Being J : a Jaynandani OS

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey guys I am really intrigued by the character of Jaynandani ... in Dekha Ek Khwaab
she is rich spoilt bratish , selfish and with a title
she was taught that since childhood how to manipulate people : DS was her teacher (dsn't she always make J do things she wants done like she made J change her clothes in the first episode.
she is scheming ... another roayl trait.
And she is also a poor little rich girl because she has grown up in the shadow of her non exsistent hieress sister ... who is also inheriting UV along with the royal estate.
So I have written an OS J
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi this is an OS on J and also a bit about UV and Manyata , its about J and UV's mind games , The little attraction Uv feels for J , J's vunerability at Uv's insults and a little bit about M's feelings for UV '.

J was chilling out at a club with her friends , the dramas in her house the past few days had really left her frazed and she needed some time away from that palace. Unexpectedly she collided with Jagat , past few days she had been thinking that she needed to move on from Uday, he was paying more intrest to her 'gawarni sister' anyway and she had enough dignity to realise this , of course she would keep scheming'. that was wat royals did , she just would not get so obvious about it or so pathetic . Coming back to Jagat your enemie's enemy was always your friend ,maybe she could still use him to get back at Uv. "Hi jagat what a pleasant surprise to meet you ." she said having mentally calculated her move in a few seconds. Jagat had always like J she had been beautiful , arrogant but always warm towards him , he had met many girls but never a princess , at least she didn't fall all over him because of his wealth and still created a mystery around herself. She had openly accepted him when they were thinking of getting engaged but her father had decided otherwise. 'I do appologise for what happened b/w us Jagat , I really had no choice in the matter" . She had no choice in the matter ? , but he had thought she had always like Uv. The surpise must have shown on his face because she answered his unasked question next. " My engagement to UV was a business decision , princesses are never forced ,but are expected to make decision in favour of their estate '.you know'. Jagat always found this world of prince and princesses intriguing ' all him money yet he didn't have what she had the privilege of birth. This title was something that no amount of money in the world could buy for him. He again looked up at her and she was smiling a warm smile. 'maybe we can still be friends' 'friends ' of course everyone wanted to be friends with a princess and Jagat for all his riches was no different and so it was no surprise to her when he happily conceded.

Natwar singh , UV's OLD enemy had some property that had originally belonged to UV's family that he wanted to sell for money but he was not releasing this info in the open market , J came to know of this and decided to use her new friend Jagat . She was lunching with him when she received a call from L pretending to be some one with a good news . J with cleverness told Jagat about this royal heritage property to Jagat who wouldn't let such a deal slip from his hand , he wasn't India's leading hotelier without a reason . All said and done Natwars property was going to be sold to Jagat but what came as a surprise was when Jagat offerd her 40 % shares in the property' Life for J was now going better than expected.

UV as usual was in her Palace's drawing room when she came home and she thought this time was as good as any to tell UV and DS about the great offer she had just happily accepted.

DS acted like she would go ballistic and UV was seething with rage but she had already figured out how to cool them down , princesses were taught this skill even before they learnt to walk '" you once wanted me married to this guy DS and broke it off without eve asking me and how does it matter now that he has made such an offer to me and UV isn't it better that your family friend has access to 40 % shares'. better than it being in the hands of a stranger." It had seemed to cool them down their rage and she was enjoying the silent rage UV was suffering for the loss of his beloved ancestral property . '..a great insult to UV and he showed her how hurt he was because he caught hold of her as she was making her way out of the house ' You play some neat tricks J "

UV zero , J one ' of course he was angry, he wanted to burst at her but and the best way to make this score 2 to J was to move out without replying and she did just that.She had an appointment with Jagat as it is.

J had kept away from him since 2 months now and though he had been relieved in the beginning now he felt a little irritated ..what was cooking between her and Jagat , somehow he didn't like the brewing closeness between the two , his property was safe only as far as J liked him and favoured him , the day J turned on him his property would be gone. Also her withdrawn attention wasn't helping his ego one bit. He was suffering the full impact of J's withdrawn attention. He wanted to follow her but he remembered he was here to meet Manyata and see what new tantrum she was throwing now. Manyata's crude behaviour and tanrums were becoming more and more irritating now 'after marriage he wanted his wife to look after him and his estate and not take away his time from running his estates affairs in finding out what new trick she was upto .J on the other hand would make a great Maharani J would actually make a good wife ,what was royalty but to rub your superiority in the others face and J was an expert at that . She'd be an excellent trophy wife , when he went for a race he expected his wife to sit looking pretty in a summer dress rooting for his horse and not one demanding to ride the horse herself. He wanted to give time to his cars and his horses and was really getting tired of daily episodes of 'taming of the shrew' taking place in this rajmahal . Giving a tired sigh he walked into M's room.

