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Nakita19

@Nakita19

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Posted: 14 years ago

OH...MY...GOG! 😳 That was awesome I really hope you continue this!

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utopia88

@utopia88

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

Wow great OS! 👏

I loved reading it! 👍🏼

Loved UV's parts! 😍

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salekh1

@salekh1

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Posted: 14 years ago

😊WOAH WOAH WOAH hayeee.. That was just wooow LOl i loveeed it it was so sensous and HOT amazingly written pleaseee Please contninue this..

And OMG!! an FF would be a wonderful idea!! please go ahead with it..eagerly waiting

Please PM when u write ManVeer os or FF!!

Awesome writer

Please continuee😛

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utopia88

@utopia88

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

I forgot to add this! 😊

I hope the CVS read your OS because I would love to see all the scences you wrote about happen in DEK when M gets her makeover! 😍

Edited by utopia88 - 14 years ago

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Ananya Agarwal

@..Ananya..

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

This was sooo cute..please write more stuff :) :)

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@Hot.Pink.Heels

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

Oh gosh!

that was soo damn mesmerizing!

i almost died from the beautiful way u descirbed every little thing!

oh god plz plz do write tht FF cuz u have an awesome writing skill.

if u do continue this or write tht FF plz do pm me and let me noe since i wud love to read it :)

awesome job dearie 🤗

👏👏👏👏👏

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WinterFire

@WinterFire

Stunner

Posted: 14 years ago

awesome OS.. i also wish this can happen in DEK... that would be great... plz write more... very nice.. !!!

Edited by nasghar - 14 years ago

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Muskaan.C

@Muskaan.C

Beginner

Posted: 14 years ago

Great job! I absolutely loved the banter between Moniya and Uday. Hope it actually happens in the show one day.

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-scarlett-

@-scarlett-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

HOLY GAMOLY!!
Was that hot or what!!?? HAAIII!!! I so wish this to happen some day
on the show...i could already picture it!
the dialogues were superb...
really good job!

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JCluvs srk

@JCluvs srk

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#10

oh my GOD...why havnt you posted this sooner!? its amazing! write more...i wanna know what happens next lol...and you should write ur fanfic...i'm deff. gonna read it if you do decide to write one...your have really good writing skills...

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