You Are My Miracle (FF) pt 21 upd (Akash returns) - Page 24

awesome i just read all parts together...from 1 to 12...and i loved it...awesome...👏plz i know ur examz are coming up...BST OF LUCK FOR UR EXAMZ...👍🏼but plzzz continue soon plzz update ur this ff soon...plzzz can't wait to read more.😛...and plz add me in ur PM list...

Originally posted by: mystic.charm

Superb update…when will u update the next part??

I will update in about 2 days...thanks for reading :)

Originally posted by: BlueRobbin

<font color="#cc33ff">It was so good. 😊This line of manyata's was really funny...</font>

<font color="#cc33ff">"</font>bas aik aur week...phir jo man mein aaye karna...<font color="#cc33ff">"</font>

<font color="#cc33ff">really manyata? r u sure u wanna give udayveer the wrong idea!!!😛</font>

<font color="#cc33ff">anyways, very nice update!!!😊</font>

<font color="#cc33ff">ur an awesome writer!!!!!👍🏼alot of detail as well!!👏</font>

<font color="#cc33ff">tooo much detail!!!😳</font>

<font color="#cc33ff">thnx for pm!😉</font>

Lmao...I know right too much detail...thanks for reading...will update soon :)

Originally posted by: dekhaekkhawab

awesome i just read all parts together...from 1 to 12...and i loved it...awesome...👏plz i know ur examz are coming up...BST OF LUCK FOR UR EXAMZ...👍🏼but plzzz continue soon plzz update ur this ff soon...plzzz can't wait to read more.😛...and plz add me in ur PM list...<div></div>

Awww thank you so much for the wishes and reading the ff...I am glad you liked it...and yes I will update real soon...in a day or two :)

Hey guys, this is part 13 sorry for the delay...finally i am done with exams...so go ahead and read it...hope you all like it...

PART # 13

Uday opens the door and they both walk out...Unnati was waiting for her in the hall...

Unnati (to Manyata): bhahi...kahan thi aap...(she sees Uday with her and says)...oh...I see...(she smiles...)

Manyata looks embarrassed...

Uday (to Unnati): tum log kahin bahar jaa rahe ho...???

Unnati: haan dada...woh actually...hum ek freind ki party mein ja rahe hain...

Manyata: oh haan Unnati...hamein chalna chahiye...der ho rahi hai...

Unnati: hum car mein aapka wait karte hain...(and she leaves)

Manyata (to uday): main chaloon...???

Uday: (he kisses her on the forehead)...have fun princess...and don't get drunk...(and he winks)

Manyata smiles and then leaves...after she leaves...Uday smiles and says to himself...

Uday (to himself): waisey maza toh aaj hamein bhi bohat aayega...(he smiles)

It was mid night and the party was on, all the girls were at the place, the music was really loud...everyone was dancing, drinking and having fun...Manyata was sitting in the bar, she was not used to all this and was feeling lost, Unnati and Jay came to give her some company...

Unnati: hey bhabhi...yahan kyun baithi ho...chalo dance floor par chalo...

Manyata: nahi Unnati...mein yahin theek hoon...

Jay: come on Jiji...hamein toh laga tha ke tumhein dance karne ka bohat shauk hai...

Unnati: I think...bhabhi dada ko miss kar rahi hain...(she smiles at manyata)

Manyata: agar Uday ko pata chal gaya toh...(at this Jay rolls her eyes)

Unnati: unhein kuch nahi pata chale ga...and i'm sure that they'll have a bachelor's party also...

Meanwhile Jay ordered drinks (alcohol) for the three of them...

Jay: guys...drinks...(she offers the drink to Unnati and Manyata)

Manyata: iss baar kya milaya hai tum ne...

Unnati: iss baar kuch nahi milaya...iss baar such mein alcohol hai...

Manyata: nahi nahi...main nahi peeti...

Unnati: waisey dekha jaye toh aaj toh peena bannta hai...(and she takes the drinks and Jay smiles at her)

Jay (to Unnati):Wow... I am impressed Unnati...ajj toh tum bhi...not bad...

Unnati (to Manyata): come on bhabhi...please pee lo na...hamarey liye...please...

Manyata: tum paagal ho gayi ho Unnati...yaad hai last time kya hua tha...

Unnati: iss baar kuch nahi hoga...

Jay: seriously Jiji...it's your bachelor's party...you won't be single anymore and you know what that means...

Unnati: please...(with a puppy dog face)

Manyata looks at the two of them...and then picks up the drink...and all three drinks...

Unnati (to Jay): btw Jay...I thought you invited the dancer dudes...

Jay: patience Unnati...Patience... (Smiles)

Unnati: I'm so excited...

All of a sudden the lights go out...the spot light turns on and there were three guys standing with their backs facing the audience...all the girls got excited, they all wanted to see the guy's face...

Manyata (to Jay): Jay...yeh log kon hain...???

Jay: yeh wahi log hain...jo iss party ko special banayein gey...(with a cheesy smile)

Manyata: haan...??? (Looking confused)

Jay: you just wait and watch... (Smiles)

The music changed and the spot light focused on the three guys...the girls started shouting and wanted the boys to turn around...The guys turned around one by one in a row and upon looking at them, the girls attacked on them...

