You Are My Miracle (FF) pt 21 upd (Akash returns) - Page 6

Originally posted by: navyan07

When will the next part be up?

I'm still working on it...but it will most probably be up in a day or two...n btw thanks for reading it, i really appreciate it 😊

Hey guys this is part 4...I hope you guys like it...

PART # 4

Manyata: NO no no...pehle kissi...tumne hi to kaha tha kissi chahiye... (With puppy dog face)

Unnati: oh I see dada...aap ne hi maangi thi...come on dada...aik kissi hi to hai... (She smiles)

Uday: nahi choti...aisa kuch nahi hai...hum ne aisa kuch nahi kaha tha...

Manyata: hooo...jhoot jhoot jhoot...shweetooo tum jhoot kyun bol rahe ho...remember tum ne kaha tha ke ... (uday interrupts her looking embarrassed)

Uday: haan haan princess...kaha hoga...ab jaldi se neeche uttro...

Vijay: udayyy you bad boy...lair lair pants on fire...jungle queen tumahara raaz khol chuki hai

Uday: nahi vijay banna... (Then he looks at manyata)...princess neeche...abhi...

Manyata: KISSI...???

Uday (to Manyata): FINE...pehle tum neeche uttro...

Manyata: (she bends down to get down but then stops)...nahi main doob jaoongi...mujhe swimming nahi aati...

Jay: jiji seriously don't be such a clown...just get down alright...it's really embarassing...

Uday: princess neeche paani nahi hai...tum nahi doobo gi

Manyata: nahi hai...aacha... toh main neeche aati hoon... (She jumps down and falls on Uday and runs her finger all over his face while staring into his eyes)...mein kissi kahan pe karoon...???(He turns his face and points his cheek)...karloon pakka...???

Uday: princess hamare kuch kehne se aap apni zid to chodne wali hain nahi...so just go for it... (manyata kisses his cheek and Vijay takes a picture of them so that he could blackmail her the next day)

Where on one side Unnati, Uday and Vijay are busy with Manyata...on the other side Jay prepares another drink with alcohol for Manyata so that she would go all out crazzyy...she places the drink next to Manyata... BUT...Vijay bhai accidently drinks it, without knowing it had alcohol in it...AND we all know what happens when vijay bhai gets drunk...😉

Manyata (to Uday): main aik aur kissi karoon...

uday: nahi princess...aik aur kissi tum hamein baad mein de dena...

Vijay: RUK JAO...hamein bhi kissi karni hai...KON KAREGA DEENANATH CHOUHAN KO KISSI...???

Unnati: ab yeh Vijay banna ko kya hogaya...

Jay: Vijay bhai...what the...yeh drink aap ke liye nahi thi...CRAP...

(Manyata stares at Jay...and looks like she had seen an alien being or something...)

Manyata:(while pointing at jay) yeh konsa sa jaanwar hai...??? (Jay looks super mad and Uday starts laughing)

Unnati:(Unnati tries to control her laugh) nahi Manyata yeh jaanwar nahi JAY hai...JAY...

Vijay: (Vijay get interested too)...ACHAAA...par...ISS KE SAR PE TOH SEENGH BHI HAIN...

Jay: Vijay bhai...seriously...??? (She looks dissappointed)

Manyata (to Vijay): haan deenanath chouhan tu theek keh raha hai...mujhe to do do seengh nazar aa rahe hain...

Uday (to Unnati): chutki hamain lagta hai ke hamein in dono ko ab ghar lejana chahiye...nahi toh yeh dono bhai behen mil kar pata nahi yahan ka kya haal kareingey

Unnati: aap theek keh rahe hain...par dada agar Dadisahab ne inhein aisey dhek liya toh..???

Uday: toh...toh aaj Devgargh palace mein fire woks hongey...BOOM... (He smiles)

Uday and Unnati walks Manyata and Vijay towards the car...and Jay follows them...

Uday: hum manyata ko apni car mein drop kar detein hain aur Vijay banna unnati aur jay ke saath aajayein ge...

