You Are My Miracle (FF) pt 21 upd (Akash returns) - Page 61

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: akshi_t

loved it...finally both of them know abt it...M toh kuch zyada hi shock me chali gayi 😆...nw i wanna knw other's reactions wen they'll knw abt it...other than ds and komal of course...bt i guess they'll be telling everyone after the wedding??...ok lizzy update soon...and since ive commented soo late i mean really soon😆so do so or at least update the royal comedy na!!!😊

Lol thanks akki...I know right it was a little shocking for M and about UV poor him, that's all I can say about him...thanks again dear...lol okay will update soon and I already updated royal comedy,sent you a pm too :)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: xxDaydreameRxx

THat was a LOVELY update!! so cute seeing UVs concern for Manayat :D

and wow she preggerss LOL continue soon

Awww thanks ranjy *hugs*
lol yes she preggers...let's see what happens next 😆
Thanks for reading dear :)
Love ya 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi dear..i just came to remind u ki kb update karogi apna FF..its more than a week now..dear we all are getting impatient now...plzzz gv us our LOLIPOP sooonnn😃😛
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hey guys this is part 18...hope you all like it...=)

PART # 18

The doctor comes in...

Uday: doctor...kya hua hai...Manyata theek toh hai na...

Manyata: doctor main theek hoon na...ab main jaaon...

Uday: doctor batayiye na...

Doctor: it's a good news...

Manyata (to uday) : dekha Uday...good news...main bilkul theek hoon...ab chalien...

Doctor: nahi rajkumari aap samjhi nahi...mera kehne ka matlab hai ke...Rajkumari jee pregnant hain...aap dono mummy daddy banne wale hain...

Manyata: KYAAA...?????

Uday: (standing silently with his mouth hanging down and looking super confused)

Doctor (to Manyata): jee haan aap mummy banne wali hain...

Manyata: hahahaha...hahaaahah...ahahahaha...ahahha...oh God...hahahah...hahhahha...hahahaa...pait mein dard ho gaya meray...

Doctor (to uday): she is 3 weeks pregnant...I think it was really unexpected issi liye yeh aisey react kar rahi hain...

Uday: (still shocked in disbelief)...

Doctor: yuvraj...yuvraj Udaybeer singh...aap sun rahe hain na...

Uday: jee Docotor...ummm...are you sure...

Doctor: I am hundred percent sure...

Manyata: uday suna tumne...seriously...yeh log bhi na kitne joke maarte hain...

Uday: joke...???...baby...???

Doctor (to Uday): well the truth is that she really is pregnant...aap dono parents banney waaley hain...

Manyata: hahahha...ab bas haan..bohat ho gaya..hasa hasa ke marogey kya??? (still laughing)

Uday (to Manyata): princess ye joke nahi hai...tum sach main...

Manyata: Uday tum bhi...

Uday: princess...hum sach keh rahe hain...doctor bhi yahi keh rahi hain...

Doctor: rajkumari jee...aap sach mein pregnant hain...

Manyata: kya...main pregnant...haa..???

Uday: princess...(she cuts him off)

Manyata: doctor app phir se theek se check kariye...hosakta hai aap se galti ho gayi ho...aisa kaisey ho sakta hai..???

Doctor (to manyata): nahi rajkumari jee...hum se koi mistake nahi hui...

Doctor (to Uday): mujhey lagta hai ke aap dono ko kuch waqt saath spend karna chahiye...rajkumari jee kafi shocked hain...aapko hi unhein samjhana ho ga...(She leaves)...

Uday goes to Manyata who was still lying down and blankly staring at the cieling...

Uday: princess...

Manyata: (no reply)

Uday: princess...princess...(he puts his hand on her shoulder and she gets scared)

Manyata: ...AAA...(gets scred)...kya hai...daraa diya...

Uday: tum chikhii kyun...

Manyata: (ignores his question and says)... uday...yeh kaisey hosakta hai...???

Uday: aisa ho chuka hai...aur remember that night when u were drunk and in your wild mode...

Manyata: HOOO jhootey...accha toh wild mode main mein thi...aur jaisey tum ne toh kuch kiya hi nahi...right???

Uday: alright so hum dono wild ho gaye thay...okay happy..???...par socho princess...hamara baby...hamara...hamein toh samajh main nahi aaraha hai ke hum kya kahen...

Manyata: B...b...baby...???

Uday: haan...princess...hamara baby...

Manyata: hamara baby...(he takes her hand and puts it over her stomach)

Uday: feel it princess...

Manyata: HAILAAA...baby iss ke andar hai...(looking confused)...meray tummy ke andar...(looking shocked and scared)

Manyata starts crying...and hugs uday...

Uday: princess...meri jaan...tum ro kyun rahi ho...

Manyata: mujhey darr lag raha hai...(still crying)...

Uday: awww...naaa baby...rotey nahi hain...sshhh...chup ho jao...aur darne ki kya zaroorat hai...

