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Posted: 13 years ago
Again, thanks a lot guys
Really happy i am getting to use my blue again
Please ignore or PM me the spelling errors
This one is really long, hope i don't bore you out

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Knock! Knock!

J: kya hum andar aa sakte hai? Actually, DS M di ko neeche bula rahi hai. ((Can I come in? Actually DS is calling M sis downstairs))

Komal: Ji, yahi batane hum yahan aye the par' ((Even I came here to say the same thing but'))

Brij: J, Manyata, beta aap dono neeche jaeye hum ate hai ((J & Manyata you two go ahead we'll join you later)

J: (trying hard not to smile) Sure Dad'Chaliye di ((C'mon sis))

She pulls me out of my room, takes 5 steps, stops, turns back, goes near my room and starts singing Jaadu Hai Nasha Hai, Madushiya Tijko Bhulake Ab Jao Kaha loudly. I see, I cushion hitting J square in the face.

J: Fine, hum jaa rahe hai (she again approaches me) Mom & Dad ki love story kaafi interesting thi na di?

((Fine I am leaving (she again approaches me) Mom & Dad's love story is quite interesting, isn't it sis?))

Me: (smile) J aap chupke humari aur Dad ki baate sun rahi thi ((J were you eavesdropping our conversation))

J: Well yes and no'jab Dad aap ke kamre mei aye toh hum bhi opposite side se aa rahe thee. Aapko sorry bolne ke liye, humne aapko itna sataya hai aur aaj aap yahan se ja rahi hai toh humne soocha'.(she stops)

((Well yes and no'when Dad was coming to your room I was coming there as well but from the opposite side. I wanted to say sorry to you because I troubled you a lot and you are leaving so I thought.. (she stops)))

Me: kya soocha ((what did you think))

J: well'woh hum..hum..Actually' ((well'I was..Actually'))

Me: Never mind ((I hug her))

J: Thanks di (she finally said after breaking the hug and we resumed our walk to DS's study) Mom & Dad kitne khush hai na, uun dono ko aise dekh ke hum bahut khush hai. You know di, hum bhi Karan ke liye aisa hi feel karte hai. Chalo, poore din mei kuch toh achcha hua, Mom & Dad ko saath dekh ke shayad aaj sabko neend aa hi jae.

((Thanks sis (she finally said after breaking the hug and we resumed our walk to DS's study) Mom & Dad were so happy and I am very happy to see them like this. You know, I also feel the same way about Karan. At least something nice happened today, maybe after seeing Mom & Dad together everyone will able to sleep peacefully tonight))

Me: (stop) Tumhara, matlab kya hai J ((What do you mean J?))

J: Aap itni bhi nave nahi hai di'aapko achche tarah se pata hai ki hum kya keh rahe hai. ((you know very well what I am talking about sis, you are not that nave))

Me: J saaf saaf bolo kya baat hai ((J can you speak clearly))

J: Fine, aap kya kar rahi hai? Kyu kar rahi hai? Di, koi andha bhi bata sakta hai ki aap Akash se pyaar nahi karti. Phir kyu? ((Fine, what are you doing? Why are you doing it? Any blind person can tell that you don't love Akash. Then why? ))

Me: Tujhe kisne kaha ki mei Akash se pyaar nahi karti? ((who said I don't love Akash))

J: Di, aap mujhe pahele bewakoof bana sakti thi ab nahi. Maine bhi kisi se pyaar kiya hai aur mein aapni shaadi ki ek raat pahele kisi aur ladke ke tasveer se saamne ghanto nahi roongi! Di mein aur kuch bol ke aapko embrass nahi karna chahati par please at least look around you, yahan kitne log hai jo aapko bahut pyaar karte hai woh aapko aise nahi dekh sakte. Aapko dikhae nahi deta aap DS, Mom, Dad, VJ bhai aur humme kitna dukh de rahi hai. Forget us, Akash ke bare mei soochiye. Akash bahut achcha hai par aap usse pyaar nahi karti, phir kyu usske saath itna injustice kar rahi hai. Just think, agar aap dono ki shaadi ke baad ussse pata chala ki aap Uday se pyaar karti hai toh uss par kya beete hi, aap ko Akash , Uday aur aapni zindagi barbaad karne ka koi haak nahi. (takes a deep breath) I am sorry, ye aap ki life hai aur aapka decision, hum interfere karne waale kaun hote hai, aapko kitne logo ne samjhaya kar'let it be (she turns to go but suddenly turns again) I am Sorry di, humne aapse jis tarah baat ki uss ke liye sorry par jo humne kaha usske liye hum sorry nahi hai

