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@--ANGEL--

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

hey reeha...i usually love ur work...but i wish it could have been manveer then i would have loved it more...is there any chance of a sequel on it with uday and chikki teaming up to separate monash?...😆...

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

too good...really hilarious...😆

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@ScoopTroop

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Reehoo.. This was hilarious! My facial expressions changed from to 😲 to finally 😆 Awesome!!🤗

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sourmisery

@sourmisery

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

REEHA!! HAWWW!

But I had this thought in my head that it'd be on ChiKash! You beat me to it girl, I wanted to debut ChiKash formally on the forum. Grrr...! But no hard feelings. Really liked this piece, though I felt the consistency wasn't very smooth. The jumps from POVs wasn't that well defined. Idk, this is just what I thought. But overall, very nice concept with a little flawed execution. Now don't kill me on this. You always wanted constructive criticism, and that I am giving you! :P

*EDIT*
W T F!?!??!?!?!?!? SHE WAS CHIKI FROM THE START!?!?!? i thought that she was Manyata and Chiki was seeing their union and...my head is spinning.. Feels like some lightening bolt hit me right now...HAWW!! REEHA! WHAT THE HELL DID YOU JUST DO?!?!? OMG! This proves it, I will NEVER read any of your writing lightly and actually open my eyes and activate my brain to decipher just what the hell is going on! And I deliberately didn't remove my first (original) comment...to show you how absentmindedly I read the OS first them and went through it again to understand what it really WAS!!

THE SHOCK OF THE DAY FOR ME!!!

Edited by -Mais- - 13 years ago

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Nityah

@-StarlitFire-

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

OMG thats so hillarious...
i was shocked that it was Chikki at the end...because I thought it was Manyata...
i really enjoyed it...
and Chikki with open hairs...
i m not even able to imagine it...how can i...her headphones are imprinted in my mind so well that imagining her without that is nearly impossible...
but again its awesome piece of work by you...
keep rocking..

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JShukla

@JShukla

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

😍Cool Hope this happens in the show.

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Ziva01

@Ziva01

Achiever

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Hey Reeha seriously it's hillarious 🤣🤣 but worth reading hats off to your creativity dear👏👏

while reading before reaching the end I was like what the hell Manyata 😆

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Dikshita

@Dikshi92

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Awsome, fantastic and hilarious yaar.. 😆 🤣
It was only because of ur warning that i read it till the end.. And i got to get a glimpse of akaash chikki's eternal love story.. Cv's need to concentrate on this jodi.. They will surely share awesome chemistry that will even outshine manveer chemistry.. 🤣

Edited by Dikshi92 - 13 years ago

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180506

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: IndigoBlues
bahaahaaa! 🤣 amazing dude! i think the y should definitely have an Akash-J-Chinki love triangle too. 😉😛 🤣

I already have it figured out too.😎

Chikash

vs.

Jakash

...whose love is meant to be?

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180506

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: -Mais-
REEHA!! HAWWW!

But I had this thought in my head that it'd be on ChiKash! You beat me to it girl, I wanted to debut ChiKash formally on the forum. Grrr...! But no hard feelings. Really liked this piece, though I felt the consistency wasn't very smooth. The jumps from POVs wasn't that well defined. Idk, this is just what I thought. But overall, very nice concept with a little flawed execution. Now don't kill me on this. You always wanted constructive criticism, and that I am giving you! :P

*EDIT*
W T F!?!??!?!?!?!? SHE WAS CHIKI FROM THE START!?!?!? i thought that she was Manyata and Chiki was seeing their union and...my head is spinning.. Feels like some lightening bolt hit me right now...HAWW!! REEHA! WHAT THE HELL DID YOU JUST DO?!?!? OMG! This proves it, I will NEVER read any of your writing lightly and actually open my eyes and activate my brain to decipher just what the hell is going on! And I deliberately didn't remove my first (original) comment...to show you how absentmindedly I read the OS first them and went through it again to understand what it really WAS!!

THE SHOCK OF THE DAY FOR ME!!!

I usually reply in order, but Maisy I had to do yours first🤣

I REALLY, REALLY, REALLY wish I could have seen you're face, it would have had a W T F expression. Awesome.

At first, I thought of making it obvious, and then I thought no one would really care or empathize with Chiki- so I thought about playing a mind game with you all. 😉

I'm glad you liked it, and I'm so happy it had the intended effect.!😆

Now...I am waiting for the follow up of Chikash from you Maisy dearest. 😃

ps: I love the monkeys 😳