Both Manyata and Vijay were holding hands and singings songs together like they were bffs...and the song they were singing was AIK CHATUR NAAR BADI HOSHYAAR...(this song was particularly dedicated to their dear sister...JAY)

Manyata: NAHI NAHI NAHI...hum vijay bhai ke saath jayengey...

Vijay: Achaaa...par hum ja kahan rahe hain...???

Uday: okay fine...toh hum aur Unnati, Manyata aur vijay banna ko ghar le kar jaate hain aur Jay tum apni car main aajana... (Jay leaves in her car)

Manyata looks at Uday's car and says...

Manyata: hum konsi wali car mein jayengey...???

Uday: princess kitni cars hain yahan par... aik hi car to hai...

Vijay: O TERI... hamara ghora kahan gaya...???...hum ne to usse yahin park kiya tha...(He looks under the car)

Manyata: Deenanath Chouhan lagta hai woh Dhanno ki tarah apni izzat bacha kar bhag gaya...mein usee pakar kar lati hoon. (Manyata starts looking for the horse.)

Uday: CHUP...dono bilkul chup...aur manyata yahin khari raho...ghorey ko tumhare ghar ka rasta pata hai...(both manyata and Vijay put their finger on their face with a sad face)

Vijay: par Jiji ki tarah hamaray ghoray ko bhi swimming nahi aati...woh hamein Brijraj mama ne diya tha..agar woh doob gaya toh...??? (Sad face)

Unnati: Vijay banna...aap ke ghore ke paas life jacket hai woh nahi doobe ga...ab app chaliye...

Unnati takes Vijay bhai towards the car...and Uday holds manyata's hand and takes her towards the car...while walking Manyata takes the car keys from Uday without letting him know...

Uday looks for the car key and couldn't find it...he looks at Manyata suspiciously and she keeps smiling...

Uday: princess...car ki keys kahan hai...

Manyata: keys...keys...kahan hai...???

Uday: princess yahi to hum pooch rahe hain...kahan hai keys...

Manyata: (she points at her stomach)...pait main...keys to hamare pait mein hai ...nikaloon...???

Uday: seriously...Manyata...???...pait mein...??? ...princess please zid mat karo aur keys dedo...

Manyata: okayyy (she hands over the keys to him)...par car mein chalaoongi...tum ne thook di toh...???

Uday: OH GOD...kahan phass gaye hum...princess tum aise nahi mano gi... (He lifts her up and puts her inside the car)

Scene shifts to the Raj Mahal...in Rajmata's office Brijraj, Rajmata and Doctor sahab are having a conversation about the whole Akash incident.

Brijraj: Maa saahib hum soch bhi nahi sakte the ke uss ladke ki itni himmat ho gi ke woh mahal tak aajaye...

Doctor sahab: mahraj theek keh rahe hain raj mata...hamein akash ke barey mein kuch to karna hi hoga...

Brijraj: Maa sahib hum to kahte hain ke iss Akash nami bimari ko humien jad se hi nikaal kar phenk dena chahiye...

Rajmata: dheeraj rakhiye Brijraj...Akash ab aik bharakti aag ki tarah ho gaya hai...uss mein haath daalne se hamare hi haath jalein gey...waisay bhi bohat mushkilon ke baad Manyata ki zindagi mein sab kuch theek hua hai...aur ab hum koi risk nahi le sakte...

Doctor sahib: lekin Rajmata agar uss ne rajkumari Manyata ke saath phir kuch...

Rajmata: nahi Doctor sahab ab hum aisa kuch nahi hone deingey...humein jald se jald Manyata ko raj gaddi pe bhethana hoga aur uday aur manyata ki shaadi karni hogi...

Brijraj: aap theek keh rahi hain Maa sahib...in fact Giriraj bhi yahi chahte hain...

Rajmata: Briraj hum chahte hain ke aap mahraj Giriraj se iss vishe mein baat karein...humien Manyata aur Uday ki shadi ki date fix kar deni chahiye...