On the other hand reactions of Jay, Manyata and Unnati were a little different...

Jay: WHAT THE F***

Manyata: O TERI...

Unnati: IMPOSSIBLE...

Manyata, Unnati and Jay, all three looked shocked...Manyata's mouth was wide open in disbelief, she could not believe what she just saw...Jay and Unnati were also in the same situation but to a lesser extent...it was UDAY, JAGGADH and VIJAY BHAI...dancing crazily with the girls...

Manyata looked super dooper mad...she could not believe it was Uday and on the top of it he was dancing with those girls...she could not bear to see those girls all over him...he knew she was glaring at him but he just wanted to mess with her and so ignored her...

she was pissed off...she randomly pulled some dude with her to the dance floor but Unnati interrupted her...

Unnati: (to Manyata)...nahi bhabhi...he is not hot enough...dada jealous nahi honge...

Manyata (to Unnati): Unnati sweetheart I don't think anyone is hot enough compared to your dada...(looking mad)...

Manyata pulls the dude to the dance floor and starts dancing with him she tries her best to make Uday jealous but it seemed like he was not even noticing anything...Manyata got really upset and left the dance floor...

Manyata went to the bar and ordered shots, she took eight shots one after the other...she drank a little too much and was losing control...and on the top it watching Uday dancing like that with those girls only made things worse...Alcohol was doing its work, Manyata was fully drunk and mad...she got up and walked towards the dance floor where Uday was having fun with the girls...she pushed the girls away from him...

Uday: hi princess...(smiles )

She doesn't reply back and holds his arm and takes him outside...she orders him to drop her home

Manyata: hamein issi waqt mahal wapas jaana hai...issi waqt...

Uday: lekin princess party to abhi khatam nahi hui...(teasingly)

Manyata looks at him as if she is going to eat him alive...

Uday: theek hai...theek hai...tum gussa kyun ho rahi ho...(And he drives her home)

On the other hand...Jay talks to Jaggadh and Vijay bhai talks to Unnati...

Vijay (to Unnati): hi Unnati...(with a cheesy smile)

Unnati: hi...btw yeh sab kya tha...

Vijay: come on Unnati sweetheart say it...I know what it is...just say it...

Unnati: say what...???...(looking confused)

Vijay: that I was totally HOT up there...and kahin tumhe bura toh nahi laga...

Unnati: (starts laughing)...HOT...oh yeah totally...

Vijay: (looking embarrassed) tumhe bura nahi laga...

Unnati: bilkul nahi...VIJAY BANNA...you totally rocked up there...

Vijay gave a sly smile to Unnati...he was expecting Unnati to get jealous...but...that did not happen he was heartbroken...

Unnati: waisey Manyata bhabhi bohat gussa thi...pata nahi dada ka aaj kya haal hone wala hai...

And Vijay bhai was back in action...he was always there to spice things up...

Vijay: you are right...Manyata gussey mein kisi adam khor se kam nahi lag rahii thi...aaj toh woh Uday ko halal kar ke uss par mirch masala laga kar khaney wali hogi...bechara uday...

Unnati: Vijay banna aap bhi na...kabhi nahi sudhrein gey...

Vijay: I think Manyata ki dish ko taste karne ke liye hamein bhi jaana chahiye...

The scene shifts to Rajmahal Uday drives Manyata home...she was awfully quiet and he knew he was in trouble...he decides to drop her off to her since she was really drunk and was losing her balance...they both go inside...and brijraj who was still awake since Komal kicked him out of the room...he saw the two walking in...he noticed Manyata was drunk...

Brijraj: beta aap log...???...aur yeh kaya Manyata aap ne phir pee hai...aap hamari tarah hoti jaa rahi hain...

Manyata doesn't reply and still looked really mad...

Uday: Uncle Brij aap abhi tak soye nahi...

Brijraj: ab kya batayen beta...bohat lambi kahani hai...pehle toh yeh batayiye ke manyata ko kya hua...

Uday: kuch nahi ucle...madam ne kuch ziyada hi charha li hai...

At this Manyata looks at him angrily...and brijraj notices this...

Brijraj: lagta hai...Manyata aap se gussa hain...par aap logon ko jo bhi baaten karni hai aap room mein ja ke kijiye...kyun ke agar Maa sahib ko pata chal gaya toh...hum teenoo ki shaamat aa jaye gi...

Uday: jee Uncle Brij... (And he takes Manyata towards her room)

As soon as they reach in front of the room Uday opens the door and Manyata pushes him inside the room...and then follows him inside the room...upon entering she closes the door and locks it...

Uday looked really confused at her actions...

Manyata (to uday): kyun...maza aaya un chudailon ke saath dance karne mein...???

Uday: nahi princess...bilkul maza nahi aaya...tum jo nahi thi...(teasingly)

Manyata: Awww...really...par ab mujhey bohat maza aaney wala hai...(she puts hair hair down)

Uday: (looking confused)...princess...tum kya karne wali ho...???

Manyata: kuch bhi toh nahi...

