You Are My Miracle (FF) pt 21 upd (Akash returns) - Page 26

PLZZZ ALISSA UPDATE SOON DEAR...EAGERLY WAITING FOR UR UPDATE...I LOVE UR FF ALOOOTTT...(wd a puupy dog face)

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PLZZZ ALISSA UPDATE SOON DEAR...EAGERLY WAITING FOR UR UPDATE...I LOVE UR FF ALOOOTTT...(wd a puupy dog face)

LET ME TELL U ONE THING...before i use to read the title of ur story "AKASH RETURNS" and then i used to thought that this FF is surely by some MONASH fans...and ignore it...and this is doing to be full akash jaap...sorry for the language but really i thought so...😳

and then one night i was not feeling sleepy...and boredom was killing me...then i thought i should read this FF ...lets see no...😎

and then i read 12 parts in one go...and OMG i was like...😲i am sooo stupid...and u know...i thanked god that 12 parts are already updated or else i would have died with excitement...😆

and really THANK U alissa for writing such a nice story...really loved it...i wish DEK ki writer ap hoti...😉

so moral of the story...now thanks to u i started believing in that qoute "don't judge the book by its cover" or something like that...😕i am very poor in quotes and all...😆

just finished reading all part again...😉

and i wanna hug u...🤗🤗🤗

raelly how can anyone write sooo well or i should say AMAZING...really u guyz...we have bunch of awesome writers here on forum...

U,SURYA,ADDEN,AKKI,REEHA...love u all guyz...really...👏

(sorry all writers are awesome...but i loved there stories and adden's positive post aloott)

okay NOW UPDATE SOON OKAY...AND DO PM ME...I WILL WAIT...

Awww...you are too sweet buddy...and yes i think so too the title is a bit misleading cuz initially when i started the ff i had no clue that i would pull it along that much...its like i cant end i have so much to write...i have already written part 19 and still no where close to end...so yeah...and thank you so so much for reading it and liking it...btw i hate the character Akash (no offense to anyone) but i really dont like his character at all so whatever i write its basically based on manveer and only manveer...once again i am really very glad that you liked the FF so much...i will update really soon...since now my exams are over and i am back home for summer i will be writing a lot and update more often...thanks sweety...and will pm you soon =)

Hey guys this is part 14...hope you all like it...=)

PART # 14

He sits next to her and adores her while she was sleeping...

Uday: (to Manyata who was asleep)...Sorryyy...princess...aaj kuch ziyada ho gaya na...par kya karein tum jealous hoti hui bohat cute lagti ho...(He smiles)

Uday: (still talking to sleeping Manyata)...waisey aaj toh tumne hamein sach mein darra diya...tumhara yeh roop hum ne pehle kabhi nahi dekha...tum hamesha hamein surprise karti rahti ho...you are such a mystery...par hum iss mystery ko zaroor solve kar lein gey...(he smiles and kisses her on the cheek)

Uday gets up to leave and before leaving turns around looks at manyata and says...

Uday: kal aap hum se kaise bachogi princess...love you...(he smiles and leaves)

The next day, It was Jay's engagement...the whole Rajmahal was busy in making sure everything was exactly as Jay wanted it...Jay was in her room busy getting ready and throwing tantrums at everyone...Manyata was also in her room trying to ignore Uday's calls...she was both mad and embarrsed...mad because of him showing up at the party last night and embarrassed because of what she did to him last night...

Vijay bhai who was busy doing nothing decided to go to Manyata's room and annoy her about the party last night...

Vijay: Manyata ...

Manyata: kya hua Vijay bhai...

Vijay: yahi toh hum tumse puchne aayen hain...kya hua...(cheesy smile)

Manyata: kya...kya hua...kuch hona tha...???

Vijay: nahi nahi...kuch nahi hona tha...par phir bhi hogaya...(teasingly)

Manyata: kya hogaya jo nahi hona tha...(confused)

Vijay: arey wahi jo nahi hona tha...

Manyata: (mad now) AAA...kya hua jo nahi hona tha par phir bhi hogagaya...kya kya hai...seedhe seedhe bolo...nahi toh abhi ke abhi kamrey se out...

Vijay: theek hai...theek hai...hum point par aate hain kyun ke guess karna toh tumhe aata nahi hai...

Manyata: Vijay bhai ab agar aik second ke andar aap ne seedhe seedhe nai bataya toh...aap honge main hongi aur yeh mera joota hoga..(pointing towards her shoe)...aur phir kya hoga...aap jaante hai...(with an evil smile)

Vijay: hum yeh keh rahe the ke...dead body kahan chupai hai...(mysteriously)

Manyata: DEAD BODY...???...kis ki...Vijay bhai kya subha naashte main kuch ulta seedha khaya tha...???

