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LD-Radha

@LD-Radha

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

O.M.G...OH MY GOD. That was intense! I almost like started crying with the pain that both Uday and Manyata were going through. As much as M deserved it...it was still very sad.😒That was painful to read but it was so SO good. It was exactly like something UV would do in the show! I dont know what else to say...im still kind of speechless after that last image of the guards taking Uncle A away and MUV leaving for dinner.

I almost forgot! I love that line - "Her blood froze. She could recognize that voice anywhere." or something like that when UV called her "princess"👍🏼😃

Edited by DilDostiDanceD3 - 13 years ago

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

that was awesome please continue it and pm me

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prachurya

@prachurya

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

I loved it bt the like button isn't working! I loved wat u did to the majnu- hilarious Majnu running- UV shaking the ladder blankly -🤣. UV's part was brilliant!

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Nityah

@-StarlitFire-

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

its amazing..
very well written...
You potrayed Uday's feelings and emotions very well...loved it...

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dreamyjennice

@dreamyjennice

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

amazing...manipulator manipulates the other manipulator...thats what a prince can do...he is just not a namesake prince...thanx for pm...loved it

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Samridhi

@BinKuchKahe.

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

wow, this was just awesome.

Uday's dialogue on how he always forgives really made me feel his pain of being betrayed by Manyata.

I really hope this happens in the show. Your OS was the best thing after the annoying episode today.

Looking forward to reading more :)

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WinterFire

@WinterFire

Stunner

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

hey.. i would like this OS cuz i really do .. but i cant like it today for some reason... but great OS.. im hoping this happens but i dont want manyata to fake it again with uday.. n thanx for the pm.. plz do continue 😊