My first OS True Love chap. 5 updated on pg 12 - Page 8

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: pri01

Wow it's awesome ...so UV planned his own wedding to make M realise her love for him and the 4 yrs separation was their love test amazing

Thxs for the pm and plzzz update soon and I hv a request ...I want lots of ManVeer romantic moments hope you will take my request into consideration😳
Have a nice wk-end TC🤗



thanks
i will definately write some romantic moments of MANVEER😊


have a nice weekend to you too🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: magicalworld



thanks
i will definately write some romantic moments of MANVEER😊


have a nice weekend to you too🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago
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I am a new reader here and I simply love it.Do PM me the next time you update.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: navyan07

I am a new reader here and I simply love it.Do PM me the next time you update.



hi and welcome
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i will pm you for sure😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: magicalworld


hi and welcome
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i will pm you for sure😊


Thnx, looking forward to your PM!!!!!!!!😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#76

Hi all sorry for taking too much time

here is CHAPTER 5 TRUE LOVE


Manyata said yes I know that was a test but you took a very bad test Uday

You don't know how I missed you day and night it was very difficult for me but you are very stubborn don't think to call me once manyata starts crying

Uday-Manyata please don't cry and it was difficult for me too do you think I was good there I missed you with my every breath

Uday come closer to her wipe her tears and kissed her forehead and said now stop crying and get ready I have a surprise for you.Manyata was excited and said Surprise, what is it

Uday said princess if I told you now so what is the meaning of Surprise

Manyata says ok and go to washroom to freshen up and get ready

Uday sat on the couch and lost in old days

It was the day of Uday's marriage he was sure that manyata will come and stop the marriage but something was there which increasing fear in Uday's heart

Uday was waiting for manyata and with every second passes he was becoming more disturbed,Jay told uday not worry as she is sure that manyata will come as she knows manyata loves him a lot and why are you getting worried our plan is very good and you love her by your heart and you will win in the end

Uday just said I hope so anyways please get ready fast J otherwise people will say that the bride and groom are taking too much time in getting ready

J said yes I will be ready just waiting for jiji she hadn't come here to help me in getting ready and I am sure she is unhappy with this marriage otherwise wo abhi yahan par hoti mere saath.Akhir mai unki behen hu aur ajj meri shadi hai

J words give some confidence to Uday and he said ok I am going out

On the other hand manyata was pacing in her room here and there she was having flashbacks of each and every moment she spend with Uday

And finally she decided something and go out of her room. she rush to the mandap but find that the marriage is completed and the bride and groom are taking blessings from Rajmata

Manyata shout No,it is not possible Uday why you do this why don't you just leave me like this why you just don't wait for me a while manyata breakdown and was crying her heart out she was screaming NO No it is not possible you get married I know j is my sister and sorry J I am creating tension in your marriage and yes I have to confess that I am not happy with this marriage and I realize that I love Uday only Uday I can't live without him

Manyata sat down on floor crying and just close her eyes suddenly she feels a hand on her shoulder

She open eyes and turn it was UDAY

He smiles to her and said-Princess how you think I will marry J when I love you and I can wait for you entire my life

Manyata was just looking at Uday she stands up and hug him tightly Uday hugged her back to Both of them have tears in the eyes and there family was having tears also

Suddenly j comes there and get them back to their conscious

J Jiji ab koi hamari bhi baat sunega ya phir aap dono apne mein hi mast hain

Manyata and uday saperated and see j,manyata said J if uday is here than who is that guy you married to

J said he is Vikram the prince of Somgarh DS fixes our marriage and he helps Me and Uday in this Plan

Manyata looked ate him now she can see his face he smiles and says Sorry to tease you jiji

Manyata said its ok

Manyata see Uday and said acha to ye tumhara plan that suddenly vijay bhai comes and said but idea was mine

DS comes there and tell what happened has happened but manyata it is good you have seen the reality and accepted Udayveer

Manyata-Sorry everyone I know you all have suffered al lot due to me but now everything is fine

Suddenly Akash comes forward and said yes everything is fine in your life moniya but what about me

I can't live without you I love you moniya

Manyata goes to Akash and say Akash I know I hurt you and I am really sorry for this but I realize that I don't love you I just liked you as a good human being and pyar to main hamesha se Uday se hi karti hut um to mera attraction ho Akash main tumse pyar nahi karti

Main maanti hu k tum mujhe chahte ho par sorry akash main nahi

Akash said Moniya

Manyata moniya nahi Akash main manyata hu aur jitna sach ye hai ki main Rajkumari manyata hoon utna sach ye bhi hai main sirf Uday se pyar karti hu

Akash said Ok than Rajkumari Manyata I am happy for you you cheated me but its Ok I loved you by my heart and love is not the name of taking it is the name of sacrifices and giving so Today I am going out of your life and I wish you will be happy in your life.

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And Akash leaves from there and manyata just watch him going quietly

Manyata turns and see her whole family was looking at her she said what happened to you all ?

Anyways I have decided something……………………

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Lovely update after a long time...plzzz soon update and with lots of Manveer scenes😉 am wondering what is it UV surprise for M.

Thxs for the pm🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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FABULOUS update!!!!!!!!!👏

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: navyan07

FABULOUS update!!!!!!!!!👏




Thanks navya😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: pri01

Lovely update after a long time...plzzz soon update and with lots of Manveer scenes😉 am wondering what is it UV surprise for M.

Thxs for the pm🤗


thanks
i am considering your request in next part😉😊

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