You Are My Miracle (FF) pt 21 upd (Akash returns) - Page 53

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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey pls cont soon eagrly waiting for ur update it's been quite a while now pls pls pls update fast
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I m waiting for manyata pregnancy update soon
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Originally posted by: pritus

I m waiting for manyata pregnancy update soon

😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
thats all i can say at the moment..😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: wendy25

UPDATE FAST

Otherwise i will call fia for assistance in torturing you😈

congo on being dazzler😊⭐️

HOLY COW..I AM ON IT BOSS🤓
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: akshi_t

loved it lizzy...loved the siblings plotting and planning to help both UV and M...loved the end of the part 😆...so i gues finally UV will come to knw abt it 😛...m really curious to read his reaction 😆...hope u r having fun...update soon wen u come back!!! 😊

hey akki🤗
thanks so much baby..love u..😃
yup uv would finally find out along with M😆
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Originally posted by: Khawaunju

heyy wen u updatin u r new FF m waititn fr it... culd u say til wen wuld it b possible cuz m desperately waitin fr it 😊

anu...will cont real soon😉
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Hey guys this is part 17...hope you all like it...=)

Before you guys read i want to say something...HAPPY FATHERS DAY to all the daddies in the world, and i want to say a little something to my daddy, "Daddy happy fathers day, you are the world's coolest daddy, i love for everything specially for always taking my side when mummy gets mad, ur the best, also no matter how old I get, where I go or what I become I will always be your little princess, Love you daddy...and U ROCK MAN"

PART # 17

Uday notices her dori was open and she looked really embarrassed...she was turning...she comes closer to her and ties her dori...Manyata was feeling dizzy again...and she loses her balance but Uday catches her in his arms and makes her sit on the bed...

Uday: yeh kya princess...ab toh tum bhi hamein dekh kar idhar udhar girne lagti ho...

Manyata: (no reply)

Uday: kya hua princess...aaj toh bara sharma rahi ho...

Manyata: (no reply and was facing downwards...she felt a little weird)...

Uday: (gets worried)...princesss...kya hua...

Manyata suddenly gets up and runs to the bathroom...she closes the door behind...

Uday: princesss...princess kya hua...dawaza kholo hum andar aarahe hain...

Manyata: (throwing up)

Uday: please princess...darwaza kholo...

Manyata: (throwing up)

Uday: manyata ab agar tum ne hamein andar nahi aaney diya toh hum darwaza tod deingey...

Manyata:(opens the door and walks outside wiping her face)...please darwaza mat torna...nahi toh bohat problem ho jayegi...

Uday: kya hua princess...tum theek ho...tum ne hamein bata kyun nahi ke tumhari tabyet theek nahi hai...

Manyata: nahi main theek hoon...shayad food poisoning hogayi hai...bas issi liye...

Uday: bas food poisoning...are you serious manyata...tum apna bilkul bhi khayaal nahi rakhti...

Manyata: Uday...tum overreact kar rahe ho...main theek hoo...yeh toh bas aisey hi...

Uday: chup...bilkul chup...chalo hamarey saath doctor ke paas...come on get up...

Manyata: Uday itna bara issue mat banao...ghar main functions ho rahe hain...sab bekaar main pareshaan ho jayen gey...

Uday: hamarey liye tum se ziyada important aur kuch nahi hai...okay...ab chalo hamarey saath...

Manyata: par...

Uday: princess tum khud chal ke jaogi ya hum tumhe utha kar le ke jayen...

Manyata: AAa...(frustrated)...theek hai...chal rahi hoon main...par abhi kisi ko batana nahi ke hum kahan jaa rahe hain...

Uday: hum kisi se kuch nahi kahen gey...ab chalein...

Manyata: (nods)...

And they both leave...

Jay and Vijay come into Manyata's room to see if Uday showed up or not...but they donot find anyone in there and get suspicious...

Vijay: o teri...manyata kahan gayi...

Jay: hum toh usse yahin chor ke gaye the...pata nahi kahan gayi...