Vijay: Uday ki dead body...kahan chupai...

Manyata: UDAY KI DEAD BODY...aap paagal ho gaye hain kya...Uday ko kya hua hai...(looking worried and confused)

Vijay: Kyun...hamein pata hai ke kal raat tum ne Uday ko kitni berahmi se...seriously M bhai... tum bachpan main insaan khaati thi...i mean tum se mil kar toh rakshas bhi darr jaye...I TELL YOU...

Manyata: (she takes off her shoe and holds it in her hand)...ab agar aik second mein apne muhn par tape laga ke yahan se rafu chakar nahi hua na...toh aaj toh yeh chappal zarroor tootey gi...

Vijay: hum tumhari chappal se nahi darte samjhi...pagal kahin ki...(he runs out of the room)

Manyata (to herself): yeh Vijay bhai aik din zarroor meray se maar khaye ga...I TELL YOU...

Scene shifts to Jay's room...she is mad because her stylist messed up her hair...

Jay: how dare you...tumhari himmat kaisey hui...hamarey baal kharab karne ki...

Stylist: sorry Rajkumari ji...

Jay: sorry...sorry my foot...tumhe iss galti ki saza zaroor mile gi...

Stylist: please maam aisa mat kariye...

Jay: ab hum bhi dekhte hain ke tumhe kahin pe bhi job kaisey milti hai...get out aur dobara humein apni shakal mat dikhana...(stylist leaves the room)

When stylist was leaving Manyata was entering Jay's room...she wanted to say something to Jay and give her something...

Jay: tum...aur hamarey room main...???

Manyata: haan Jay...hamein tum se kuch kehna the...if you don't mind...

Jay: well tum waisey bhi andar toh aa hi chuki ho...so go for it...hum sun rahe hain kaho kya kehna hai...

Manyata: (comes in and sits next to Jay) Jay hum jaante hain ke humari aik dusre se kabhi nahi bani...in fact hum aik dusre se nafrat karte the...par...

Jay: sahi kaha...hum aik dusre se nafrat hi toh karte hain...

Manyata: Jay...jo kuch bhi hua woh sahi toh bilkul bhi nahi tha...aur...issi liye usse bhula dena hi accha hoga...hum sach mein tumharey liye bohat bohat khush hain...

Jay: oh really...???

Manyata: sacch main Jay...hamein bohat accha laga tumhe aur jaggadh ko saath dekh kar...Jaggadh bohat accha hai...he really loves you...

Jay: yeah...I know that already...

Manyata: (she gives a box to Jay)...Jay...yeh hamari taraf se tumharey liye...

Jay: (takes it and says)...yeh kya hai...

Manyata: khol kar dekho...

Jay: (opens the box)...Kangan...yeh toh...

Manyata: yeh hamari taraf se tumharey liye ek chota sa gift hai...

Jay: par yeh kangan toh tumharey hain...Mom ne yeh tumharey liye banwaye the...

Manyata: haan main jaanti hoon...par main yeh bhi jaanti hoon ke tumhe inn ko pehne ka kitna maan tha...issi kiye yeh tumharey liye...

Jay: Manyata magar...

Manyata: please Jay...yeh tumhari badi behen ki taraf se hai...please mana mat karna...

Jay: (smiles and says)...alright i'll keep it...btw thanks...

Manyata: (happily)...kya hum tumhe abhi yeh pehna dain...

Jay smiles and gives her hand to Manyata and she puts the bangles on her...

Jay: thanks jiji...hamein tumhara gift bohat acha laga...

Manyata smiles and leaves the room...

The scene shifts to Komal and Brijraj's bed room...where Brijraj is busy getting ready and komal is annoyed by him taking so long in getting ready...

Brijraj: (standing in front of mirror and whistling)...nana...nannaaa..lalallaaalalaaalaa...

Komal: ohoo...kya baat hai Mahraj...badey gaaney gaye jaa rahe hain...(suspiciously)

Brijraj: arey Komal aap...aaj hum bohat acchey mood mein hain...lalllaaalalalalalllaa

Komal: hum jaan sakte hain kyun...???

Brijraj: arey komal...aaj Jay ki engagement hai bhai...(looking in mirror)...areybhai yeh hamarey baal sahi kyun nahi ho rahe...

Komal: wahi toh hum bhi keh rahe hain...engagement Jay ki hai...aapki nahi...samjhey mahraj...

Brijraj: arey Komal...wahan kitne log aayenge...hamein toh aaccha dikhna hi padega...

