OS:Ajnabee Ehsaas [Part 2 a/b Updt] - Page 2

Nyc...OS..wd all d characters so vry lovey-dovey spcly d sistrly bondng n d bloomng of new love of manveer!! LOVd it...plz write d continuatn soon..:)

wow that was gr8 and cute loved it yarr...plz dow rite more

very nice!! but if J was still evil it wud b more believable 😉

thanks all for your comments...

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shbazii...

Hey everyone..thanks for all your comments...its was really Encouraging...as many of you had this question let me clear..

this is drastic change in the characters happens after 6 months...

akash left mumbai with his family

manyata helped jaynandini to get out of her lonliness and their relation was like any other sisters..

and eventually manyata fell in love with the princes..but was never accepting

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~*~Part 2(a)~*~

He stood their looking at her going away in her anger'

she looked cute when she is angry'.aap hume zaroor miss karengi princess..haan nai toh!!

He called before leaving..

Hello princess..

Hmm kaho abhi hum bahut busy hai..hum,jaynandini aur unnati ke saath party main jaa rahey hai..kitne din baad hum sirf ladkiyan jayenge..koi nahi hoga hume tag along karne wala..

He gave a known smirk..

She was waiting for him to reply'.but he kept mum..knowing his princess

Udaybeer..jaldi jaldi bye kaho aur phone cut karo..hume late ho rahi hai party k liye..

Okay bye princess'.m getting late..aur haan wahan se koi contact nahi ho payega..m going to be busy for this whole week'.hum wapas aakr baat karte hai.. bye!

Wat??she heard her phone going off..

1 week tak baat nahi hogi..koi nahi..main bhi tab tak enjoy karungi

The trio left for the party..manyata behaved like his absence doesn't matter to her

Where as two people can clearly see a changed manyata'.a girl trying to forget sum1 absence but cannot..as every talk of her was related to him..

Two days passed..withh manyata missing udaybeer..but not ready to accept it

Waise accha hi huwa jo dada jaygarh gaye hai'hum sab saath tym spend kar sakte hai'and winks at jay..

Haan jiji warna aap toh waise bhi bore hojati hai na..uday ki company main

Nahi jaynandini mujhe toh uday ki company bhaut pasand hai..

Jiji ab yeh sab humare saamne accept karti ho toh uday k saamne kyun nahi??

Wo bhi toh nhai karta hai na..came a swift reply

Manyata'.kya aap sach main sochti hai ki dada aapko pyaar nahi karte??

Maine aisa toh nahi kaha..par mujhe darr lagta ahi izhaar karne se..jab maine kisise izhaar kiya..usne mera dil tod diya..sirf paison k liye wo mujhse pyaar karne ka natak karta raha..aur ab mujhe darr lagta hai kahin..uady kahi mujhe inkaar na karde..

Manyata humne dada ka pyaar dekha hai aapke liye..aur sirf kuch din pehle nhai humne bahut pehle dekha hai..jab aap yahan thi bhi nhai'

She turned giving a confused look..

Haan manyata..wo DS ki umeed hi nahi par dada ka pyaar bhi tha jo aapke laut aane ka intezaar karta tha..har din har pal'.wo duniya k liye to tough rehte thay..par wo aduhre aur akele thay..har pal unki aankhon main talash thi..sirf aapki'.unka koi dost nahi..kyunki wo hamesha aap gum thay'.har raat chand main aapka chehra dhoondtey'.har subah inki yeh irade se hotey kaash aap mil jaaye'ab aap hi bataiye..kya pyaar nhai..???

Manyata was in tears..and left the place'

Jiji..said jay stopping manyata..

Nahi J unhe jaane do..unhe kuch waqt chahiye..

She ran into the lawn

Wo humse kitna pyaar karte hai..humne kaise nahi samjha'.

She picked her cell phone and dialed his number'then stopped and cut the call

Humne uday ke saath kitna bura kiya..unhe bhala bura kaha..unka dil toda..kya main unke pyaar ke layak hoon ?? was the thought running in her mind

She sat with tears rolling down her cheeks..

