OS:Ajnabee Ehsaas [Part 2 a/b Updt]

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@thejazzgal

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

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Hey Shabziii!!!

wah late ayi update k saath par wow! kehne k liye itnaa pyaara updat le aayi...

Loved it chooo much shabzi..

loved the poetry..!

haww!!! ..loved every word of it..

well done shabzi...

par end kar di tum ne !! nahi its a new beginning na ? hmmm ..

wanna read more SS/ OS's / FF's from u shabzii..

hope u'll write more .

love

~Jazzy..!

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preeti

@teletubby

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

gud one!!! great work!!

u got the feel ,character n way of speaking o the characters so perfectly

felt very real...esp. DS n UV.😍

loved it ...keep posting 👍🏼

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Adden

@Add123

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

I loved it, Great OS !! 😃

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salekh1

@salekh1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

That was the perfect ending

Loved it

Awesome job

Please write more fanfictions!!

Amazing

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kritz51

@kritz51

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

awesome yaar

love it😃

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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+ 10

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

awesome os..really liked it very much..😊

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Tannu

@-Tannu-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#27

nice updates shabziii!!!😊

perfect ending...oppsss!!! perfect beginning!!!😳

toh perfect beginning matlab...😉⭐️

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WinterFire

@WinterFire

Stunner

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

that was really good.. especially the ending.. thanx for the pm :)

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--ANGEL--

@--ANGEL--

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#29

awesome part...loved the confession...it was so romantic...

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GrilledCheese

@GrilledCheese

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#30

wonderful os..loved all the parts to bits and pieces..you are an awesome writer..

keep it up!!

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