You Are My Miracle (FF) pt 21 upd (Akash returns) - Page 2

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thanks everyone...i will continue very soon😊
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Hey guys this is part 2...it has an evil twist to it...I really hope you guys like it...and do leave your comments, I love reading them :)

part 2 (with an evil twist)😉

Akash: monia tumhe kya hogaya hai...tum to mujhse bohat pyaar karti thi aur kitne promises bhi kiye the...kya hua un sab ka

Manyata: akash tum se pyaar monia ne kiya tha aur woh saarey waadey bhi monia ne kiye the...par manyata to hamesha se yuvraj udaybeer singh ki thi...ab yahan koi monia nahi... hai to sirf manyata jo sirf aur sirf uday ki hai...sirf uday ki...

Akash: monia tum meray saath aisa nahi kar sakti maine tum se itni mohabbat ki aur tum ne mujhe dhoka diya woh bhi iss udaybeer ke liye...tumhe zara bhi sharm nahi aayi...

Manyata: akash hum ne tumhein koi dhoka nahi diya...dhoka to tum ne humare saath kiya tha...bina kuch kahe hi hum se dur chale gaye...aur aaj achanak wapis aakar hum se yeh keh rahe ho ke tum ne yeh sab kuch humare liye kiya...

Akash gets really mad and loses his control he comes closer to manyata and holds her really tight...

Askash: MONIAAA... tum mere aisa nahi kar sakti...tum to iss Udaybeer se nafrat karti thi na...???

Uday: askashh leave her...leave her or I will...

Manyata: Akashh... You are hurting me...mujhe dard ho raha hai...

Uday pushes Akash away from Manyata, punches him in the face...and warns him to stay away from her...

Akash: theek hai Monia...par meri aik baat yaad rakhna...AGAR TUM MERI NAHI HO SAKI TO MAIN TUMHE KISI AUR KI BHI NAHI HONE DOONGA...(with an evil and threatening look)

Manyata: akash you are sick...hum soch bhi nahi sakte the ke tum itna neeche gir sakte ho...

Askash: UDAYBEER...main tumhe itni asani se apna pyaar nahi cheeney doonga...MONIA MERI HAI AUR MERI HI RAHEGI...

Manyata: askash yahan se chale jao nahi to hum bhool jayengey ke humarey beech kabhi kuch tha...

Uday: security...isse yahan se bahar phenk do...aur yeh aadmi phir kabhi mahal ke ass paas bhi na nazar aaye...

Security guards throw out akash...but on his way...he kept on saying..."main wapas aaonga"..."monia sirf meri hai"..."monia kisi aur ki nahi ho sakti...kabhi nahi"...(Akash leaves leaving Uday and Manyata alone)

Uday: princess tum theek ho...???

(manyata does not reply...she was lost in her thoughts and looked very scared...)

Uday: Princesss...Manyataaa...???

Manyata: uss ne aisa kyun kaha...haan...akash ne aisa kyun kaha...???

Uday: kuch nahi princess akash ki batoon ko seriously mat lo...hum hain na...ab hum kuch galat hone nahi deingey...???

Manyata: nahi Uday...tum ne suna uss ne kya kaha...agar main uss ki nahi hui to woh mujhe kisi aur ki bhi hone nahi dega...

Uday: come on princess...uss ne gusse gusse main keh diya hoga...aur waise bhi ab hum kisi ko bhi hamarey beech nahi aane deingey... (He caresses her cheek and tries to lighten up her mood)...wifey ab humein adar chalna chahiye...nahi to sab ko lageyga ki rajkumari ji ne apna irada badal diya (flirty smile)

Manyata: achaaa halkaton ke ustaad...aur agar hum ne such me apna irada badal diya...toh...???(With a smile)

Uday pulls Manyata closer and wraps his arms around her waist and whispers in her ears...

Uday: toh yeh ke...rajwadon ki to aadat hai...ghode pe aa kar apni man pasand dulhan utha kar lejane ki... (And he kisses her on her ear which gives her chills)

Manyata: okay fine hamare veday...hum apna irada nahi badlein gey...ab chalien waisay bhi abhi tak hum ne aapko ring nahi pehnayi hai...