He exchanged pleasantries with M and she made her usual sarcastic face. Anything he said , even if he praised her she would look at all his actions with suspicion , with J well there would be no suspicions ,she would know 'EXACTLY what he was upto . He smiled thinking about J.

Manyata had again caused havoc in the Palace she had kept the bathtub running and flooded her room , suddenly Uv was claustrophobic being in the same room with Manyata ' he needed to go out''

" You know what princess , I was wrong ' I thought I could change you ' but I was wrong ' you are not worthy of the time I waste on you." Saying this Uv left the room , the palace and was driving his car to get somewhere fast.

Mnayat who never took anything Uv said seriously , today his words penetrated her heart deep. UV who was the meanest of creatures , a good face with meticulous manners and an evil heart '.he dint find her Manyata worthy ?... she shouldn't take it to heart but somewhere it hurt'. And she was lost in deep thought '.. so deep that she let Akaash's phone ring for a long time ''' and didn't bother to answer it.

One drink down she looked at Jagat, she had consented to marry him at one point of time , he was not hot like Uday but take away Udays hot personality and he was a crook, a heartless guy and everyday with him would be a day full of barbed words and mind games , did she really want a guy who kept throwing hurtful words at her all the time ? , it would be so safe to be with Jagat and he would always treat her with respect , if she was with UV he would be the one throwing tantrums and with Jagat she could throw tantrums and even make Jagat appologise and add to that the fun of being a super rich guys wife. She would have the respect her title gave her and all the money in the world' it was all appealing but for the fact that the very idea of being with Jagat was so'.. how would she spend time with him , she would need to be a little drunk to pass the time she spent with him .. this though led her to downing another shot.

Jagat looked up to see the preety princess smiling at him , of course he still had a crush on her but he wouldn't make the first move this time " hey Jagat hum bahut drunk hain , to hum tum se jhooth nahi bolenge '." Jagat's senses went on high alert hearing this ' what would the inebriated princess reveal now that would make his day or possibly his life '.. " tum bahut aache ho , aur saath mein bahut bbboo'." and before he knew what was happening .. she fainted and was caught by Uv who it seemed had materialised out of thin air.

Uv was tucking J in her bed when J's eyes opened and she smiled her sarcastic at him , even in this state she was a sharp girl " It's an interesting game you are playing with us sister UV "

What are you saying J , I care about my friend ''. I was just keeping you safe.

You were just keeping your investment safe

Oh cmon J don't take my love for you wrong ..

UV love is an emotion not meant for us , we are driven by ego not love ,if we were married I would never allow myself to love you .. I won't be able to manage the pain you would cause me and believe me you wouldn't want me loving you .. you wouldn't know how to handle it.

Yes Love was an emotion not meant for the royal's , it did nothing but caused pain '' Royals life was about tricks to achieve what they wanted , title , glory , fame and recognition . The privilege of title and being different were achievents to strive for '.not love.

Edited by mitzification - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey Mitziii, Awesome OS.. Beautiful portrayal of J... Wonderful piece of writing.. I wish CV's take some ideas from such kinda OS and make J's char much interesting like this one.. Loved ur J.. Sharp, cunning still somewhat vulnerable.. A deadly combo.. Simply superb..
And UV's portrayal was to die for.. This character has so much potential.. I dont like the way his char is taking shape right now in DEK.. Besides he is getting very less screen space..That's aweful.. Would like to see more of him and Manyata.. Love the wasy u described tiny change in emotions of Manyata.. Very well written..
U caught UV and J's personality too well.. Awesome.. fab job..
Keep it up.. Overall fantastic read..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks Nammy for ur comments
I love the mind games J and UV play
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Posted: 13 years ago
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It was beautiful... Would love to read more of your writing...
Keep it up.. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks Ayesha ,
Hope more people appreciate this OS ... J is after all like all normal girls ... why hate her for wanting to be number one , or wanting UV ... isnt it hard to give up ur mom , ur crush and ur position for a thankless stranger ?
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow this is awesome...yay finally some j supporters damn to be honest i find jay and uday more interesting that manveer. j and uday are always playing games with each other lol...its interesting
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks Roxy ... yes I used to love DEK then it was so intresting
UV was a strong character then
J's character was not buthered
and Manyata was not made so irreversibly irritating.
Thanks for liking ! I like it too !
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Mitzi wow...I really like your writing style...it is always interesting to see a new perspective and people interested In the negative characters...like I said before cvs could have done a much better job with J's character...am glad you along with reeha and others shed some light on it...you shud write a full fledged ff on J like Reeha...and am pretty sure it will be awesome...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey!i think it is really amazing how you have portrayed uv and jai..they just remind me of the older/original uv and jai...i would really love it if you continued...😊

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