Komal: LOG...hum jaante hain ke aap konse logon ki baat kar rahe hain...jaggadh ki mummy na...

Brijraj: arey nahi komal...

Komal: Mahraj...hum keh dete hain agar aap Jaggadh ki mummy ke aas paas bhi hamein nazar aaye na toh dekhiye ga...aap ka kya hoga...

Brijraj: K.kk...komal...

Someone knocks at the door it was Manyata...she heard komal and Brijraj...

Manyata: hooo...Maa...app baba ko darra kyun rahi thien...???

Brijraj: dekhiye na beta...aapki Mom ajeeb o gareeb batein kar rahi hain...

Komal: kya...AJEEB O GAREEB...acchaa...???

Manyata: Maa...chor do na baba...kyun daat rahi ho...woh becharey ne toh kuch kiya bhi nahi hai...

Komal: theek hain...aaj chor dete hain...sirf aapke liye beta...

Brijraj: (whispers to Manyata)...beta aaj toh aap ne hamein baal baal bacha liya...

Manyata: (to brijraj)...ab aap jaldi se apne baal theek kar lijiye...(she winks at him and he winks back)

Komal: yeh kya beta...app ab tak tayar nahi hui...party kuch hi der main shuru hone wali hai beta...

Manyata: Jee Maa hum jaa hi rahe the ready ready hone...par hum aapko yeh kehna aaye the ke Jay bohat gussa ho rahi...uska dopatta theek se set hi nahi horaha...aap dekh lijiye na...nahi toh woh pata nahi stylist ka kya haal kare gi...

Komal: yeh Jay bhi na...theek hai...hum jaate hain...par aap jaa kar jaldi se ready hojayiye...aap already kafi late ho chuki hain...

Manyata: jee maa...(she turns around to leave)

Komal: (calls her name from behind)...Manyata...aapke liye Uday ne jo dress aur accessories bheji thi aapko mil gaye na...

Manyata: dress Uday ne bheji...par meray designer ne already dress...(confused)

Komal: haan beta...par Uday chahte hain ke aap un ki layi hui dress pehnein...

Manyata: Jee Maa...main ready hone jaati hoon...(she leaves...)

Scene shifts to Uday's bed room...he's getting ready and Unnati comes in...

Unnati: DADA...kya kar rahe ho...hum late ho rahe hain...

Uday: bas Unnati 2 minute...

Unnati: seriously dada...yeh hamari line honi chahiye thi...larkiyaan tayaar hone mein ziyada time lagati hain...

Uday: almost done Unnati...

Unnati: waisey dada...you are looking really handsome I must say...hey aap aur bhabhi matching matching kaprey pehn rahe ho kya...???

Uday: you'll see...(he winks at her)...lets go...I'm ready...

Unnati: about time...(teasingly)

They both leave...

Scene shifts Manyata's room...she finds what Uday sent her...she is having a hard time in getting ready since there is no help available...

Manyata (to herself): (opens the box with clothes in it)..hum bhi to dekhain kya bheja hai halkat veday ne...

Manyata (to herself): O TERI...yeh kya hai...(she holds a blouse in her hands)...iske peechey ki side kahan hai...aur sari...yeh toh mujhey pehna bhi nahi aati...

Manyata: (all worried)...party shuru hone hi wali hai...koi servant bhi nazar nahi aa raha...Maa bhi Jay ki help kar rahi hain...ab main kya karoon...

Manyata: (looks at the saari and the blouse)...kya karoon main iska...yeh Uday bhi bara besharam hai...aaj nahi bachega woh...pehle hi late ho rahey hai...dadisahib se aaj acchi khasi class ho jayegi...Oh God...chalo try kar ke dikhti hoon...

She takes the blouse and saari and goes into the changing room...five minutes later she comes out of the changing room...she was wearing blouse and somehow wrapped the saari around and it kept on falling...so she decided to try to wrap it around one more time...her saari was on the floor and she was spinning and trying to wrap it around...

Manyata (to herself): AAA...(in frustration)...kyun uday kyun ...kyun mera imtehaan lete rahte ho...

she was facing the other side of the room when someone knocked at the door and Manyata thought it was her helper seema...

Manyata: shukar hai seema tum aagayi...please meri help karo na...yeh saari mujhse se pehni hi nahi jarahi hai...

The person comes in closes the door behind...picks up the saari hanging on the floor

Manyata:(still facing the other way)...aaj tum ne bacha liya...nahi toh...(she turns around)...

Manyata: TUM...???...YAHAN...ABHI...???...Bahar jao abhi...

It was Uday...

Uday: haan princess hum hain...aur yeh kya...tum abhi tak tayaar nahi hui...hamein laga tha ke tumhe saari pehni nahi aati hogi...isssi liye toh hum help karne aagaye...