Vijay: kahin Uday ne usse kidnap toh nahin kar liya...

Jay: kidnap...hmmm...waisey hum Uday ko acche se jaante hain...hosakta hai ke Manyata ki zid ki waja se usne kidnap kar liya ho...

Vijay: Jay bhai...chalo neechey chal kar sab ko yeh masalay daar news sunate hain...

Jay: Vijay bhai...you are so evil...

Vijay: I TELL YOU...

Downstairs in the hall everyone is sitting and having a conversation about the weddind and its preparations...

Giriraj: (takes out a box)...yeh uday ke mom ke gehne hain...yeh un ne hamari shaadi peh pehne the...aur woh chati thi ke Manyata inn gehno ko pehne...

Unnati: wow Dad...mom ki jewelry...yeh bhabhi par bohat acche lagein gey...

Giriraj : (gives the jewelry to komal and says)...hum chahte hain ke Manyata shaadi pe inhe hi pehne...Vasundra bhi yahi chahti thien...

Komal: jee Mahraj...hum inhe manayata ko dey deingey...

Unnati: kyun na bhabhi ko kahen ke pehen ke dikhayen...

Dadisahib (to unnati): sahi kaha beta ...Manyata ko bula lete hain...

Dadisahib (to servant): rajkumari Manyata se kahiye ke hum ne unhein hall main bulaya hai...

Servant: jee Rajmata...jo hukum...

Jay: DS...jiji tab aayen gi na jab woh mahal main hongi...

Dadisahib: aap kehna kya chahti hain Jay...???

Vijay: Nanisahib Jay bhai yeh kehna chahti hai ke...jiji apne room main nahi hai in fact woh toh mahal main hi nahi hai...

Komal: Manyata mahal main nahi hain...par kuch der pehle toh woh apne room main hi tien...

Dadisahib: akhir Manyata jaa kahan sakti hain...kisi se kuch kaha bhi nahi...

Vijay: nanisahib Manyata ne iss liye kisi se kuch nahi kaha kyun ke usse khud bhi nahi pata hai ke woh kahan jaa rahi thi...

Mainka: Vijay paheliyan mat bujhao...seedhey seedhey batao...

Vijay: jee mom...jiji kidnap hui hain...

Komal: KYA...???

Dadisahib: VIJAY...YEH AAP KYA KEH RAHEN HAIN...???

Jay: relax guys...Vijay bhai ka kehne ka matlab hai ke jiji ko Uday kahin bahar le kar gaya hai...

Mainka: Vijay tum cheezon par mirch masala lagana kab band karogey...

Giriraj: par Uday aisey achanak Manyata ko le kar kahan gaya ho ga...usse batana toh chahiye tha...

Brijraj (to Giriraj): bachey hain Giriraj...gaye honge kahin bahar...

Giriraj: haan woh sab toh theek hai par batana toh chahiye tha Uday ko...

Dadisahib: koi baat nahi...aur accha hi hua Uday manyata ko le kar bahar chale gaye...woh bhi kafi dino se mahal se bahar nahi nikli thien...

Scene shifts to the hospital...where Manyata is complaining for bringing her to the doctor for no reason...

Manyata: dekho...bilkul theek toh hoon main...

Uday: (no reply)

Manyata: fazool main mujhey bimaar bana diya...pata nahi yahan se kab jayen gey...

Uday: (no reply)

Manyata: yahan ab agar main aik second bhi rahi na toh zaroor bimaar ho jaongi...

Uday: (no reply)

Manyata: pata nahi aur kitna time lagey ga...

Uday: Princess...please tum do minute chup baitho gi...???

Manyata: toh main konsa shor macha rahi hoon...aur tum toh bolo hi mat...main tum se bohat gussa hoon...(angry face)

Uday: ab hum ne kya kiya...

Manyata: accha...kya kiya...main bata ti hoon...

The doctor comes back and says...

Doctor: rajkumari jee...hamein aapke kuch test karne hain...aap hamarey saath andar chaliye...

