The Udayveer Chronicles| NEW UPDATE|PART 26 PAGE 137 - Page 37

Hi Reeha meri jaan 🤗 sorry for coming late dear

Originally posted by: reeha...k

WOW! I just saw the post and there are over 20,000 views!

I don't know who all the readers are, but can I just give you guys a

big big big big big:

You guys are awesome, silent readers or vocal ones: I really apprecate it!😊

First of all, Congratulations! 🥳It was only possible because of you and your work! 👏 ⭐️

About the update ... Absolutely awesome! 😃
Love how both Manyata and Udayveer are confused! Manyata is slowly letting her guard down without even realising and Udayveer is starting to acknowledge the idea that he is actually in loveee 😳 Totally love it 😛

And that scene ... so passionate and personal despite the onlookers. Well, the only thing I can say 2 Majnu and J is Budi nazar wale tera mu kaala 😡

Awww... How Manyata was blushiing and DS knew something was going on. Soo tweet! 😳

Personally I reeally like how youve involved other characters too - a refreshing change.

Omg UV and Majnu face-off was too good yaar! Proper intense 👍🏼
But I cant u let Majnu have the last word 😒
*UV Style* Tsk tsk tsk, not fair ha Princess.
I really want to see UV get full revenge off Majnu for invading their privacy and spying on them.😡

Lovely update. You seriously have some magical writing powers ... I tell you!😃

Love,

Zunaira

Originally posted by: pri01

Hi Reeha meri jaan 🤗 sorry for coming late dear

Reeha each time I read your FF I run out of words to express myself...you write so beautifully dear and Part 11 is marvelous⭐️⭐️⭐️❤️❤️❤️ love every bit of it

Loved the way you described Manyata fighting with her inner feelings and slowly but steadily she is on her way to understand the true meaning of love.

What can I say about the kiss ... it was so sweet wow☺️☺️

Yeh J aur Akash always in wrong place at the wrong time😡😡 they witnessed ManVeer private moment anyway it's good at least they have sensed that ManVeer are soulmates.

Finally Manyata has accepted her family and loved UV and Akash confrontation

Waiting eargerly for the next chapter.

Hey Reeha I have a request hope you won't mind ...whenever Manyata will fall for her UV and ManVeer will be together I want a magical first kiss and I trust you on that😉...I know I am besharam😳😆

GAAAH!!! Priya!! I was waiting for you lovie!!!🤗

Originally posted by: -SweetDreams-

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And that scene ... so passionate and personal despite the onlookers. Well, the only thing I can say 2 Majnu and J is Budi nazar wale tera mu kaala 😡

Awww... How Manyata was blushiing and DS knew something was going on. Soo tweet! 😳

Personally I reeally like how youve involved other characters too - a refreshing change.

Omg UV and Majnu face-off was too good yaar! Proper intense 👍🏼
But I cant u let Majnu have the last word 😒
*UV Style* Tsk tsk tsk, not fair ha Princess.
I really want to see UV get full revenge off Majnu for invading their privacy and spying on them.😡

Lovely update. You seriously have some magical writing powers ... I tell you!😃

Love,

Zunaira

Thank you Zunaira (btw, that is a beautiful name!) Thanks! I know it's a little iffy having scenes with other secondary charecters, but I think it's important. Although, the core is still Manveer😉

I know! I'm sorry I gave Akash the Last word...but it was important..to get UV thinking.

Originally posted by: reeha...k

Hi Meera! 🤗 Thank you sooo much for reading and commenting.

First off: NEVER apologize for giving me your feedback- I will always respect it, and look into it. I understand that the Akash thing was hard to swallow, but I'll make up to it, promise😉.

Please do send me in your picture: just make sure it's indian, because I don't think I'm getting her in a western dress so soon. I actually had NOT planned anything for Valentines day (believe it or not, I don't think that far ahead for this, I just write what comes to me😆) BUT You have given me a GREAT idea- and I will most definatly oblige. I guess it will be part 13 then. So I better hurry up!😆. Thank you for helping me out!😊

Originally posted by: reeha...k

WOW! I just saw the post and there are over 20,000 views!

I don't know who all the readers are, but can I just give you guys a

big big big big big:

You guys are awesome, silent readers or vocal ones: I really apprecate it!😊

Originally posted by: tvlover92

Ahem. Part 11 Review:

It was Chiki. She looked at him with worried eyes, almost as large as the two orbs dominating her head.

ROFL, LMAO, LOL - worthy. You pick. 😆

*reading, reading...*

UV! *reading with more concentration and starting my live movie viewing in my imagination* Aww, she's totally JEALOUS! Adorable!

I can't tell if it's anger or if she's strongly trying not to jump my bones. I doubt it's the latter, but I hope it is.

LOL! Boys. *rolls eyes*

He looks at me, as if his eyes will utter the threat he can't seem to form verbally.

Me: What, nothing to say? If you have the gall to step in front of me, then have enough of it to follow through. What do you want to say?

I can't believe I have to encourage someone to speak up for what they want. Pathetic.

Reaction: 😆

*watching villain Majnu and hero Udayveer share a battle* NOOO! He wins?! After that awesome blow by blow from the hero, the villain wins?! 😒

DS! Aww, I love that woman! <3

After today's episode, don't have the heart to mock Jay... But for this dialogue, I am gonna give you a ⭐️:

Manyata: He's always wanted me Jainandini. And he always will.

And congratulations on the 20,000 posts. I hope you go beyond 50,000 as you conclude the story (which I hope never happens 😛 You can after all continue the story with UV Jr. 😎)

Awesome update!

TC.