The Jainandini Chronicles| NEW UPDATE| PART 9| PG. 45 - Page 15

Originally posted by: Anhdara13

I can't play the song :( what title/singer? I shall go search it.

and this update is fabulous. I love how Yash matches her temper, and yet, can bring them both back down, without demanding answers Jay will be unwilling to give. This is just, the balance between the two is wonderful. And I am really hoping someone at the palace notices just how broken up Jay is, and helps her. She needs someone at home to be there for her too, to be in her corner as much as Yash will end up being.

Originally posted by: mitzification

I usualy read ur updates many times and thus comment many times ... but as u didnt answer me last time ... i guess ill keep updating this comment :)

Ooh its Chole Bhature ... you dont have to try too much with Yash's Hindi ... it's same as yours heheheh

I just love it how Yash always diffuses the situation ... we have a very heated conversation and with one word he just colls down himself and also get J to behave ... cool !

Can't wait to see Yash's ten questions to J

Please I dislike Manyat almost as much as J does ... so please I dont want Manyata and Yash meeting ... Uv and Yash meeting ... YES I'd like that !

Originally posted by: -Cupcake-

I read the last 2 parts together and I must say, they were amazing...I'm really liking J and Yash more than Manveer...and I simply adore the fact that even in such a short span of time Yash understands J so well and actually cares for her...something her own family couldn't do in years...the two things that really broke my heart were J's POV in part 3 after DS scolds her for going biking and then when she leaves for her room after she is told about Aryan...she was so bloody right...Manyata can do anything to embarrass the family and yet not only does she get away with it but she's also given the best of everything...heights of partiality. We need to realize that the reason it seems so partial, is because it is literally from J's perspective: meaning we get her feelings, thoughts AND bias in there as well- hence why we empathiyze more with JN in those instances (which is the point, so I guess I'm doing my job right😆)

And as much as I love DS, her behavior towards J irritates me to no ends...sometimes I feel like screaming into their faces, how the hell on earth can they be so blind??? Rest of the family I can understand...they are good for nothing creatures but DS??? She's such a huge disappointment when it comes to J...I would so love to see Yash stand up for J and make her family realize how badly they've wronged her because I'm pretty sure if left on their own, the Royals are never going to realize their faults. Looking forward to the next update😳

PS: I think Yash already knows that J is a princess...I might be wrong but I just get this feeling..don't know why though😕. I am going to make this abundantly clear: Yash does NOT know she is a princess, not at all actually.

EDIT: really sorry for such long reply..didn't intend to make it so long..I just kept on typing and after posting I realized how long it actually was😳 Gah! No worries, after typing my fingers off with long updates, I LOVE long replies! And then I love reading them, and replying back!🤗

Originally posted by: aysha1989

So true... I'm very disappointed with the way her character is being led... Oh we should do that, a Yash in DEK will be great.. 😍 the CV's have failed to understand the capacity JN's character holds...

And about the fourth part... I loved it... trust me when Yash asked J out for a dinner, I was so worried about her dress and knowing each other and all that.. I mean I dont want her to lie to him... I just dont have any patience for the next part... continue soon 😳

Originally posted by: ayushiish

Oh reeha what a lovely update! I am totally loving yash i mean what an intuitive person he is, he knows what got her so mad and that line about him getting to know her and not manyata, i mean THAT IS IT! that is what she NEEDS, someone to care about her and not M, who thinks about her feelings and doesn't make her feel like the third wheel. Oh I am waiting to see how their date ends, and reply to your post earlier, your not the only one who is enjoying JNC more than UVC. Through JNC, we are getting to see a sside of jainandini that cv's refuse to show us on the show and i really feel that people need to empathise and understand J more and yeah she can be an absolute bitch at time but then again, its the circumstance that made her that way.

Btw can you try and please do a scene where J actually confides in M, i think that'll be a great way for them to bond. (only if it goes with your story's context) BUT brilliant work until now! i am eagerly waiting for the 5th part. x

Originally posted by: reeha...k

It's "save me" by Niki Manaj. PLEASE tell me if you think it works😃.
As for the palace back up: it will happen; and in the most unlikely (at least in Jay's eyes) source. But for now, JN just needs to figure herself out first. And ofcourse, figure Yash out too

Originally posted by: reeha...k

My Replies in Pink😊

We need to realize that the reason it seems so partial, is because it is literally from J's perspective: meaning we get her feelings, thoughts AND bias in there as well- hence why we empathiyze more with JN in those instances (which is the point, so I guess I'm doing my job right😆) Guess u're right...and you are doing a fab job...as of now I'm enjoying the FFs more than the show...I really hope the CVs take some ideas from the forum, members here do a much better job of understanding the characters and writing stories that follow the actual concept😕

I am going to make this abundantly clear: Yash does NOT know she is a princess, not at all actually.Okayy, thanks for clearing that out.

Gah! No worries, after typing my fingers off with long updates, I LOVE long replies! And then I love reading them, and replying back!🤗 Alright..that makes me feel a lot better, I felt guilty about posting such a long reply😆😳🤗

Originally posted by: reeha...k

Thank you! to answer your question Neha, there is most deinatley a chance of M and JN Bonding...just not right now. For now my focus is to bring JN back to earth: she needs to be a little more humble- and Yash can teach her that; until she can do that, JN and M can't bond, because M will always see JN as a snob.