Brijraj: jee Maa sahib...jaisa aap chahien...hum Giriraj se baat kar lenge...

Scene shifts to Akash's mansion where he is busy writing in his Diary when he recieves a phone call...

akash picks up the phone...

Caller: boss woh dono restro bar mein the aur saath mein teen aur log bhi the

Akash: tumhe aapna kaam yaad hain na... mujhe call karke khabar dete rehna...

Caller: yes boss...

Akash disconnects the phone and talks to himself with an evil smile...

Akash (to himself): Monia tum ne uss Udaybeer ke liye mujhe dhoka diya hai...tumhe iss galti ki saza zaroor milegi...mein tumhe itna majboor kar doonga ke tum khood chal kar meray paas wapas aaogi...(evil laugh)

Scene shifts to Rajmahal...Uday's car enters Rajmahal its around midnight...all the lights are dim and no one seems to be around...Manyata and Vijay are singing loudly in the car...the car stops at the drive way...Uday comes outside the car and takes Manyata outside...Unnati helps Vijay to come outside...meanwhile Jays car also arrives...

Vijay: Choro hamein...hamein indar nahi jaana...agar hum andar gaye to brijraj mama hamein apni rifle se...dhisshhuuu...dhishhhuuu...kar deingey...

Unnati: sshhh ...Vijay banna chup rahiye nahi toh saab log jaag jayenge...

Manyata: hum bhi andar nahi jayenge...andar hitler hai...badi badi muchon wali hitler...

Uday: please Manyata chup ho jao...agar Dadi sahab ne dekh liya to tumhari achi khasi class ho jayegi...(he holds her hand and pulls her)

Manyata: hitler ki class to aaj mein loon gi...HAAN NAHI TOH...CHOROO...choro mujhe...

He puts his hand over her mouth and picks her up, and Unnati helps Vijay bhai who could not keep his mouth shut and was still looking for his horse...all four were sneeking in when Manyata kicks a vase and breaks it while complaining for being carried by Uday...the sound of the glass breaking woke everyone up...the lights were brightened up...and everyone ran down thinking of it as an emergency...Brijraj as always thought it was an underworld don or some crazzy theif who decided to mess with him so he carried his rifle with him...everyone gathered in the hall where Uday, Unnati, Manyata and Vijay were standing...they all get shocked upon seeing them there in that state...Manyata when looks at her grandma she hides behind Uday and Vijay bhai was still looking for his horse

Vijay when sees rifle in Brijraj's hand, gets really scared and says...

Vijay: Nahiii...please hamein goli mat mariye...Ghora hum ne nahi ghumaya...(and he run and hides behind his mom)

Brijraj: (with a confused face)Vijay beta hum aapko kyun marein gey...

Manyata decides to get involved too...

Manyata: (to Brijraj) kyun ke iss ki dhanno bhag gayi...(Brijraj looks even more confused)...

Uday: princess...SHSSS... nahi to bohat daant parey gi...

Uday: nahi tum chup...

Mainka: Vijay...yeh sab kya hai...aur yeh kya haal bana rakha hai...

Rajmata: yeh sab kya ho raha hai itni raat gaye...aur aap dono ne pee hui hai...???

Manyata: (she goes to Brijaraj) Baba hitler ko bolo na...dhanno bhag gayi

Rajmata:(gets really mad) kaise hua yeh sab...kis ne di aapko drinks...

Manyata points at Vijay and Vijay points at Jay who was quietly sneeking into her room thinking that she would get away with it...

Rajmata: rukiye Jay...aap kahan ja rahi hain...aur kya yeh sab aap ne...hamein pata hona chahiye tha ke aisay bachon wale kaam aap hi kar sakti hain...

Jay: DS this is not fair...hum bachon jaisey hain...app pehle unn dono ko toh dekhiye...(She points at Vijay and Manyata who are busy with Brijraj and are driving him nuts)

Rajmata: Bas Jay hamein aur kuch nahi sunna...kal subha sab se pehle aap hamare office mein aayengi hamein aap se kuch baat karni hai...is that clear...ab aap apne room mein jayiye...(Jay leaves...)

