OS: Ultimatum - Page 2

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

loved it please add more, loved it!

Thank you! I will aim to add on to this one shot, and if not to this one, possibly another one.

Originally posted by: moonstruck

very cool and excellent writing skills loved it

Thank you! I was rather self conscious when I first posted this. Glad that you enjoyed it.

Originally posted by: salekh1

😛HAYYYEEE

LOVED IT

it was so cute. and romantic

PLEASEEE CONTIUEE SOOON

is possible PM me.

Thank you

Thank you. I'm glad it didn't turn out as angsty as I had imagined it. I will aim to add to this, but if not, you may see another one shot (or possible short story) from me soon. I recently joined the forum so I'm still getting used to everything. I will surely PM you whenever I update.

Originally posted by: moksha89

you have the characters so down to the T.

honestly, UVeer's predatory nature is so 😳 and real. I can definitely see her getting caught this way!

Thank you! Uday is just...too good for words. Though the way he caught her in today's episode was much better. Just showed that he didn't to eavesdrop on a phone conversation to figure it out. He knew when she was lying from the start.

Originally posted by: Arti411

That is great!!! I was thinking that that might actually happen in tomorrow's episode. :D

Thank you! It was a definite possibility, but I just loved their confrontation today. It was much better than whatever I had thought of.

Originally posted by: imranramji

lol i know that in the tv show they wouldnt do this but you could make manyata the sex slave. lmao jk

Lol. Thanks. That would definitely be interesting.

Originally posted by: roking_nidhi223

plz do cont

Thank you! I will aim to continue with this one shot, though I think the episode did more than enough. I wil try to start another one shot (or short story) if you guys are interested.

Originally posted by: Muskaan.C

Thank you! I will aim to continue with this one shot, though I think the episode did more than enough. I wil try to start another one shot (or short story) if you guys are interesteed.

zigzagway_sadi

Thank you, I really appreciate it.

Yes yes pleaseee contniue and write more