Manyata: arey yaar...ab aur kya karna hai...

Uday (to Manyata) : princess...jao doctor ke saath andar jao...

Manyata: nahi...tum bhi meray saath chalo...

Uday: nahi princess...hum bahar tumhara wait karte hain...

Manyata: nahi nahi...mujhey bohat darr lag raha hai...tum bhi chalo...pata nahi yeh log meray saath kya kya kareingey...

Doctor: rajkumari jee...hum aapke saath kuch nahi kareingey aap darrye mat...lekin yuvraj ji agar aap chahien ton andar aasakte hain...(to uday)

Manyata: dekha main bhi toh yahi keh rahi hoon...chalo...nahi toh main koi test nahi karwaoongi...

Uday: okay fine...theek hai...hum bhi chal rahe hain...

Both uday and Manyata go inside with the doctor...the doctor makes manyata lay down and starts the tests...she does a couple of tests...doctor checks her blood pressure and her pulse...

Doctor: aap log yahan wait kijiye...main aapki ki reports ready kar ke lati hoon...

Uday: jee doctor...(the doctor leaves)

After the doctor leaves Uday looks at Manyata and she gives him a look...she was mad...

Uday: princess...

Manyata: (no reply)

Uday: itni chotu si naak peh itna sara gussa...(he smiles)

Manyata: (no reply and angry face...)

Uday: tum apne saarey tewar hamein hi dekhati ho...seriously princess...bohat ziddi ho tum...

Manyata: accha ziddi main hoon...aur tum tumhari zidd ki waja se hi main yahan bimaaron ki tarah leti hoon...

Uday: meri jaan tum samjhti kyun nahi ho...tumhe pata bhi hai ke tum hamarey liye kya ho...you have no idea...tumhe uss halat main dekh kar hamari dhadkan rok gayi thi...tumhe chot lagti hai toh hamein talkeef hoti hai...aur tum ho ke...apna zara bhi khayaal nahi rakhti...

Manyata: par main theek toh hoon...

Uday: oh God...princess you are impossible...

The doctor comes in...

Uday: doctor...kya hua hai...Manyata theek toh hai na...

Manyata: doctor main theek hoon na...ab main jaaon...

Uday: doctor batayiye na...

Doctor: it's a good news...

Manyata (to uday) : dekha Uday...good news...main bilkul theek hoon...ab chalien...

Doctor: nahi rajkumari ji aap samjhi nahi...mera kehne ka matlab hai ke...Rajkumari jee pregnant hain...aap dono mummy daddy banne wale hain...

Manyata: KYAAA...?????

Uday: (standing silently with his mouth hanging down and looking super confused)

Manyata: hahhhahahahha...oh God...hahahahaaa...hahahaha...pait mein dard ho gaya meray...

Doctor (to uday): she is 3 weeks pregnant...I think it was really unexpected issi liye yeh aisey react kar rahi hain...

Uday: (still shocked in disbelief)...

TO BE CONTINUED...

Ummm...i don't really know what to say after reading that poll and you guys's comments on it...i admit i am guilty of being super lazy and not updating regularly...thats just because i am a little distracted or more like a little too distracted these days cuz of vacations and all..but guys please don't hate me and don't be mad at me...and please accept my apologies...i highly appreciate you guys's love and support, thank you so much for everything...you guys are the best..love you all🤗

please do leave your comments...also if anyone wants the PM send me buddy request...Thank you for reading ...Thanks again...

Love,

Alissa.😊

Edited by alissa345 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
alisaa dear ausum update love it u r da best muahaha
btw everthin went on hospital wen wil u updatin nxt?/😆😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
Finally gud news...jiske intezzar mein mera hair white ho gye ,woh gadi aa hi gyi,,,,,,,,,super duper happy ...awww poor uday in shock...manayta laughng hahaha...bechari ko ZOR KA JATKA ZUAROO SE LAGA
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Posted: 13 years ago
u know wat sweets...u really end da story on such points where again we need to start a poll..to scare u...it was really awsum...but short...

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