((You could've fooled me before but not now, sis. I've also fallen in love and I wouldn't cry for hours after seening another guy's face, that too a day before my marriage! Sis, I don't wanna say anything to embrass you but please at least look around you, there are so many people who love you and they can't see you like this. Forget us, think about Akash, he's a really nice guy but you don't love him then why are you being injust to him. Just think, if after your marriage he finds out that you love Uday how will he feel. You've no right to ruin yours, Akash's & Uday's life (takes a deep breath) I am sorry, this is your life and your decision, I've no right to interfere, many people have tried to reason with you'let it be (she turns to go but suddenly turns again) I am Sorry for talking rudely but I am not sorry about what I said))

She leaves me standing there stunned. Since when did people around me start reading me and my situation better than me! I really don't know what's up with everyone, there all have been handing me lectures after lectures. So the only sensible person left right know is DS, maybe meeting her would ease some of my tension. I slowly made my way towards the study.

Me: (knock) Kya hum andar aa sakte hai Dadi Sahab ((Can I come in DS))

DS: (smiles)Aaeye Manyata, hum aap hi ka intezaar kar rahe the ((come in Manyata, I was waiting for you))

Me: Sorry, DS woh hum Mom & Dad ki love story '.um, mera matlab hai ((Sorry Ds, I was listening to Mom & Dad's love story'um, I mean))

DS: Toh Brijraj ne finally aapko bata hi diya'chaliye aacha hai, kuch saalo se humme unka rishte dikawati lagne laga tha, ab sab kuch theek hi hoga. ((so Brijraj finally told you..good, you know I had started to get a feeling that their relationship was getting defunct but now everything will be okay))

Me: DS, humare paas aapke liye bhi ek question hai, actually do. Pehla, ma aur papa ki shaadi pe aapke pahele reaction kya tha ((DS, also have 1 no 2 questions for you. 1st: what was your reaction on Mom & Dad's wedding))

DS: Hamara reaction? Hum toh bahut khush thee kyuki hum Komal ko hi aapni bahu banana chahate thee, par Brijraj aur Komal ki takraar dekh ke toh humne ummed ki chod di thi par hum bhool gaye thee jaha pyaar hota hai, wahah takraar bhi hoti hai (smiles lightly)

((My reaction? I was really happy because I always wanted to make Komal my daughter-in-law, but Brijraj & Komal's constant fights made me lose all hope but I had forgotten that love & bickering go hand in hand (smiles lightly)))

Me: (why did it sound as if she was addressing my relationship with Uday) Which brings us to the 2nd question. DS aapki shaadi love thi ya arranged? ((DS was your wedding love or arranged))

DS: Manyata aap bhi, par jab aapne poocha hai toh'.LOVE ((Manyata, you are impossible but since you have asked'LOVE))

Me: Kya ((What))

DS: Manyata, aapke dada saheb aur hum bachpan se ek dusre ko bahut pasand karte the, itna ki jab hun dus saal ke hue toh aapke Dada Sahab ne humme propose kar diya aur humari families ne bhi ye rishte accept kar liya. Jab hum 21 years ke hue to hamari unse shaadi ho gayi.

