go crazy if she wasn't with him. That guy you couldn't find anywhere, Prince Charming. He was everything to her, Everything she could possibly want. manyata let a tear fall on to the teddy bear she was clinging onto. The teddy she got on her first date,With him. Then the flashback raced, She remembered everything.

Friends.
Best Friends.
Dated.
First Kiss.
First Date.
First Love.
Married.
Happy ever after.
Heart Broken.

It flashed all in her head. It wasn't possible to forget it just wasn't. She could have a second chance if he just let her. She put on her slippers and ran down the stairs. Her slippers got tangled on the fifth step down, and she fell all the way till she reached the carpet. manyata last vision was uday. She couldn't help but smile,And that way she died.

uday was just as furious that he had to go back to get his stuff. He was done with her! He was f**king tired to be with her every f**king minute. He parked his car, and got inside. But when he saw everything he stood in shock about to break down crying. He rushed to her "m-manyata?! Baby please talk to me!" Mentally uday would be crazy without her, and he was. He drove himself to be crazy, What manyata thought she would do without him.

They both needed eachother to live, But to attempt to be with eachother a life was lost. Just one simple mistake split these 2 forever. uday stood by her grave, Not moving at all. He knew this was his fault. He thought it was. Why could the simplest things hurt so much? He wished he could touch that simply beautiful skin, He wished he could see those beautiful chocolate eyes. He wished he could tell her he loved her sooo much. But most importantly he wished, He could've said sorry. "I'm so sorry manyata. I love you so much and this is my fault. I wish I could make it up to you, But I didn't." It started raining and uday had to get to work. He got up looking at the grave, He needed to move on. He walked away. But he always knew manyata loved him. She died for him. UDAY got something out of his briefcase. A Teddybear. "I should've known." He spoke and looked up to the sky.

The End :)
I hope you liked it. It sucks I know it was my first one shotDx Sorry.


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Posted: 13 years ago
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First of all WELCOME TO INDIA FORUMS!! My name's Fizza!! I really liked the os!! U should make more!! Gr8 job n keep it up!:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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you kill manyata😆.
amazing. keep writing.
next time please keep both of them alive .*just joking*😆
Posted: 13 years ago
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hey dear that was heart touching but next time pls do not kill them n turn their fairytale into a saga
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Posted: 13 years ago
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first ofall welcome n update was really awesome😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: AKlover101

First of all WELCOME TO INDIA FORUMS!! My name's Fizza!! I really liked the os!! U should make more!! Gr8 job n keep it up!:)



OKKK FIRST OF ALL THANKS A TON AND HEY WELL HELLO THERE 😆...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: wendy25

you kill manyata😆.

amazing. keep writing.
next time please keep both of them alive .*just joking*😆



OKKK DONE 👍🏼 AND HEY BY THE WAY CAN I KNOW YOUR NAME I'M LIPIKA 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: ifuobey

first ofall welcome n update was really awesome😆



TANK YOU
Posted: 13 years ago
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hey lipika i think u felt bad look if ur kinda hurt im sorry very sorry
welcome to the dek forum i know ur annoyed hey really that wasnot a sarcastic or satiring remark i know u must have felt like that otherwise u wud have replied to mky comment.tons of apology lipika really sorry i was complimenting u not satiring ur os. i think u wud see it n hopefully reply to it n forgiv\e me that wud make me reliefed
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice one. keep going. welcome to the forum.

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