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TrueMuskaan

@TrueMuskaan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

You know what you should do, make this into an SS! Udayveer's sweet revenge :P hehe. But this was good! Loved your descriptions on Uday's feelings

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@Hot.Pink.Heels

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

tht was brilliant!

awesome work!

and thnx for the pm :)

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Mahi

@-Mystery-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

I couldn't stop laughing reading the first paragraph 🤣 Totally hilarious!!

You're a fab writer!! One thing that happens all too often with OS/FF writers is that they get out of characters and write stuff.

Yours was very much in character and the scenes were brilliantly written.

Good job.

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

nice..really good..can you continue this i want to read more about manyata drifting away from akash...& i also want to read how manyata will manaofy udayveer...😊

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Manasi

@Manasi_16

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Excellent as usual👏👏👏👏👏👏 Pl PM me when you update

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--ANGEL--

@--ANGEL--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

awesome os...really looved it...thanx 4 the pm...

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Ziva01

@Ziva01

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Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Simply amazing

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kulsum wadi

@wadi..doll

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Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Wowww this is Amazing yaar love it soo much

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Binita

@...Binny...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#29

That was simply amazing.. I just love how you have described UV's sudden reaction to being betrayed sounds just like him.. never one to portray his true feelings.. Loved it..Do PM me.. 😛

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-Misek-

@-Misek-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#30

Awesome OS againn..⭐️

Thanks so much for trhe PM 😊

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