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Sarah

@MsLuscious

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#21

AWESOME😊 i loveddd it👏
great job plzzz write m0re

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489321

Suspended

Posted: 14 years ago

#22

Thanks everyone! Glad you all like it, writing on MaanVeer was really fun, maybe I'll write more stuff on them soon 😊

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haminasto

@haminasto

Alumni

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#23

found any stalker Reyabear?... if NOT then Vupiii...im heere to be ur slave driver...(I am NOT a stalker... well maybe just a little one but I promise to stay hidden so you wont notice me😭)
*starts to SPEAK loudly about all these FATAL ATTRACTIONS takin place around ur work but r kept hidden*(suttle enough?..its a request😭)
so..oh!!..the whirlpool of those sinful russet depths...those capacious shoulders...dae'mon biceps...n those peach n cheery LIPS☺️(a certain ASR n UV r buzzin near me😳...oops forgot...this isnt my fantasy buk😍...nw being caught in between 2 majestic men is goin to put da batti's off😉)
of course i noticed Manyata(after i devored da icecream⭐️)....im DyIN to watch her in saree(dat means im DYING to watch DAT luk on Udayveer's FACE...ufff)
mouth watering piece...nycly written...Splendiferous details n highly appriciated👏...
P.S.- so since wen r we gonna get da updates 4 Nothing To Lose...coz we knw uve started it n r dying to put it up...nw I've given da green signal(or R u waitin 4 da brown depths one🥳)...n i'll be waitin for all 3 of THEM😃

Edited by 18shabbo - 14 years ago

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Meera

@indiandoll89

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#24

This was wonderfully written! I could easily visualize everything! 😃 Great job!

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nidhi

@roking_nidhi223

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#25

omg it was GREAT i loved reading it

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SRJKiShraddha

@SRJKiShraddha

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#26

it was just 👍🏼 brilliant waiting for next update

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Angel

@Angelskiss

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#27

Awesome! Awesome! Awesome!
Loved it!
thanks for the great read!

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jiya kaur

@jiyafriends4eve

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

It felt like he was slowly undressing her with his eyes, ripping off the new, expensive clothes she was wearing and leaving her feeling utterly and completely naked. ...
*blush* 😳 😉