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Posted: 13 years ago
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😳AMAZINGGG OS
LOOVED THE FIRST TWO PART
your story is ssso intersting
PLEASEEE PM ME
REALLY WANT TO KNOW WHEN you update!!1😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Lovely update!
it was really cute!!
uh oh manveer fight?! hopefully they patch up quickly!
update soon! and do pm me when u do :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Luved it,pls update soon,so excited for nxt part
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Posted: 13 years ago
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good update akiii..really well written..continue soon..😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey akki now read both parts both are awesome really i loved them alot i loved udayveer calling him manaa n the kiss was super hot please update soon n pm me whenever u update:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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GOSH...that ws beautiful...MANVEER😍😍continue soon!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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oxm work mama u r doin gr8 pls pls continue soon as i really wanna hear whats happening next pls pls pm me the next part
Posted: 13 years ago
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hey pls update asap im really liking ur ss
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Finally ...next part up

Part-3

Maharaja Giriraj was walking back and forth in his room in one of his 7 star hotels of Mumbai …He didn't accompany his son in the ritual which was going to happen in Devgarh due to the business commitments….however there was no denying from the fact that he dreaded sending Udayveer alone….there were no less enemies out there in Rajasthan…..Uday being one of the most influential people and the emerging face of the Rajasthan politics had carved out a special place in the hearts of people of Rajasthan…also his decision to marry the long lost princess even after she being found in some slum of Mumbai spoke loud of this man's character and the promises he kept. Also Maanyata's increasing popularity of being the people's princess and the fairytale love story of the prince and the lost princess made people in awe of them…The increasing tourism business was a proof of this…. Certainly Udayveer had an upper hand in the upcoming Rajasthan elections……. If and only if everything went according to the plan…….but the recent impulsive behavior of Udayveer that Giriraj witnessed a couple of times when he was in Mumbai and his increasing interest in Maanyata rather than in the POWER GAME made Giriraj uneasy …though he was sure that his son wont do anything as foolish as telling Maanyata the truth …but still so many things were at stake …..he remembered what Maharani sahib told him the last time they met…….

" Giriraj …..This alliance will change the destiny of the two kingdoms forever…… I hope Udayveer realizes the implications of thinking from the heart"

" Don't stress so much on this Maa Sahib…Uday is a mature man and he knows how to handle situations …." ….Brijraj cut her in between…..

" Maharani Sahib don't worry …I will take care of this …I will talk to Uday personally about this matter ….Its been after 50 years that there are chances of us winning with majority votes in Rajasthan…He wont ruin this for us ……We are going to win elections this time ……and this high publicized wedding wud help to increase the vote banks further!!!!"

" I hope everything happens as per the plans …..Maanyata is not mature enough to handle this thing now …once elections turn in our favour, I myself wont hide anything from her…but till then we have to take care that she knows nothing"……said Dadi sahib while in deep thoughts …..

Lately she had observed Udayveer more vulnerable than ever and even unable to keep his emotions in check ……well true Love does things to you……as much as she loved the idea of Uday truly loving her granddaughter …….and Maanyata being lucky to get to be the heiress as well as an object of immense love n passion for her future husband…which happened rarely in this world of SIYASAT where women are considered staircases for getting powerful …she equally dreaded the fact that Uday might give it up all for the LOVE that has brewed between them in this time span …….

Yes it was very important that Maanyata does not get any clue of the conspiracies which followed after her decision to become a full fledged princess …… but with Uday breaking emotionally every single passing day ….Giriraj had begun to get nightmares….. after much thinking …he thought that going to Devgarh to attend the ceremony wud be a better idea rather than sitting in Mumbai for business deals…..that way he wud at least have a conversation with Uday and the Devgarh Royal family will be pleased to see him in attendance even during such hectic schedules.