Her phone beeped

And it was a message from UV

"kitna bhi ho ranjh koi bhi wajah thama hai tera haath to thamoonga sada rahe na rahe zameen ur asmaan I promise to stand by u always..lifetime promise "

She smiled reading the message..she felt him around..

she ran around to see him..was it just her instinct or was he really around..

she searched for him but he wasn't there..she feebly walked back to mahal when she heard

princess'.!!

She turned to see him

She couldn't believe he was standing right in front of him..with that die for smile ,her prince

She ran to him and stopped right in front of him,..Thinking him to be her illusion

He stood their smiling at her'he came near her said whispered in her ears..

Hum sach main yahan hai'.princess

She jerked back

Udayveer'tum yahan??

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~*~Part 2(b)~*~

Udayveer'tum yahan??

Yess princess aapne yaad kiya aur hum yahan'.

She went closer to him and reality struck in..

Yuvraj udayveer aap toh ek hafte baad aane wale thay yun achanak..she glared him with suspicion in her eyes.

princess '.hum ek hafte baad aane waley thay..par..

par kya?? She questioned raising her eyebrows..

par kisi ke yaad ne hume bahut jald bula liya..

Yaad ?? kiski yaad udayveer'??? With a tint of jealousy in her tone..

Now udayveer decided to play along..

Hai koi'ab humey late ho rahi hai'DS se kuch important kaam tha hum pehle us kaam ko poora kar letey hai..aapse toh batein hoti rahengi..

And he left manyata in a state of jealousy and anger..

He looked at her from the corner of his eyes and smirked at his innocent princess

Aap jab jealous hoti ho aur bhi zyada cute lagti ho par jab us jealousy ki wajah se aap humse jhagda karti ho tab bahut pyaar ata hai aap par.

And he walked away..

She angrily marched into her room

And threw away her phone and laid on her stomach..

Kya hua jiji??

Jaynandini aap badi wakalat karti ho na us bigde huwe yuvraaj ki..

Par jiji huwa kya hai..aap kis baat se naraaz hai ki unhone aapko call nahi kiya??

Jaynandini wo Mumbai aa chuke hai..

Really??jiji aapko koi misunderstanding hui hogi wo toh abhi jaygarh main hai..aur unnati bhi yahi par hai..

Nahi jaynandini wo aagaey hai abhi main uss bigde huwe yuvraj se milkar aayi hoon..

Milkar?? Jiji u must be dreaming'..ahaan ab dreams bhi uday se filled hotey hai..said jay nandini teasing her sister who was already irritated

Hogayi bakwaas..?wo udayveer yahin mahal main hai..dadi sahib se milne gaya hai..aur unhone humey bataya bhi nahi wo aaj aane wale thay'.

Jiji aap kis baat se irritated ho ye ki uday mahal main hai ya..unhone ye nahi bataya wo aaj arahey hai??

Jaynandini tu ann shann na bakk..mujhe akele rehna hai..

As you wish jiji..but think about it'and jay left the room

At night

After dinner everyone retired to bed but manyata wasn't feeling sleepy..her mind was disturbed..

She about to leave her room go into lawn to have fresh air..

She was reminded of UV saying "princess kitni baar kaha jab bhi aap lawn main jaye to shawl leti jaaye"she smiled and draped a shawl around herself'

And walked into lawn..

Pata nahi humey kya horaha hai..hum kyun naraaz hai udayveer se..kyun humey bura laga jab uday ne kisi aur ki baat ki..kya wo sach main humari imagina tion thi..ya wo laut aya hai..agar laut aya ho to dinner k samy bhi nahi dikahyi diya..hum pagal hojayenge'udayveer humey pagal kardenge..haan nai toh!!

She removed her slippers and walked bare foot 'she felt heavenly walking on the serene grass'

...Kya hum sach main uday se pyaar'..haan hume wo bahut pasand hai..unke saath bitaya har pal kitna khoobsurat lagta hai..jab bhi wo saath ho toh hum lagta kash ye pal ruk jaaye'.par pata nahi humey darr lagta hai'is baat se kahin wo humey pyaar na karey'.she closed her eyes..