((Manyata, your Grand dad and I liked each other since childhood, so much that he proposed me on my 10th birthday & our families happily accepted our relationship. We got married just after I turned 21))

J: Impressive'DS aapne humme pahele kyu nahi bataya (she comes in the room) Sorry, hum aapki baate nahi suna chahate thee par hum aapko ye batane aye thee ki Karan shaadi mei nahi aa paega

((Impressive'but DS why didn't you tell us before(she comes in the room) Sorry, I wasn't eavesdropping, I just came to tell you that Karan can't make it to the wedding))

DS: Theek hai J beta aur humme nahi pata kyu humne ye baat kisi ko nahi batae'waise Manyata humne aapko yahan ye kangan dene ke liye bulaya tha, hum jante hai ki humne pahele se aapko kaafi gifts de diye hai par ye humari favourite kangan hai. Hum chahate hai ki aap aapne saath, humari ek nishanni lekar jaye pata nahi isske baad hum---

((It's ok J and I don't know why I didn't share this earlier'anyways , Manyata I called you here to give you these bangles, I know we've already given you so many gidts but I wanted to give you these because they are my favorite. ))

Komal: Aesa mat kahiye Maa Saheb (Brijraj gives DS a warning glance) ((Don't say that Mom))

Brij: Maa Saheb humme lagta hai ki humme chalna chahiye ((Mom, I think we should leave))

DS: Chaliye ((let's go))

We all go outside and DS informed us that Mom & Dad will be travelling in one car, Vijay Bhai & Jai in another while she & Menka Bua take the third

Me: DS hum kaise jaenge? ((how will I go DS))

DS: Manyata beta aap aapni nayi silver gadi mei aajaeye. ((Manyata you can come in your new silver car))

Me: Par kyu DS? ((but why DS))

Komal: Manyata, ye raasta aapne chuna hai isliye aapko hi isse tae karna hoga. Hum saab challe warna Akash ko lagega hi humne koi nayi shariyanrtr kiya hai usski Moniya ko ussse door karne ke liye ((Manyata, you've chosen your path and you must trend on it. We all should leave or else Akash will think we are plotting something to snatch his Moniya from him))

Mom was still not over Akash's misbehavior at our engagement. Well, I can't blame her because Akash had literally accused Mom of plotting to keep us apart infront of the media. It had been a hell of a day, I had barely managed to keep my temper in check. No one insulted my Mom and got away with it, NO ONE!!! I did the best to behave like a perfect hostess, did my best to control the damage done to the reputation of my family, threw Akash out of the door, blasted him off the next day and didn't talk to him for a month which was 2 months and Mom made it more than clearer that she didn't want to see his face but she was attending this marriage as it was like performing the royal duties for her. Finally, all the cars left one by one leaving me behind. As I walked towards my car, I saw my driver Kailash. He opened the door for me but I didn't want to get inside the damned car, I just wanted some time with myself so I chose the best alternative.

Me: Kailash, humme gaadi ki chaabi do ((Kailash, give me the keys of the car))

Kailash: Par Rajkumari ji, Rajmata ji ne humme adesh diya hai--- ((But Princess, Rajmata has ordered us to---))

Me: Hum ne kaha chaabi do ((I said, I want the keys))

Obediently, he puts the keys in my hand and closes the door he had earlier opened. I sat in the car and started it but just as I did, I realized that I didn't want to go to the wedding venue, not yet so I made my way to the place where I first met him once: The Beach. I stood at the same place where he did and did what he had done but I made sure no one was around, to see that I don't hurt anyone. I stood there for a while staring at the wide expense of the sea, I saw the waves crashing at the shore and then I felt that a tidal wave swept through me bringing back all my memories My old life, Akash, Uday, Coming back Home, Dadi Sahab, Mom, Dad, Jai, Vijay Bhai, Unnati, the past year finally, I felt drained up so I left the place. I made my way back to the car, I knew what I had to do but I don't know how to.