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Devgarh, Rajasthan

Dadi Sahib always knew that Uday was a ruler in the making ……. A born leader with a mind of his own & a passion for being POWERFUL……But what if the Love comes in between the makings of a powerful man ……what if this love makes him weak……she always thought that it was Maanyata who was put through the test in the last 3 months… But now Everything was at stake ……right from her promise that she did to the king of Jaigarh 16years ago, to their position as a Royalty and not to forget the upcoming Rajasthan elections….At the same time she had to put up with the uncertainty of Maanyta's loyalty to Devgarh….she was still not sure what wud be her reaction once she gets to see the bigger picture……which was uglier enough to shake the very roots of the relationship Maanaa shared with her new found family….the world built on the foundation of lies was just too superficial to even sustain one BLOW

BUT within this never ending dark tunnel of lies and shallow relationships driven by motives…….existed a truth…….the truth that HE WAS BURNING…….every moment HE WAS BURNING IN LOVE……Hence THE SHINING LIGHT had to follow no matter what….. to light up this dark tunnel forever with its rays…….Even THE SUN has to burn to light up the world…… irrespective of everything …Uday has to be the WINNER he always was……

Yes Uday did turn the tables in her favour by making Maanaa his and letting her realize the true calling of her life ….. but unknowingly she put him thru the inevitable test of times…..a far intensive TEST that wud even shake the UNBREAKABLES. …

Udayveer was sitting by the window …….all around …..till his eyes took him ..there was only desert ……very very far away it seemed that there was a river shining like it has stars in it ….but possibly it was the MIRAGE…..something non-existent but still making one hopeful…..whatever was between him n Maanaa …he cant even call it Love….not from her side at least …because she was always seeing of him what he painted with lies n deciet….. he cudnt help but think that even in today's world such nave and innocent people exist ……Why can't he be as simple as her…..why jus he cant help but think of other person's motives when somebody seems even nice to him…why cant he have dat in-ur-face attitude like she has…why he always have to think of the implications before speaking his mind…why he jus cant break free all the chains he is bound to in the names of responsibilities, ethics, society, expectations and all…why he jus cant go and bare his heart to her ……why cant he reveal his actual self …this was so suffocating ….it was like a life without being able to breathe……she loves the image that is nowhere him …yes he dreaded the fact that he might lose her forever by showing her the light of the day …but living with her all his life acting like a stranger was nowhere a better deal ….he remembered the promise he made to her just sometime ago that he wud always be WORTHY enough for her …was it a promise jus for the sake of making a promise or were some sentiments attached when he spoke these words……he never thought that words like helplessness, reverie, misery…worthlessness….wud ever be describing his mental state….

This was the time to take a decision …..THE FINAL ONE ……for the love of THE QUEEN…..she had every right to know what games were being played to her emotions throughout …..she had all the rights to PUNISH him for his deeds ….He has to tell her everything no matter what happens….he has already felt so low in his own eyes…..ENOUGH IS ENOUGH

Adamant Udayveer walked straight inside the Queen's chamber…where she stood still the traditional Lehenga –Choli…holding the ring in her hand…she didn't look elated …..was she crying …..

" Maanaa!!!!"

She looked up …she was indeed crying …but why was it like there was no trace of emotion on her face when he called her maanaa……why was she looking at him so strangely…..Udayveer felt as if his throat parched n his heart stopped to beat…her blood shot eyes looked so COLD …..was this HATRED……before he could comprehend anything and speak a word all he heard was…………

" Was this all a lie …a political game ….TELL ME !!!!!"….she pointed at the ring while saying so….she meant business

First he was shocked …..how did she get to know the truth …who told her ….but as the realizations sink in……his face lost its color….while his mouth opened to first time admit to his crime……

"Yes!!!!!"….he replied while his face sunk

She threw the ring on the floor ….the ring that was someday adorned by his mother …..but this was going to happen ..now or some other day …..it just had to happen…At least he was free from those lies

Maanyata sat on the floor crying ……somehow she got over her first heartbreak …but what now?????

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Precap:

More secrets and some new characters ……..a dangerous quest for power sometimes makes pple so blind that they forget to recognize their own blood……Is there any bigger conspiracy that even Uday is unaware of ….where does this leave Uday …..will he be able to tide through the times……who are the enemies of Udayveer in Rajasthan …..what are they upto?????

njoy this ride…so u see it wasn't Uday who spilled the beans……so how she got to noe …keep tuning in to the Sand princess…do comment how u found this part ….this part is very relevant frm the point of the story forward …so jus read between the lines …n sorry ….no ROMANCE of Maanveer in this part

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Posted: 13 years ago
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it was beautiful...finally the manyata came to know the TRUTH...poor Uday😭

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