~Hona Tha Pyaar~ManVeerSS~Note Page 57~ - Page 12

just thought of a guy for unnati - vivian dsena from pyar ki yeh ek kahani. he is so hot. miss the kiss therapy he used to give.

Originally posted by: maneta

hey surya i wud love to see rajat tokas or karan singh grover with unnati

Originally posted by: suhana.dixit

nice part Suri..😊

Originally posted by: luvremix

lovely concept...exactly what I wanted to see on the show!!!
keep updating❤️

Originally posted by: Somia3

uday trying to make manyata jealous

Originally posted by: docnuss

awww i can feel d pain bw manveer!!:((

superb writing!!

cont soon!!

Originally posted by: Anjalika13

wow loved it

totally awesome n grt update

Originally posted by: Adden123

Awesome ... Loving the jealous Uday ... Ahh! I love imagining him 😍 The rage within him, makes him look hotter 😎 ... hehe..same pinch..even i'am imagining him...😉😉

Manyata Manyata ... how can you resist him ??? How?? 😲 that is my question too...how Manyata...how...but do not worry she would not be able to resist him for long...hehe...🤣

Anyways, Awesome Update Surya, Loved every ounce of it ... Continue Soon 😃 thanku so much...i will update as soon as i can...😊

Originally posted by: nityah

Its simply amazing dear...

loved every bit of it...

you have beautifully written and described each and every scenario and situation n' emotions...

precap is interesting...can't wait t see how they tackle the problem...

continue super soon...

thanx for the pm...

Originally posted by: pri01

Hi Surya🤗 Hey Pri..🤗
one word awesome love every bits and pieces of this chapter especially the part bechara UV 😭 feel bad for him his wifey refuses him a dance😲 ... thanku so very much..even i feel bad for Uday, but do not worry happy days will come knocking on 'ManVeer's' door soon...😉😉😉
love the song actually am visualizing UV dancing with the ladies and a fuming M😆😆 kya scene hai👏👏👏 even i'am imagining that..kaash show mein yeh scene dikhaya jaaye...😉

Plzzz update soon the precap is interesting can't wait for it and for the pm yaar will surely update as soon as i can...😊

TC love ya🤗love you..🤗

Originally posted by: arryline

Awesome updates Surya😊Looking forward for the next part😃

Originally posted by: mythical

loved this new addition to the ss. thanks for the pm. i wish manyata dances with uday's rival and things really heat up 😆.

you write so well 👏 that i can clearly picture everything you write and it feels so much better than what SA is showing. cant wait for part three. keep it coming, im hungry for more.

Originally posted by: mythical

just thought of a guy for unnati - vivian dsena from pyar ki yeh ek kahani. he is so hot. miss the kiss therapy he used to give.

Originally posted by: Ritika_11

wow...loved the update!👏

unnati ke opposite may be neil bhat would look good!

and good luck for your project!

Originally posted by: magicalworld

very nice

thanks for pm

Originally posted by: Humaira.Rajpoot

maine st part nahi parha hai abhi tak par is part k liye tooo good yar good work hmm story toh intresting lag rahe hai lets see k next kya hota hai