Pyaar koi sauda nahi..agar hum unse pyaar karte hai toh yeh zaroori nahi wo bhi humey pyaar karey..hum izhaar toh karenge..kyunki main yeh nahi chahti apni life itna khoobsurat pal main darr ki wajah se gawa doon..

She looked up at the moonlight'

Kaash agar uday veer humare saath hotey to ..

She felt his hands on her shoulder..yes she knew his touch

Humay yaad kar rahi thi princess..??

She was shocked'her mind was definitely playing games..

She ran into her room..

Her heart threatening to explode any moment

This was her imagination for sure..

She kept tossing and turning in bed whole night..

Next day..

Manyata hum sab aaj shopping jaa rahey hai aur uske baad hum jaa rahey hai party main' said unnati excitedly

Wow!! This sounds great..said jay

Humara mann nahi..mayata said uninterested in the whole plan

Ohh jiji don't be a spoil sport..

Nahi jaynandini humari bilkul mann anhi..

Kya hua manyata aapki tabiyat toh thik hai na..u look dull '.

Haan hum thik hai unnati..aap dono jaiye..

Jiji humey pata hai..aapka mann kyun nahi..agar aap apna mind divert karey to accha hoga na..

They both pleased manyat to come along them..

After shopping they headed to party

Manyata was bored..she felt estranged there..and she walked out

She didn't wanted to spoil her little sister and very good friends mood'

She walked to the sea shore which was steps away from the party..

She saw him walking towards her'she closed her eyes as tight she could

Oh no not again..!!

she opened her eyes..he was getting closer..

hum zaroor pagal hogaye hai..har jagah wohi nazar aata hai....she pinched her self..

and he was really there..

he came closer and said "hum sach main yahan hai princess"

she wanted to go away from there..

Manyata...

She felt her legs froze'for the first time..she heard him sayin her name..it sounded so soothing to her ears..

Spot light fell on her..everything around was dark

Yes it was happening in real!!!

He came in front of her and kneeled down in front of her opened his arms..

Manyata' I really love u'will u marry me??

She was dumbfounded..

This cannot be reality'.it was her dream'

She blinked continually

All she could was to nod yes

He took her hand slipped a diamond ring in her ring finger..

Tears pricking her eyes..

She kept staring at him

He stood up ..and cupped her face

Hum aapke aankho main aansoo nahi dekh sakte princess'.and wiped her tears..

She hugged him ,to never let him go..

"I love u uday"

He hugged her back'

They Broke their hug after good 10 mins

Aapko ek baat kahe..

She looked up at him in question..

Hum yahan sach main thay'agar humey paat hota aap humey itna miss kar rahey toh hum aapko bhi saath lejate humari maharani banakar...nd winked at her

She playfully hit him

Ab chaley..jaynandini aur unnati humare wait kar rahey honge'said uday

Un dono ko pata tha??

Haan..they helped me..warna toh aap kabhi izhaar nahi karte

So u all people tricked me..jao nahi karte aapse baat'

Okay waise bhi party main humari kaafi friends hai..he gave a lop side grin

Oye bigde huwe yuvraaj..agar aapko yaad na ho toh hum bata de aapka roka ho chukka hai aur jald hi aapki shaadi hone wali hai..humse!! she stated

Ohh'.sach??

Yess!!ab chaley

She held his hand authoritively

And walked back to the party..

Everyone wished them..

Jiji im soo happy for..finally aapko ehsaas hogaya..said jay hugging manyata..

Dada'finally manyata ne haan keh diya'.perfect end..!!

Ahaan choti..perfect beginning..announced uday happily

A week later

She was dressed in a pink lahenga..

She was walking down the steps..when their eyes met..

She lowered her eyes

He walked towards her held her hand and walked to middle of the hall

He whispered "beautiful"

They exchanged rings..and they were showered with rose petals

Everyone happy..

DS announced their wedding..

Which was to be held next month..

Uday made a face..

Kya huwa ?? asked a worried manyat..

Next month kyun??

Matlab tumhi abhi shaadi nahi karni??

Princess..agar next week hoti toh kitna accha hota..said uday naughtily

Uday aap bhi na..nd she blushed

..and this was the perfect beginning for their happy life..

Hope U all liked it...

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~Shab