Me: Wish you were here today, Uday! Aaj tumhari bahut zarurat hai mujhe. (I whispered as I started the car)

((Wish you were here today, Uday! I really need you today (I whispered as I started the car)))

I knew I was late, almost 1 hours but I think it's worth it. I reach the venue and see everyone apart from Akash in an apprehensive state. He was dressed up in a white and red sherwani looking good as ever and was the first one to see me. His expression went from cheerful to shocked, then disappointed and the he was back to his cheerful mood. I was quite taken aback by his expressions but it had changed so fast that I thought I might have imagined it. Maybe I was reading more into something that didn't exist. Jai was the next one to see me

J: Lijiye, M di aa gayi (everyone turned to see me) ((Manyata sis is here))

DS: Kaha reh gayi thi aap Manyata beta ((Where were you Manyata))

Me: (crossed my fingers) Woh DS, aap logo ke jane ke baad hum mahal mei kuch time akele bitana chahate thee aur phir hum an hour late ho gaye usske baad hum traffic mei fas gaye. (I am a pathetic liar and judging from the looks my family members gave me, told me that they didn't bought it but thankfully didn't question me) further) (((crossed my fingers) Actually DS I wanted to spent some time alone in the Mahal after you left so I got an hour late, then I got held in a traffic jam))

Pandit: Rajkumari ji, aaeye ((please come, Princess))

Me: Ji, pundit ji ((Sure, pundit ji))

And just like that I went my place at the mandap. What's wrong with me, my plan was to come here and break the thing off and what am I doing. As I sat down, I felt a tingling feeling down my spine and felt someone's eyes on me. Not just anyone's ' I was 101% sure who it was, he was here. I stood up again arousing everyone's curiosity.

VJ: Kya hua M bhai agar last minute bhagne ke bare mei sooch rahi ho toh hum tumhe bata de ki koi fayada nahi he ((what happened M, if you are thinking of running away on the last minute then let me tell you its futile))

I ignore him and walk towards a big bouquet of flowers. It was almost as big as my height. I touched it ' good news, definitely him

Me: Uday, ab itna bada bouquet lae ho toh ghud de bhi do ((Uday since you've brought me such a huge bouquet, you ought to give it to me yourself))

UV: Maan gaye tumhe Princess, itni jaldi humme catch kar liya ((hats off Princess, you caght me in no time))

He immerged from behind the bouquet looking good as ever in a his casual blue jeans, his favorite sky-blue shirt, having a light stubble, wearing sneakers, same irritating grin but his eyes looked a little sad, wait, it's gone um was it actually there or I was imagining it, well I didn't have time because the next thing I know is that I practically ran into Uday's arm, surprising him and everyone present in the room. I knew many started gossiping but I just didn't care, I felt like a lost puppy that had finally gotten home. He was the first one to break away from the hug but stared at me for a while and I felt myself warming up and then he finally said

UV: Achche lag rahi ho bilkul pariyo ki Rajkumari jaisi ((you are looking good, in fact you look like the Princess of Fairies))

Me: Haan, ha, pahele toh jungle billi lagti thee ((Ya, I used to look like jungle queen before))

UV: Pehli bhi bahut achche lagti thee Princess, par humne tumhe ek saal se nahi dekha aur tab tumhara makeover nahi hua tha and aaj tumhari shaadi hai, color combination achcha hai plus tumhe sabse best toh lagna hi hai. Humne soocha tumhari shaadi se pahele tumhe ek compliment de hi de.

((You did look beautiful before but I haven't seen you for in the past year and then you didn't have a makeover done and today's your wedding, the color combination is very nice plus you had to look the best today. So I thought I'd give you a compliment before your wedding))

Me: Tujhe kaise pata meri shaadi abhi tak nahi huee ((How do you know I am not married yet))

UV: Well, maang mei sindoor nahi, gale mei mangalsutra and gat bandhan bhi nahi hua lagta hai Akash se shaadi karne ka mood nahi hai (giving me a killer smile) kya kehti ho Princess abhi bhi mauka hai Akash ki jagah humse shaadi kar hi lo!

