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Nityah

@-StarlitFire-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#371

hey!
well...somehow i hadn't came across this ff earlier...my bad luck..
but now i have...so i have only few words to says...
its amazing,splendid,fantabulous,very very well written...
and the most amazing thing is its from POV of Uday...
as his character is with so many layers, you are doing an outstanding job by understanding it and penning it down here...
Coming upto the updates..
they are simply marvellous...
the flashbacks,the current scenorios all are very beautifully written..
and a the most amazing and my favourite one is the way you have shown the growth of Manveer's relationship...its so balanced...

In simple words, I am so in love with your ff...
plz continue soon...
thanx a lot for pm...

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Ziva01

@Ziva01

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+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#372

QUOTE=reeha...k]

Originally posted by: pri01
Hi Reeha meri jaan 🤗 sorry for coming late dear

Reeha each time I read your FF I run out of words to express myself...you write so beautifully dear and Part 11 is marvelous⭐️⭐️⭐️❤️❤️❤️ love every bit of it

Loved the way you described Manyata fighting with her inner feelings and slowly but steadily she is on her way to understand the true meaning of love.

What can I say about the kiss ... it was so sweet wow☺️☺️

Yeh J aur Akash always in wrong place at the wrong time😡😡 they witnessed ManVeer private moment anyway it's good at least they have sensed that ManVeer are soulmates.

Finally Manyata has accepted her family and loved UV and Akash confrontation

Waiting eargerly for the next chapter.

Hey Reeha I have a request hope you won't mind ...whenever Manyata will fall for her UV and ManVeer will be together I want a magical first kiss and I trust you on that😉...I know I am besharam😳😆

GAAAH!!! Priya!! I was waiting for you lovie!!!🤗

AND BTW, I'm soo obligiing your request, trust me, I know we'd never get an onscreen kiss, so IT WILL HAPPEN HERE!😆😳

I know everyone is upset about J and A seeing the moment, but trust me it was necessary! Plus there will be other private Manveer moments nah?😉

Hi Reeha 🤗 thxs for accepting my request😳 very true onscreen will never happen in the show and looking forward to it in ur amazing FF and as well as other private ManVeer moments. Believe me Reeha reading ur FF is like watching a movie for me I visualize each and every scene. You are a gifted-writer dear God Bless U.

Love u TC🤗🤗

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Manasi

@Manasi_16

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#373

WOW! Just WOW! It was sooo superb...I was living the whole part as if I was present there! You make all of them come alive😊

Thanks a lot!

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Jyoti

@bl.drama.lover

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#374

hey Reeha!!! thnks 4 the PM!!!😉

love it yaar u did another amazing job writing!!!👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ 5 stars 4 such great work really have no words the way u think as UV is jus great n makes me wonder wat if tht could happen jus leaves me imagining😍 it is just awesome seriously no jokes...😳

hope u keep writing like this n plzzz do PM would love to read more!!!😉

P.S. : sorry 4 late reply got caught up with college assignments so couldnt read until now anyways really it wonderfully reading it felt like it was actually happening jus could dream about it...😍