She turns on the music and walks towards him...she was coming closer and closer and he was backing up...

Uday: princess... lagta hai aaj kuch ziyada hi chadh gayi hai tumhe...

she kept on moving closer and closer and he kept on backing up until he realized the bed was behind him and there was no space to move back...Manyata pushed him back so that he fell on the bed...He now looked really scared...he had no idea what she was going to do with him...

Outside the room, Vijay bhai and Unnati were discussing that what could possibly be going on inside...

Vijay: Unnati tumne kuch sunna...???

Unnati: kya Vijay banna...???

Vijay: hamein kisi ki roney ki waaz aarahi hai

Unnati: roney ki awaaz...nahi toh...

Vijay: focus Unnati...hamein toh Uday...Uday ki roney ki awaaz sunai de rahi hai...

Unnati: come on Vijay banna...dada ki roney ki awaaz...impossible...

Vijay: tumhe kya lagta hai...andar kya ho raha hoga...???(curiously)

Unnati: no idea...

Vijay: kahin Manyata ne Uday ki pitaii toh nahi kardi...uski theory ka toh tumhe pata hi hai "Marti dus (10) hai aur ginti aik (1) hai"...

Unnati: Vijay banna aap kuch ziyada hi dramatic ho rahe hain...

Vijay: hamein pura yaqeen hai...manyata ne uday par attack kiya hoga...sansani khaiz khulasa mayata ne udaybeer ko mara...

Unnati:...O teri...yeh toh rhyme karta hai...

Vijay: haina...haina...haina...(excitedly)...talent Unnati talent...issey kehtey hain talent...

A voice comes from inside the room...both focused again...

Unnati: yeh andar aakhir ho kya raha hai...???

Vijay: kahin manyata ne Uday ko chair se baandh toh nahi diya...

Unnati: (focused now)...yeh bhabhi ki chikhney ki awaaz kyun nahi aarahi hai...hamein toh laga tha ke woh aaj dada ko bohat daatey gi

Vijay: zaroor munh par tape laga di hogi...zor ka jhatka dheerey se...I TELL YOU...

Unnati: I really hope andar sab normal ho...

Vijay: tumhe pray karna shru kar dena chahiye...ke uday subha tumhe one piece mein miley...

Inside the room...

Uday: (on the bed)...P...p..princess...???

Manyata: (bending over him)...hhmmm...???

Uday: k..k..kya kar rahi ho...princess...???

Manyata: (on the top of him)...kyun sweetheart...darr lag raha hai...

Uday: darrr...nahi toh...

He tries to move aside but she stops him from doing so...she starts playing with his shirt and her finger lingers all over his chest...she starts opening his buttons...

Uday: princess...control yaar...control...

Uday was getting nervous now...

Uday: dekho yeh galat hai...tum situation ka advantage le rahi ho...

Manyata kisses him on the neck and says...

Manyata: advantage nahi silly...mein toh bas wahi kar rahi hoon jo tum hamesha meray saath karney ki koshish mein rahte ho...

Uday: princess...ab hamein sach mein tumse darr lag raha hai...

Manyata: darro mat...main hoon na...babyy...(and she moves up and kisses him)

Manyata was very sleepy...she was going to pass out any minute...and she falls on the top of him and pass out...Uday calls out her name to make sure she was asleep...

Uday: princess...

Manyata: (no reply)

Uday: princess...(no reply)...lagta hai madam ka kaam hogaya...

Uday tumbles over so now Manyata was on the bed and Uday was on the top of her...she was asleep and so he decided to escape before she wakes up...he slowly gets up and right when he turns around to leave Manyata holds his hand...still asleep...

Uday: princess... tum soyi nahi...(he checks but she was dead asleep...)

He sits next to her and adores her while she was sleeping...

Uday: (to Manyata who was asleep)...Sorryyy...princess...aaj kuch ziyada ho gaya na...par kya karein tum jealous hoti hui bohat cute lagti ho...(He smiles)

Uday: (still talking to sleeping Manyata)...waisey aaj toh tumne hamein sach mein darra diya...tumhara yeh roop hum ne pehle kabhi nahi dekha...tum hamesha hamein surprise karti rahti ho...you are such a mystery...par hum aik din iss mystery ko zaroor solve kar lein gey...(he smiles and kisses her on the forehead)

Uday gets up to leave and before leaving turns around looks at manyata and says...

Uday: kal aapke liye...aik surprise hai...(he smiles and leaves)

TO BE CONTINUED...

So this was part 13...I really hoped that you guys liked it...please do comment...also if anyone wants the PM send me buddy request...Thank you for reading ...Thanks again...

Love,

Alissa😊

Itz awesome ,fantabls,pleeej sweatheart cont soon :):):)

Loved it Alissa 😃
It was too good.
I am loving VB and Unnati in this FF. Hilarious.
Bedroom scene of Uday and Manyata was funny too. Lol.
Would be waiting for the next update!

very nice...it was sooo funny...😆i loved all the scene all of them...continue soon dear...i will wait for ur awesome awesome awesome update...loved it...👍🏼

Awesome update.waiting for more.pliz cont soon.

very nice story :)please continue soon