(( well, there's no sindoor in your forehead, there's no mangalsutra in your neck and the knots haven't been ties, seems like you are not in the mood to marry Akash (giving me a killer smile) What say Princess, marry me instead of Akash))

Me: (good idea but I'll give you the reaction I used to) Halkat, Veede, Bohot

UV: Kutte Kaminey

Me: Kya ((What))

UV: Tum bhool gayi and Manyata Rajkumariya galiya nahi deti, unhe shoobha nahi deta ((You forgot to say it and Manyata Princesses don't abuse , it's not considered proper))

Me: jaanti hoon aur ab mei kisi to gali nahi deta (pokes a finger in this chest) sivae tere ((I know and nowadays I don't (pokes a finger in this chest) except you))

UV: Matlab Moniya special sirf humare liye hai, I feel honored Princess ((So the Moniya special is reserved for me, I feel honored Princess))

Me: Uday, tu na woh--- ((Uday you))

UV: Excuse me, hum baki sabse bhi mil le. (He goes to Mom and hugs her) Kaisi ho beautiful, humne bahut pareshaan kiya na aapko? ((Excuse me, I'll go and meet everyone else (he goes to Mom and hugs her) How are beautiful, I gave you a lot of trouble didn't I? ) )

Komal: Baat mat kijiye aap humse, aap humme aapni Maa manate hai na Uday phir bhi aap humse bina mile hi chale gaye ((Don't talk to me, you consider me your mother but you left without meeting me))

UV: Sorry, really really sorry (he pulls his ears like a small innocent boy, what any irony)

Komal: Theek hai, humne aapko maaf kiya par aapko toh kal aana tha na, late kaise ho gaye? ((Ok, I forgive you but you had to come yesterday so why are you late))

I admit I am definitely shocked, mom knew that Uday was coming and she didn't even tell me. "Why will she you idiot, after all, she blames you for his departure"' a small voice said, ok back to the conversation

UV: Woh humari flight delay ho gayi thi aur usske baad humme Delhi jana pada kyuki humare ghoode Sultan ka ek accident ho gaya tha aur ab hum chalte hai ((Actually my flight got delayed and then I had to go to Delhi because my horse Sultan had gotten an accident and I'll take your leave now) )

DS: Kyu Uday beta, aap abhi abhi toh aaye hai? ((But why Uday, you've just arrived now))

UV: Aur abhi jana bhi padega kyuki humari flight ka time ho gaya hai ((And I've to go because my plane's about to depart))

Brij: Aap kaha ja rahe hai Uday? ((Where are you going Uday))

UV: Jaha zindagi le jae'humara matlab Switzerland ((Wherever life take me'I mean Switzerland) )

VJ: Kyu? Tumhe YRF ki taraf se contract mila hai? ((Why? Have you signed a contract with YRF) )

J: Kya matlab Vijay bhai? ((What do you mean Vijay bhai?))

VJ: Aree J bhai ' remember SRK Switzerland ke kheto mei romance karne ke liye famous hai. ((Oh J bhai ' remember SRK is famous for romancing in the fields of Switzerland in his film))

J: VJ bhai (comes near Uday) Kaise ho Uday? ((How are you Uday))

UV: Hum theek hai J (he hugs her) so Karan kaha hai? ((I am good J (he hugs her) so where is Karan?))

How the hell did he know about Karan? I knew Unnati & Mom did talk to him but J too. She didn't even tell me about it.

J: Pehle toh Karan ki meeting last minute extend ho gaye and then usski Mom ko ek minor heart attack aa gaya, iss liye woh ho aa nahi paega but mei kal London jah rahi hoon, so sorry ki tum ussse mil mani pae

((At first this meeting got extended a whole week and then his Mom suffered a minor heart attack that's why he couldn't make and I am going to London tomorrow, so sorry that he couldn't meet you))

She didn't tell us that and I swear, those two are behaving like childhood buddies. Things have changed a great deal in the past year, I guess.