Rajmata (to Uday): Uday beta aapko toh dehaan rakhna chahiye tha...khair chodiye...app Manyata ko unn ke kamre mein chor aayiye...

Uday: jo hukum Dadisahib...(Uday goes to Manyata)...princess chalo hum tumhe room tak chod aayein...chalo princesss

Manyata: Nahi mein nahi jaaongi...nahi...

Uday: princess dadi sahab Ki aur daat khani hai..???...chalo...

Brijraj: jaayiye manyata...

Uday: (holds Manyata) chalo princess...

Manyata: nahi nahi...mujhe Ghore peh jaana hai...Ghore pe...Ghore pe...please please please

Brijraj: Manyata please aap thori der ki liye chup hojayiye nahi toh hamara sar blast jayega...

Uday: princess ache bachon ki tarah hamare saath chalo...

Manyata (to uday): nahi...pehle tum ghora bano...please please...bano na...nahi toh mein yahin bethi rahoon gi...

Uday looks at Dadi sahab (with a confused look) and Dadisahab smiles and nods...she allows him to do what Manyata wants...so Uday bends down and Manyata climbs on his back...looking very happy...

Manyata: (to Uday) BHAAG DHANNO BHAAG AAJ TERI IZZAT KA SAWAAL HAI...(Uday takes Manyata to her room)

Rajmata: (to Vijay) Vijay beta kya hamein aapko andar jaane ki liye specially invitation dena hoga...

Manyata: hum bhi ghore peh jayenge...jiji ki tarah...

Mainka: Vijay beta...yeh kaisi zid hai...ache bache zid nahi karte jayiye apne room mein jayiye...

Rajmata: rahne dijiye Mainka yeh bhi apni behen ki tarah hi zidi hain...

Rajmata calls the servant and tells him to drop Vijay to his room...

Rajmata: (to servant) Vijay ko unn ke kamrey tak chod aayiye...

The servant bends down and Vijay bhai happily gets on his back

Vijay (to servant): chal meray ghorey...TIK TIK TIK... (And he gets dropped to his room)

Brijraj: pata nahi Maa sahib iss ghar ke bache kab barey hongey...

Rajmata: dheeraj rakhiye Brijraj...aur aap bhi ab tak kahan barey hue hain...(Komal and Mainka try to hold their laugh and Brijraj looks embarrassed)

In Manyata's room Uday puts Manyata on her bed...she was half asleep and was still blabbering...after settling her down and putting comforter over her when he turns around to leave Manyata holds his hand...she was still asleep...at this Uday turns around to face Manyata, he puts her hand on the bed, then he bends down and kisses her forehead...

Uday: Good night princess...

Right when he was leaving he sees Manyata's phone Vibrating...he looks at her phone which said "UNKNOWN CALLER"...he looks at the time and it was 1:30 AM...he gets suspicious about the call and thinks why would someone call at this hour...and he decides to answer the phone...

TO BE CONTINUED...

So this was part 4...I really hoped that you guys liked it...suggestions are more than welcome... please do comment...also if anyone wants the PM send me buddy request...Thank you for reading ...Thanks again...

Love,

Alissa.😊

🤣🤣🤣 omg this is too much the drunk scene is just amazing ghora dhanno . u r great at writing this alissa dii pls update soon looking forward to the next part 😊

Thanks for the pm!! That chapter was soo funny!! N u ended with a cliffhanger!! I can't wait to read the next chapter!!:)

very nice

thats awesome ..just read your ff...

This chapter was very very funny.I couldn't stop laughing and BTW thnx for the PM

LOVED your writing! Entertaining post :) You should have been the writer of this show!! Keep updating & PLEASE add me in your PM list :)

it was soo awesome ! waitin eagerly 4 part 5 !! post as soon as possible!! 😃

OMG...ghora...n dhanoo...bechara uday n servants have to bear alot...hahahaaha...but it was sooo hillarious...superb...plss do continue fast...