Both Uday and Manyata walk inside...everyone looks relived at seeing them together...they complete the ceremony by manyata puting the ring in Uday's finger...both Uday and Manyata take blessings of elders...after the party all the guest take their leave...before leaving Uday tells Manyata not to worry and that he will call her soon...

(In vijay's room both vijay and jay are discussing about why Akash showed up today)

Vijay: Jay bhai...did you notice chawl ke hero ke dressing sense mein improvement...

Jay: haan Vijay bhai...aaj to Majnu bade style main aaya tha...pathar khane...aapko nahi laga...???...and I wonder garden mein kya baatein hui hongi...???

Vijay: jo bhi ho Jay bhai...but i must say...I'm impressed with Majnu...so much improvement in three months...yeh toh hamari jungle queen se bhi zayada fast nikala...

Jay: you are right Vijay bhai...par hamain iss "return of Majnu" mission ke barey mein pata to karna hi padega...

vijay: I tell you...

(Komal was passing by Vijay's room and heard the conversation between Jay and Vijay...she decided to go in...)

komal: Jay, Vijay...hamein aap dono se yeh umeed nahi thi...Manyata aap ki behen hain...aap un ke saath aisa kaise kar sakte hain...

Vijay: Komal mami hum to bas...

Komal: hum aap dono se koi safai nahi sunnaa chahte...manyata ki life mein itne saloon ke baad khushiyaan aayi hain aur hum nahi chahte ke ab aap dono ki waja se unhein phir kisi mushkil ka samna karna pade...

Jay: relax mom...hum manyata jiji ke saath kuch aisa waisa nahi kar rahe...okayyy...

Komal: humari baat abhi khtam nahi hui hai Jay...aap dono manyata ke samne askash ka topic nahi nikalein gey...am I clear on that...???

Jay: whatever... (And leaves the room)

Vijay: ji Komal mami...hum yaad rakhein gey... (And Komal leaves the room)

(Scene shifts to Akash's newly bought mansion)...it was almost midninght...the whole house was dark with candles lit all around the house. The walls in house were covered with pictures of Manyata...huge portraits all around the house...Akash was standing in front one of the largest portrait of Manyata in which she was wearing a white dress, holding a teddy bear in her hand and had a cute smile on her face...Akash was talking to the portrait on the wall...

Akash: Moniaa...tum janti nahi ho main tum se kitna pyaar karta hoon...MEIN TUMHARE LIYE KISI BHI HAD TAK JASAKTA HOON...monia tum bhi na bohat mazak karti ho...tumhe kya laga tum mujhse rishta toddo gi aur mein maan loonga...yeh tumhari bhool hai...tum mera janoon ho...meri pagalpan ho...meri zindagi ho...aur mujhe meri zindagi se zayada pyaara aur kuch nahi hai...

Akash touches the Manyata's portrait and run his hand all over her face...

Akash: janti ho Monia...main ne yeh ghar tumhare liye banwaya hai...iske har kone main sirf tumhari hi khushboo hai...sirf tumhari...ab meray paas woh sab kuch hai jo uss Udaybeer ke paas hai...phir kyun ???...KYUNNN???...KYUNNN ajj bhi tum uss ke saath ho aur meray saath nahi...???

Akash: par koi baat nahi...lot kar to tumhe meray hi paas aana haiii...aaj mein tum se ek vaada karta hoon...ke chahe jo ho jaye...TUM HAMESHA MERI HI RAHOGI MONIA...AUR TUMHE KISI AUR KA TOH MAIN HOHE NAHI DOONGA...chahe uss ke liye mujhe kisi bhi hud tak jaana pade (he kisses manyata's picture)...tumhe apne Akash se milne toh aana hi padega...bohat jald hamari aik baar phir molakaat hogi...BOHAT JALD (very soon)...(evil smile)...

The next morning, Manyata wakes up...she couldn't sleep properly the night before due to the whole return of Akash drama...she was still thinking about what Akash had said the last night...she was not having a good feeling at all about whatever happened...She knew there was something fishy, Akash was not the same...he had changed a lot...she knew that he was the man of his word, he always did what he promised which made her even more uncomfortable...his words kept on playing over and over in her mind...her sixth sense was telling her that something bad was going to happen but what...???...she was confused...while she was deeply in thought she heard a knock on the door...