UV: Aakhir tum bhi badal gaye J, itni fikir who bhi aapni future saas ke liye, kahi hum sapna toh nahi dekh rahe hai, by the way tumhe humme abhi bhi aapni lovestory batani padegi, ye joh tum har bar brief updates dene ke baad suspense create karti ho usske baad humme lagte hai ki tum ek script writer kyu nahi ban jaati.

((So you've finally changed J, you are worried about someone that too your future mother-in-law. I hope I am not dreaming and by the way, you still have to tell me your love story. Every time you give me brief updates and increase the suspense, it makes me think you'll become a great writer))

J: Thanks Uday par hum Rajkumari hi ban kar khush hai ((Thanks Uday but I am happy being a Princess))

UV: I know (turns to Unnati) Sorry, sweetie hum tumhe wapas chod kar jah rahe hai. ((sorry, I am leaving you again))

Unnati: It's okay, dada at least iss baar aap humse mil kar toh jah rahe hai. ((It's okay, bro at least this time you are meeting me before you leave))

UV: tumne humme ab tak maaf nahi kiya ((you haven't forgiven yet))

U: Dada, hum aapse gussa hi kab the jo aapko maaf kar de, have a safe trip, I'll miss you ((Bro, I was never angry on you so how can I forgive you, have a safe trip, I'll miss you))

UV: (they share a cute hug) I'll miss you too (turns to me) Tum abhi bhi yahan khadi ho Princess. Hum aa gaye isska matlab nahi ki tum shaadi hi na karo (he hold my hand and leads me to the mandap) Hi Akash kaise ho?

((You are still standing here Princess. It doesn't mean that you don't get married now that I am here (he holds my hand and leads me to the mandap) Hi Akash, how are you))

I am surprised to see that both men are finally comfortable in each other's company, forget comfortable they looked like long lost friends who were extremely happy to see each other but the expressions on their faces were gone as fast as they appeared

A: (Smiles) Namaste, Yuvraaj sa, I am good

UV: Call me Uday and congrats akhir tumhe tumhari Moniya mil hi gayi. (Akash face lost a little color ' I wonder why) and please be a little careful, kyuki mein duniya ke kisi bhi kone mei raho agar mujhe pata chala ki tumhare karaan meri Princess ki aakho mei aasu aye toh mein tumhe nahi choodu ga.

((Call me Uday and congrats finally you've gotten your Moniya (Akash face lost a little color ' I wonder why) and please be a little careful because wherever I go if I found out that that you made my Princess cry, I won't leave you))

A: Tum chinta mat karo Udayveer, mein aisa kabhi hone nahi dunga aur agar tumhari Princess aapne paeero mei khud kuladi marane chali toh mei ussse sahi raasta dikha dunga. ((Don't worry Udayveer, I won't let that happen and if your Princess tries to hit an axe on her own foot then I'll guide her through))

UV: (this time Uday's face lost a little color) Humme der ho rahi hai hum chalte hai. ((I am getting late so I'll take your leave) )

And then he walked out the venue'no not just the venue but my life too again

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Edited by Sheetal.Shalini - 13 years ago
Posted: 13 years ago
pls [pls uday ko return ticket de do
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Posted: 13 years ago
plz yaar dont leave us like this
i will die now
when will u update next
plz do it soon plz plz plzzz
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Posted: 13 years ago
Pliz don't Get manyata married to akash
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Posted: 13 years ago
Great update. Plz continue and write the next part where Maanyata stops Uday and marries him.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Vey nice update!! I'm sooo eager to read the next part!! Plzz do continue soon n plz pm me!!:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
nooo uduay has gone again y cant manyata stop the wedding and go after him plz update soon cant wait for the next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
I love this FF.
I hope Manyata stops Uday.
I don't want Manyata to marry Akash, even in FFs 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update loved it that was well written beautifully done maanyath is just stubborn she knows the truth about her feeling but refuse to give up and live the truth loved the update please make her stop uday loved the update thanks for the translations and the pm'

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Posted: 13 years ago
ohhh...finally uday is back...hope manyata stops him...n tell him bout her feelings...

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