OS: Unspoken Emotions - Page 2

Originally posted by: -Mais-

Awww...! I'm not that good and trust me when I say it. Your ideas are amazing because they are directly taken out from the show whereas I put a whole AU into them :P And just yesterday I was re-reading my Short Scenes and wanted to smack myself because of SO MANY TYPOS!!! Ufff...!! Proof reading is like my mortal enemy!! Can't live with it!!!

And it was just a co-incident that I happened to see your post while surfing through the main forum...I feel happy to be able to comment early :D

Originally posted by: IndigoBlues

thanks yaar.. have to go to sleep..or else would have put loads of 'cake' into your mouth.😛🤣

it's okay..even i hate proof reading..i corrected two typos after posting this and i'm like "omg, i'm getting aamir khan complex."😳🤣

There's this one typo of mine that's been haunting me since yesterday "See you see". WHO SAYS THAT!??!?! Urgh!!! Awww! I wanted that cake. Chal koi nahin. Gosh, I've to update my FF as well. Oh well, good night! Sweet dreams!

P.S - FEELAY MURGI!!!!!!! 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Wonderful! The whole Uday and M battle before cutting the cake was brilliantly written. I cud see it playing before my eyes. Terrific!

That was soo amazing! Loved it!

Never read something like this before!
Hats off!!

😛THAT WAS FANTASTIC

fantastic! i enjoy your writing style!!

hey plz add me to ur buddy list and msg me wen u write agian

Originally posted by: DilDostiDanceD3

OMG this was amazing! I loved that one line where everyones attention was on M and her attention was on UV. And that image of UV being shattered when M cut the cake was so powerful! I actually felt shattered inside too! Hope something like this doesnt happen in the show though because you're right...I dont think Uday would forgive her either. All in all, loved it! 😃