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Posted: 13 years ago
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hi niha😊
welcome dear🤗
very good concept please continue soon
i am sending you buddy request please add me in ur pm list
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: magicalworld

hi niha😊

welcome dear🤗
very good concept please continue soon
i am sending you buddy request please add me in ur pm list


Hi magicalworld,

Thank you for your welcome, I have accepted your buddy request and I've also added you to the pm list. I hope you will like reading the story when theres more out. Keep on the lookout👍🏼

Niha..x

Originally posted by: salekh1

😛It seems great
Looking forward to reading this

Please start soon
Please PM me😃



Hi salekh,

Its great to hear that your looking forward to read this, and I'll add you to the PM list.

Niha...x
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Posted: 13 years ago
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So here's what you've been waiting for. The prologue to the story, hope you guys like it.

Prologue


BANG!

Tears fell down Monia's cheek. "NOOO!" she whispered. Another scream joined in. Blood flew out everywhere. The scream started to fade into a whimper. The body fell to the floor, with her eyes widened so big. Her long brown hair swayed in the air as she fell, and her skin went really pale. "M-M- Monia, c-come over here" whispered Monia's mother.

Monia rushed towards her mother, and held her hand gently. "Yes mother" she murmured, trying to not show the pain she is feeling.

"I l-love you" her mother replied, and her voice faded. A tear ran down her cheeks as she closed her eyes. Monia felt her mother's hand start to flop.

She carefully laid her mother's hand on the blood stained carpet. "I love you too!" she cried, wiping away each tear that ran down her cheeks with her cardigan sleeve.

"Why did you do this father? What did she ever do to you? Why don't you understand anything? You don't even act like a father, you're a stranger to me!" she shouted towards her father.

"Look Monia, I did it for your good. I- I didn't'" her father started. Coughing the sentence off, making Monia angry.

"You didn't what father? How is this good for me? Has losing your mother ever been good to anyone? You make me really embarrassed. Have you ever heard anyone kill their own wife?" Her father shook his head. "I thought so," she continued, "I hate you, live on your own, you will never see me ever again!"

"Monia, you can't do this to me," replied her father, ruffling his dark brown messy hair. Her father was very tall, 6ft 3, and there was blood dripping from his hand. "Where will you even go?"

"Yes Sanjib Gandhi, I can do this to you, what you did to my mother was beyond thinkable. On the other hand, why would you even think of my safety? I don't get why you are even asking me this. What relationship do we have left between each other?" Monia snapped.

"I am really sorry, I didn't mean to kill Sanjata, I got really angry" Sanjib answered. He walked towards Monia, and tried to hug her. However Monia backed away, and mouthed the words "No way!"



Please leave comments on how you like it and what you think might happen next. Keep on the lookout for more😛


Niha...x
Edited by -Niha- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Reserved ! :D xxx

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Niha!!!!! 🤗 I loved it! It was amazing! Full of suspense! Wonder what Monia will do! Cnt w8 till 1st chapter!

Love ya times infinity!

Nahi

xxx
Edited by -Nahi- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very good 👏 i like it pls. update soon😊 and my name is Rashi
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Posted: 13 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: -Nahi-

Reserved ! :D xxx


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Niha!!!!! 🤗 I loved it! It was amazing! Full of suspense! Wonder what Monia will do! Cnt w8 till 1st chapter!

Love ya times infinity!

Nahi

xxx


Thanks for the feedback. Love ya too x

Originally posted by: magicalworld

very good 👏 i like it pls. update soon😊 and my name is Rashi


Hi Rashi,

Glad that you liked it, and I'll try my best to update soon.

thanks

Niha..xx
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Posted: 13 years ago
#17
@krt09

Hoped you liked my work, and plz tell others about it. Thanks
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Posted: 13 years ago
#18
Nyc...work...a gr8 start i must say!! Kp wrtng...best of luck...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Amazing! That was so mean of Moniyas father! Wonder whats gonna happennn :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
#20
Wow Niha it's amazing am loving your suspenseful FF...looking forward for the story to unfold.
M's dad is 🤬 how can he do that😲 plzzz update soon and thxs for the pm🤗

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