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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey girls thanks for reading, will try to send out pms this time, this is kinda a boring update, hope you tell me what you think

Part Eight

" Manyata this happened before am I correct?," Udayver asked.

Everyone looked at him shocked.

"Kab hua?," Komal inquired.

"Has Manyata been taking too much stress ? I was hoping London would help you both," Dadisa quipped.

"Aisi baat nahin hai Dadisa. Unnati said to me that Manyata admitted having a fainting spell before today," Udayveer explained.

"Sorry Udayveer. I didn' t want you to worry," she stated.

" You could have gotten hurt Manyata. You cannot go anywhere alone until these spells stop or are cured," he declared.

Everyone else agreed with him unsion.

" I'll order some blood tests to confirm there isn't any other concerns. However according to the hospital records I doubt anything else is wrong." Doctor Saab assured them.

Good-byes were exchanged.

Dadisa turned to everyone and said," We will let Manyata rest for some time,"

Udayveer turned to Dadisa.

"With your permission I would like to stay back with Manyata," he stated.

"Of course Uday beta. Aap yeh aap ki amant hain," Dadisa replied.

Manyata turned thoughtful. A similar dialogue had happened in the past. She was sure of it.

Komal came to Udayveer and patted his cheek warmly. He bent down to take her blessings.

When she had overheard his and Dadisa's plan the year before she had been upset with them. But today she realized more than ever that Udayveer had always been the right choice for Manyata.

Everyone started to leave the room.

"Manyata I will check on you later. Let me know if you are still up for tomorrow," Unnati stated.

Manyata nodded.

" I am feeling a bit better. I will see you later Unnati."

After Unnati left , she was alone with Udayveer.

"Mujhe aur yaad agaya hai," she declared.

He was pacing around. He stopped to look at her.

"I know you proposed to me and I also know the name of the man we saw at the airport today," she stated.

Udayveer's smile vanished.

"Uska naam Akash hai. It doesn't matter I am sure. I just know that he was part of the past. We should look forward after all. You are my husband and that is one of the true facts I know right now,"Manyata declared.

Udayveer softened and he sat down and held her hand.

"Manyata hum aap se bauth pyaar karte hain. Don't mind me being a bit upset. Also you will not force yourself to remember everything," he stated.

Manyata nodded. He was close enough that she could feel his warm breath.

She grabbed his collar and pulled him closer. He was caught unware and almost crushed her with his weight. She wrapped her arms around him.

He leaned in and kissed her forehead.

Manyata awakened late the next morning. She quickly got dressed and then called Unnati.

"Yes lunch time would be perfect. Thanks yaar. I just want to get back into a routine. Nahin Udayveer yahan nahin hai. I'll ask Dadisa if he left any message. Hopefully we will be back before he is," Manyata quipped.

She hung up the phone.

She wore a yellow and white salwaar kameez. She had found it in the closet here. Next she went down to inform her mother and Dadisa that she was going out with Unnati.

" Theek hain lekin Udayveer se pehle laut aana. You both are so stubborn. He will get upset if you are out too long," Komal stated.

" Udayveer is out for work. Take your time but hurry up my dear, if you get what I mean," Dadisa joked.

" Theek hai Dadisa. We will be back soon," Manyata declared.

She met Unnati outside and the girls went off to meet Dr. Sonia.

The three girls went out to eat. Each ordered something that was usually not served in the royal households.

They shared pani puri and chatted about the upcoming events.

"Sonia when did we meet exactly?,"Manyata inquired.

"Oh we met shortly after your wedding. You and Udayveer had just come back from your honeymoon in London," Sonia stated.

Unnati started to laugh.

Manyata looked at Unnati puzzled.

"Kya hua Unnati. What is so funny?," she inquired.

" You and Dada had a fight on the way back from that trip. You both weren't ready to give in. You got involved with a project and Sonia and me. Dada got busy with his work. He used to text me to see how far we were. I couldn't tell you. Then you saw one of his messages and you texted him to shut up," Unnati said.

Manyata smiled.

" Did he know it was me?"

" I guess he did. He refused to talk to you directly for a day," Unnati said.

The girls giggled.

"Men can be strange sometimes," Sonia quipped.

"Yes Udayveer can be more stubborn than me. One time I was dehydrated from staying in the sun all day. He would not rest until I agreed to listen to his instructions," Manyata said.

Unnati looked at her surprised.

"Manyata let us discuss the schedule with Sonia. She needs to get back to work and we need to reach home before Dada," Unnati insisted.

Manyata nodded.

A waiter came and left something for Manyata.

She opened the letter. She was alarmed at the contents. She crumbled it. Sonia indicated them to bring the bill. Manyata slammed down some money and ran outside. The other two girls called after her.

She was mad to even listen.

Akash was standing there waiting for her.

She threw the note in his face.

"What is the meaning of this?," she yelled.

" Udayveer tumare liye theek nahin hai. You should leave him. So what if you cannot not be mine. He doesn't deserve you either," he declared.

"Has a mad dog bit me that I will listen to you? Udayveer mera pati hai. Aur mera naam Manyata hai. This is the last warning Mr. Akash!," she yelled.

Unnati and Sonia gave him stern looks and led Manyata away from there.

"Manyata you need to relax," Sonia told her.

"Manyata your health is not that good. We'll go to the police later. Don't take stress now," Unnati said.

" I don't know why Unnati. I think this man is responsible for a lot more than being a psycho," Manyata stammered.

Edited by adventure_gurl - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update!! but the suspence is definitely unsettling 😆
update soon :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
It's not so boring Sonali! 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome..
Loveed it
Manayata in your FF is so much more composed..
AMAZING
pleasee contnue soon
If possible PM me too😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
really awesome sorry for late reply
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ifuobey

really awesome sorry for late reply


take your time dear! thanks for reading!😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
very nice update...good...update soon..😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Arey yaar interesting when u will send next update. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
whenever time permits will write more

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