Manyata: baby bahar kaisey nikley ga...mujhey bohat dard ho ga na...aur ...(still crying)...

Uday: (looking confused)...ab hum kaise bataain kaisey bahar aayega...hamein thori na experience hai...

Manyata: toh mera bhi first time hai okay...mujhey kaisey pata baby kaisey aayega...hum google karein kya???

Uday: (starts smiling)...sweetheart baby khud hi bahar aajaye ga...aur abhi toh bohat time hai google baad mein kar lena...

Manyata: nahi...(still crying)...tumhe kya pata...kitna dard hota hai...tum thori na pregnant ho...

Uday: princess...tum toh aisey keh rahi ho jaisey tumhe bara experience hai...

Manyata: mujhey Maa ne bataya tha...bohat dard hota hai...ab main kya karoon...

Uday: princess...abhi bohat time hai...hamein toh bas yaqeen hi nahi horaha hai ke hum Daddy banne wale hain...

Manyata: hainna...mummy daddy sunne main kitna ajeeb lagta hai na...

Uday: thank you princess...aaj tum ne hamein itni badi khushi di hai...thank you so much...(he hugs her)

Manyata: (smiles)...

Uday: I love you princess...(he puts his hand on her stomach)...love you baby...

Manyata: (smiles...and says...)...chalo ab ghar chaltey hain...sab wait kar rahe hongey...

Uday: chalo princess...(he helps her get up and both leave)...

The scene shifts to the Akash's mansion...akash was fine now...he found out that Chinki was giving him meds to keep him from gaining consciousness...and he also finds out that she didn't wanted him to know about Uday and Manyata's wedding...he gets really mad...

Akash: kyun...kyun chinki tum ne meray saath aisa kyun kiya...main ne tujhey apna dost mana aur tu ne...

Chicki: nahi Akash tum galat samajh rahe ho...

Akash: kya haan...(he tolds her really tight)...bolo kya galat samajh raha hoon main...kya tum ne behoshi se dawa di thi ke nahi...bolo...

Chicki: (silent...)

Akash: bolo...(shouts...)...BOLO DI THI YA NAHI...

Chicki: (shouts)...HAAN...HAAN...HAAN...di thi main ne...suna tum ne main hi tumhein woh dawa di thi...par tum yeh nahi jaate ke kyun di thi...

Akash: (silent)

Chicki: bolo jaantey ho...jaantey ho main ne aisa kyun kiya...

Akash: tum ne aisa kyun kiya iss se mujhey kuch farak nahi padta...

Chicki: nahi Akash...agar sawaal kiya hai toh jawaab bhi suno...samjhey...

Akash: mujhey kuch nahi sunna...tu yahan se chali ja...

Chicki: nahi tumhe sunna padega...yeh sab main ne tumharey liye kiya...(holds his collar)...tumharey liye kiya...samjhey tumharey liye...

Akash: waah Chicki...bohat acchi dosti nibhai tum ne...

Chicki: yeh sab main ne tumharey bhalayi ke liye kiya...tumhe tumharey pagalpan se bachane ke liye kiya...agar main aisa nahi karti toh tumhe Monia aur uss Uday ki shaadi ke baaray main pata chal jata...aur tum yeh shaadi kabhi nahi hone detey...tum khud ko takleef pohanchatey...

Akash: kya...kya kaha tum ne...???

Chicki: (confused)...

Akash: kya...Monia ki shaadi...yahi kaha tum ne...sach bol chicki...Monia shaadi kar rahi hai...

Chicki: (silently)

Akash: jawab do chicki...JAWAAB DO...(really angry)...

Chicki: haan yeh sach hai...Monia ki bohat jald shaadi hone wali hai...

Akash: Monia shaadi kar rahi hai...aur tu mujhey ab bata rahi hai...kyun chicki...kyun kar rahi hai tu meray saath aisa...tu jaatni hai na ke main Monia se kitna pyaar karta hoon...phir kyun...

Chicki: kyun ke Akaash Monia tumhey nahi chahti hai...usse tumhari zara si bhi parwa nahi hai...tum uss ke liye khud ko takleef de rahe the...aur main tumhe iss halat main nahi dekh sakti...

Akash: tumhe meri fikar karne ki koi zarrorat nahi hai...tujhey mujh se kya farak padta hai...meri marzi main jo bhi karoon...samjhi tum...

Chicki: farak padta hai...bohat farak padta...nahi dekh sakti tumhe takleef main...tumhara dard mujh se bardasht nahi hota...PYAAR KARNE LAGI HOON MAIN TUMSE...samjhey tum...uss Monia se kahin ziyada...lekin tumhe toh sirf woh Monia hi dikhti hai...kab samjho gey tum...woh tumhe nahi chahti...bhool kyun nahi jaatey uss ko...(she starts crying...)

Akash: chicki...yeh tu kya keh rahi hai...tu mujh se...lekin tu toh jaanti hai na...