Manyata grabs her dupatta she was wearing earlier to cover up her upper body...at which Uday smiles...

Manyata: Uday tum na...uugghhh...please abhi jao...waise hi yeh saari...dadisahib se toh zarror daat pade gi...

Uday: relax princess...saari hum ne bheji thi right...issi liye tumhari help bhi hum hi kareingey...

Manyata: par Uday...

Uday: SSHHH...

He picks up the sari and starts wrapping it around her...Manyata was turning red...his hands kept on touching her waist which was giving her chills...

Manyata: (whispers)...please Uday...rehne do...

Uday does not stop, he smiles and keeps on wrapping it around...

Uday: dekho princess...ho bhi gaya...

Manyata: ohkay thank you...(she tries to run away but he pulls her back)

Uday: itni jaldi bhi kya hai princess...

Manyata's saari wasn't pinned up and so it falls...Manyata turns around to hide herself from Uday...but Uday gets closer to her and wraps his arms around her from the back...he whispers in her ears...

Uday: dekha princess...jaldi jaldi main pin lagana toh bhool hi gayi...(being flirty)

He picks up her saari and tries to pin it up...he accidently pokes her...

Manyata: ouchhh...

he turns her around and she had a little tears drop in her eye...he kisses her at the shoulder where he poked her by accident and then kisses her on her eyes which...and whispers in her ears...

Uday: sorry princess...bohat dard hua na...???

Manyata moves her head as in saying no...

Manyata: Uday...mujhey kuch kehna hai...

Uday: hhhmmm...(he was busy kissing her on the neck...)

Manyata: kahoon...???

Uday pulls himself back so that he could see her in the eyes...

Uday: kaho na princess...

Manyata lifts herself up on her toes and moves closer to Uday...

Manyata: mujhey kabhi chor kar mat jaana...I LOVE YOU...

Uday: I LOVE...(she stops him by putting her hand over his mouth)

she kept on moving closer and was starring at his lips and touching them...she gets even closer and kisses him on the lips...at this he kisses her back...both were lost in the kiss they were lost in each other and forgot about the world around them...the kiss was still going on manyata had tears in her eyes which were slowly rolling down her cheeks and came in between their lips...Manyata broke the kiss since she was running out of her breath...she looked at Uday started laughing and hugged him...

Uday: hum bhi tumharey bina nahi jee sakte princess...I LOVE YOU...

Someone knocks at the door...it was komal outside; she came to check if Manyata was ready...

Komal: Beta...aap ready hogayi...???

Manyata (to uday): Uday...maa...ab kya hoga...

Uday: relax princess...kuch nahi hoga...

Komal: manyata...beta sab theek hai na...apko koi help chahiye kya...

Manyata: nahi nahi maa...main tayaar hoon...aap jayiye main neeche aati hoon...

Komal: theek hai beta...par jaldi kijiye ga...Jay bhi neeche aa chuki hai...ring ceremony bas shuru hone hi wali hai...

Manyata: jee Maa...bas 2 minute...aap jayiye mein aati hoon...

Komal: okay beta...hum sab neeche aapka wait kar rahe hain...(and she leaves)

Inside the room...

Uday: princess...neeche chalna chahiye...

Manyata: haan tum joa...main peeche se aati hoon...

Uday: jee nahi...aap hamarey saath hi chaleingi...after all we are a couple...(he offers her his hand)...

Manyata: are you sure... ???

Uday nods, she takes his hand and both leave the room and walk down the stairs...

TO BE CONTINUED...

So this was part 14...I really hoped that you guys liked it...suggestions are more than welcome... please do comment...also if anyone wants the PM send me buddy request...Thank you for reading ...Thanks again...

Love,

Alissa.😊

PS: I wanted to ask you guys something...should i change the title "Akash Returns"to something more creative because to be honest i personally do not like Akash's character at all (no offense to anyone) and apart from that the story is not about him anyways...so whats say guys...???...and also the story seems to be pulling along well so there might be many more parts coming along...i thought i should let you guys know...please do reply to my question...thank you all for reading =)

That was really good and Manyata finally confessed! I am so happy :) amazing update!

thats a very nice story i must say...keep up d good work:)my suggestion 4 d story's title is that u include d word 'ManVeer' in its name..

It was awesome.cont soon n thanks for the pm.

awesome update alissa dii 👍🏼

Gud work nd thanx 4 pm,u should change it from akash returns to some other title

AWESOME...👍🏼LOVED IT...👏UPDATE SOON...and yes i agree u should change the name of ur FF...😳i don't like this title...