Manyata: come in...

Servant: good morning...rajkumari saab...aapki coffee...aur yeh letter bhi...

Manyata: good morning...coffee udhar table par rakh dijiye...aur letter kis ka letter...????

Servant: gustakhi maaf rajkumari saab...hamein iss letter ke baray mein kuch nahi pata...sirf itna pata hai ke yeh aap ke liye hai... (The servant hands over the letter to Manyata and leaves)

Manyata opens the letter...and starts reading...

Today...at 5:30, Halley's hill (made up name) ...koi besabri se tumhara intezaar

kar raha hai...theek 5:30...der mat karna

tumhare sapno ka rajkumar.

Manyata: yeh Uday ko kya hogaya...day by day kitna filmy hota ja raha hai...I TELL YOU...aur hum day by day Vijay bhai bante ja rahe hain...I TELL YOU... (She smiles)

Manyata (to herself): chalo bhai ab rajkumar ji ne bulaya hai to jana to padega...Uday bhi na humse kya kya kawata hai...

She gets off the bed and places the letter on her dressing table...she starts getting ready for the day...she decides what she is going to wear for her date in the evening she picks up a blue anarkali...the day passes by very quickly...soon it was 4:30 so she decided to leave because the rendezvous place was almost about 45 minutes away and with traffic it would take about an hour to get there...she gets ready and leaves her room...while walking outside the palace Brijraj catches her...and asks her where she was off to...

Brijraj: Manyata beta...aap kahin bahar jaa rahi hain...???

Manyata: jee baba...woh actually...???

Brijraj: actually kya sweetheart...???

Manyata thinks that her father knows very well who she is going to meet but is just trying to play with her...Manyata starts to blush at her father's questions...

Brijraj: awww...aap blush karti hui kitni cute lagti hain beta...aur hum jante hain aap kis se milne ja rahi hain...aap Uday ko ziyada pareshaan mat kijiye ka (Brijraj smiles)...

Manyata: baba ab main chaloon..???

Brijraj: yes of coarse dear...Uday must be expecting you...have fun and drive safely...

Manyata: byeee baba... (She leaves the palace and gets into her car)

It takes her exactly 55 minutes to reach there...where she arrives at the place it was 5:27...she looks around and sees no one there...and she talks to herself...

Manyata (to herself): Uday aaj to tumhari kher nahi...mujhe bula kar khod hi late...this is unacceptable...

While talking to herself she hears footsteps...so she turns around and...

Manyata: Uday ke bache aaj toh main tumhein...

When she turns around she realizes it was not the person she was expecting to see...instead IT WAS...

Manyata: TUM...????...

TO BE CONTINUED...

Phew!...that was a long part...I hope you guys liked it...please leave your comments I love reading them... suggestions are more than welcome...and thank you guys for reading it...thank you once again 😊

Love,

Alissa 😊

PS: sorry i kinda drove Akash crazzyy...please don't be mad at me 😕

Edited by alissa345 - 13 years ago
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AWESOMEEE JUST GREAT ! 😃😃😃😃😃 PLS CONTINUE SOON 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: luvuday

AWESOMEEE JUST GREAT ! 😃😃😃😃😃 PLS CONTINUE SOON 😊

thank you 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Gr8 update yaar!!:) N thanks sooo much for the pm!! Plz do continue soon!:)
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Originally posted by: AKlover101

Gr8 update yaar!!:) N thanks sooo much for the pm!! Plz do continue soon!:)

anytime and thanks for reading 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pinkfroth

great story!!!!😛

love th way it's going!!
waiting fr more!!
pls update soon n pm me!!

like that a rich akash comes bak n confronts monia n now lets see what she says!!! so what route wil u take...rich akash but still a nice guy or some villainous streak wil emerge!!😳

thanks for reading...and yess Akash is the bad guy now 😃

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Posted: 13 years ago
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very nice ...i like it keep writting
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loved it
update soon
thanks for the pm 😊

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