Chicki: haan...JAANTI HOON...ke tumhe usske siwa koi nahi dikhta...par kya karoon bohat badi ghadi hoon main...issi liye sab kuch jaantey hue bhi tum se pyaar kar bethi...galti ho gayi mujhse...bohat badi galti ho gayi...aur mujhey iss ki saza milni hi chahiye...(she grabs a knife from the fruit basket and tries to cut herself)

Akash: CHICKI...yeh kya kar rahi hai tu...chhoro usse...

Chicki: nahi...paas mat aana...aaj mujhey meri galti ki saza milni hi chahiye...itni badi galti hui kaisey mujhse...saza toh mujhey milni hi chahiye...(she tries to cut her hand)

Akash snatches the knife from her hand...and slaps her...

Akash: pagal ho gayi hai tu...

Chicki: (crying)...haan pagal ho gayi hoon...nahi jeena mujhey...

Akash: (hugs chicki)...aik tu hi toh hai jo meri apni hai...meri sab se acchi dost...main tumhe kuch hone kaisey desakta hoon...

Chicki: Akash main tumhe bohat chahti hoon...

Akash (to himself): mujhey maaf kar dena chicki...par main Monia ke siwa kisi se pyaar nahi kar sakta...mujhey maaf kar dena...mein sirf monia ka hoon..

Scene shifts to Rjmahal...it was almost midnight...Vijay and Jay were Jay's room and having conversation about Uday and Manyata who still didn't come back...

Jay: Vijay bhai...kya lagta hai aap ko...kahan gaye hoon gey woh dono...

Vijay: come on Jay bhai...itni raat ko kahan hongey...uday ke hotel room aur kahan...

Jay: nahi Vijay...Manyata ko toh aap jaantey hain...baat kuch aur hi hai...

Vijay: kuch aur baat...you mean daal mein kuch kala hai...

Jay: haan Vijay bhai...i mean aaj haldi ceremony thi...aur iss tarah bahar jaana...something is fishy...I can smell it...

Vijay: fishy...???...hhhmmm...

Jay: socho vijay bhai...kya ho sakta hai...

Vijay: sorry Jay bhai...hum zarroor tumhari madad karte sochne main...par kya hai na raat bohat ho chuki hai aur issi liye hamarey dimaag ke ghorey so chuke hain...

Jay: Vijay bhai...not funny...hum serious hain...

Jay's phone rings...it was Unnati...

Jay: (looks at her phone and says)...yeh Unnati iss waqt hamein kyun call kar rahi hai...

Vijay: kahani main naya twist...jaldi se phone uthao...hum se wait nahi ho raha hai...

Jay picks up the phone...

Jay (to Unnati): hello...Unnati...itni raat ko...is everything okay...???

Unnati (on the phone): haan Jay...everything is fine...hamein bas yeh poochna tha ke kya Dada ne bhabhi ko drop kar diya...woh kya hai na dada ka phone switched off hai...

Jay: ummm...nahi Unnati...Uday aur Manyata abhi tak ghar nahi aaye hain...

Unnati: oh I see...okay...I guess they must be on the way...anyways thanks...goodnight...

Jay: bye...(she hangs up)...(to vijay bhai)...dekha Vijay bhai...kuch toh gad bad hai...

Vijay: ab toh pata lagana hi padega...keh yeh dono kon si khichdi bana rahe hain...

Jay: I TELL YOU...Vijay bhai...

The scene shifts to Uday's car...Uday and Manyata was on their way to Rjmahal...Uday was going to drop off Manyata at Rjmahal...

Manyata: Uday yaar...(sighs)...yeh kiya tum ne...

Uday: Hooo...princess...tum toh aisey keh rahi ho jaisey hum ne akelay kiya...(confused)

TO BE CONTINUED...

So this was part 18...hope you guys liked it... please do comment...also if anyone wants the PM send me buddy request...Thank you for reading ...Thanks again...

Love,

Alissa😊

Edited by alissa345 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG princess...Manyata's reaction was sooo funny🤣 Shock mein pagal ho gayi hai kya...lol...she is really mad...hehehe🤣
Awesome upadte man...superb...cant stop laughing...!!!!😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved the update sis. I can't stop laughing 😆
The last bit cracked me up
Uday: Hooo...princess...tum toh aisey keh rahi ho jaisey hum ne akelay kiya...(confused) 🤣
Manyata's reactions were epic. And omg Chikki's love confession was so funny. I don't know if it was supposed to be funny but it really cracked me up 😛
Amazing update 👏 .
Update the next part soon now 😈
Love you loads 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
da it was so funny yar...🤣...superb amazing update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
👏👏👏👏
awsum update yaar...M was HILARIOUS!!!

ufff yeh Akash firse tapak para...phirse problems crete karega yeh ab toh :(
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Posted: 13 years ago
Allisez , great update. chikash was high on this update🤣

Please update soon now, without making us yearn
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Posted: 13 years ago
finally i decided to ypd8...gr8 work...d scenes ver so cute...😳...👏 gud job allu as always

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